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[MM4A] Don't Talk to the Boy With the Scars Pt. 3 [Friends to More?][Mysterious Masked Boy Speaker][Judgmental Judge Speaker][Friendly New Kid Listener][Wholesome AF][A little spicy][Kissing][First Kiss][Domestic Bliss][Support][Comfort][Reverse Comfort][CW: Mention of Neglectful Parents]
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Part 1 Part 2 Part 4


Context: It was your first day at a new school, and the first words you heard after 'Welcome' were 'Don't talk to the boy with the scars!'. It was repeated by everyone, but no one would explain why. You decided to learn for yourself by bringing him his lunch, and... you made a friend! His name is Eli, and he's apparently the Devil himself. You... aren't so sure about that, though.

Setting: Eli's home/the Community Center/City-External

Tags:[MM4A][Friends to More?][Mysterious Masked Boy Speaker][Judgmental Judge Speaker][Friendly New Kid Listener][Wholesome AF][A little spicy][Kissing][First Kiss][Domestic Bliss][Support][Comfort][Reverse Comfort][CW: Mention of Neglectful Parents]

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[E] = Eli

[MB] = Mr. Brown


[Scene opens in Eliā€™s home]

[SFX: Bacon frying/footsteps]

[Youā€™re cooking breakfast in Eliā€™s kitchen, same as youā€™ve done the last few months, when you hear him sleepily plod in]

[Pause!]

[E] ā€œBlurgh, morning to you.ā€

[Pause <3]

[E] ā€œGuhhhh, yeah, yeah, happy three-month anniversaryā€¦ Have your parents even tried to reach out to you?ā€

[...]

[He sighs but doesnā€™t push it]

[E] ā€œ...Youā€™ll tell me if they do, right? From what youā€™ve told me, they might be the type to try something if they catch you aloneā€¦ā€

[SFX: Delicious, delicious scrambling of E G G]

[Pause]

[E, examining the newspaper] ā€œGood, thank you. Bacon and eggs, huh? Someoneā€™s in a good mood.ā€

[Pause!]

[He pauses before mask-palming himself]

[E] ā€œGodamnit, RIGHT! Right, Iā€™m demonstrating my printer tonightā€¦ I was almost too tired to remember and panic over itā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

[SFX: A plate being set down]

[E] ā€œThanksā€¦ Look, I know you think Iā€™m super amazing for some reason, but his whole town still thinks of me as the Devilā€¦ Mr. Brown is going to be judging every bit of tech submitted and Betsy is going in at a severe disadvantage.ā€

[Pause <3]

[SFX: Hair scritches]

[Eli grumbles as you scritch his scalp and ruffle his hair]

[E] ā€œQuiiiit, no playing with my hair or scratching my scalp. Cā€™mon, this is serious, I need a