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Context: You're just another ghost in a city full of them, trying to do a little good. The man you are fated to cross paths with tonight is the opposite. It can never be.
Setting: A big, depressing city - 1940s
Tags:[M4F][Strangers to ?][Injured 1940s Gangster][Mysterious Cryptid Listener][1940s - Time Piece][Gang Tales][A City of Cryptids][Reverse Comfort][Healing][Surprise Reveal][Cliffhanger][Angst][TW: Violence/Stabbing/Mentions of Murder]
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[Scene opens in a big city in the 1940s]
[SFX: Powerful rain/ a faint confrontation]
[You are walking in the rain late at night. Your thoughts are heavy, as is the tension from a group of young man a bit up the street. You hear one young man in particular
āĀ”Ay, coƱo! You motherfuckers really want to go, huh?! Cāmon then! You aināt taking me out without a fucking fight!ā
[SFX: A fucking fight]
[You pause a block away, watching the scrappy young man throw fists like a madman, even lifting a garbage can and bashing another poor gent with it]
[Rec. improv for fighting. Eddie can actually speak English, Spanish and French, so feel free to make him a ballistic Duo Lingo Owl]
[...]
[The tension cracks at last as the firecracker lets out a harsh grunt of pain and topples back against the wall]
āAGH! Of course, with the stabbing! Stab me again, prick! CāMON!ā
[Pause!]
[At your yell, the other men flee, leaving their victim behind]
āY-Yeah, thatās right! Run! Ooghā¦ Cāmon, blood, stay inā¦ Daddy needs you in his veinsā¦ā
[SFX: Eddie slumping over with a groan]
[Pauseā¦]
[SFX: The Listener approaching him]
[The young man looks up at you. His eyes are unfocused and wild]
āHhā¦ Hhkā¦ Ughā¦ You a cop, pretty lady? Wait, are they letting ladies on, now? Man, I should tell my sister, if so. Bitch has a right hook way meaner than mine.ā
[Pauseā¦]
āHehā¦ No? Whatās a pretty, hhā¦ thing like you doing out here this late, huh?ā
[...]
āOho, you heard the scuffleā¦ Sorry. Iāll try and get stabbed quieter, next timeā¦ā
[You kneel by him and he recoils. Heās a frightened animal at this point, running on instinct]
āHey, hey, HEY! HEY! Back off! Iāll die when Iām good and fucking ready, you hear me?!ā
[Pauseā¦]
āWh-...? My nameā¦? Whatās it to you?ā
[Pause]
[SFX: The Listener gently messing with his shirt]
ā...Eddieā¦ Sā Eddieā¦ Or, Edward, I guessā¦ I donāt fucking know.ā
[Pause]
[He coughs again. It is an unfortunately wet cough]
āI, uhā¦ Yeah, I got jumpedā¦ Rival gang, probablyā¦ Didnāt exactly get a good look, you know?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[SFX: City ambiance/sad lofi, if desired]
āH-Heyā¦ How come youāre moving me, huh? Aināt nothing, hh, to be done nowā¦ Pretty sure he, nnh, hit something vitalā¦ And the hospital aināt gonna take me, not anymoreā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
[He rests against the wall, watching you helplessly as you search for the wound]
ā...I aināt see you āroundā¦. Hhā¦ beforeā¦ You new? Maybe from across the waters?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[He chuckles. Poorly]
āEhehā¦ Keep to yourselfā¦ I can respect it. Pretty lady like you? Bet the whole city would want a nibbleā¦ Nothing wrong with being the sort to enjoy their peace.ā
[...]
[SFX: More unfortunately wet shirt-peeling]
[Pause???]
āWhaddya mean āDo I always wear sheer white shirts in the rainā??? Fuck offā¦ Grown man, wear what he damn well pleases, rackum frackumā¦ā
[Pause~]
[He chuckles. Or tries to]
āYeah, well, you aināt the first lady to call me a spicy little hoodlumā¦ Ugh! Easy!ā
[Pause?]
āYeah, I reckon thatās the wound, consideringā you nearly poked your whole finger in it! Geezum Crow, lady, eeesh! You want a man to show his heart on his sleeve? Maybe donāt mean it literally!ā
[Pause]
āYes, as a matter of fact, I am always this angry. Anything else you wanna jaw about, sweetheart? Cause, I wonāt lieā¦ Having you to look at while I go aināt half bad.ā
[Pauseā¦?]
āW-What? My fatherā¦? What about him? Heā dead. Has been a long damned time.ā
[SFX: The rain picking up]
[Pauseā¦]
āSomething to talk about while you see if you can help, huhā¦? Iā¦ Rrgh, fineā¦ No point in taking the old manās secrets to the grave. He was a gangster, same as me. Hustled his whole life under a crooked fuck who promised him the world and then left him to die after a deal gone wrong. Man crawled his way out, managed to limp home, just so he could look my mother in the eye and say, āSusieā¦ I love you. Iām so sorryā, then died in her armsā¦ā
[...]
[He lets out a bitter chuckle]
āI wasā¦ eight. Mom was sick, she couldnāt workā¦ And losing Dad broke her. So, went to the fishing plant, got a jobā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
āPfft, donāt patronize me, lady. I donāt have time to be sad over itā¦ā
[...?]
ā...Would I have done things differently, if I couldā¦? Iā¦ I dunnoā¦ I saved up to try and buy a share of the plant, but then the man that killed my Dad came calling. Good olā Uncle Ramirezā¦ Told me that I should be killing people, not fish. Told him he was a dumbass and the fish came to us dead. So he had me beat, and then I joined, like it or not. Figured my silver lining was that Iād get to murder the son of a bitch one day but, wellā¦ā
[He gestures to his bloody chest with a wince]
āYou can probably gather heās a little hard to get toā¦ Eh, wellā¦ If Iām lucky, disease will take him, or one of the many people heās pissed off will get him. Bastard wonāt live forever, and the second I see him down there in the pits with me, hohoā¦ He is in for itā¦ā
[Pause]
[Heās quiet for a bit before you see his expression soften]
ā...Couldā¦ Could I ask a favorā¦?ā
[Pause?]
āYā¦You aināt gonna save me, Lady, Iāve lost way too much bloodā¦ Pleaseā¦ Please, Maās still alive, I-Iā¦ I donāt want her waiting up for a son thatās never coming homeā¦ Could you please let her know I aināt coming homeā¦? Please?ā
[SFX: A gentle hum]
[Pauseā¦]
āLook, it doesnāt matter if you say Iāll be fine in that soothing tone or not, youāre not going to-ā.
[SFX: A brief blip of magic and then the rain coming back in, a bit softer]
[Your power floods through him as heās properly distracted. He lets out a quiet grunt of surprise as the wound stitches shut and vitality returns]
āGuh! Uhā¦??? Waitā¦ā
[SFX: The Listener standing]
āW-Wait, the wound isā¦? You healed it!ā
[SFX: Him patting his chest wildly]
āHow in the fuckā¦?! WHY in the fuck???ā
[...]
[You look at him. He looks at you. He just seems to notice that the rain hasnāt impacted you at all]
ā...Waitā¦ The rain hasnātā¦ Youāre bone dryā¦ Agh..!ā
[Eddie stands with a bit of effort. By the time he has, youāre several feet farther away]
[...]
āHey! Where are you going?! Wait, donāt go!ā
[...]
[He doesnāt move closer, but he wants to]
ā...Whatā¦ Who are you?ā
[...]
[Pause]
ā...Folks just call you āThe Angelā, huhā¦? And you justā¦ have the power to heal people?ā
[...]
[Pause]
ā...I will go tell my mother I love her, yeahā¦ Butā¦ Will I see you again?ā
[...]
ā...I WANT to see you again.ā
[...]
[SFX: Wings unfolding]
[You turn and unfold your wings. You hear him gasp in shock, or something, before you take flight]
āWait-!ā
[You canāt]
[SFX: The Listener vanishing]
[To be continued?]
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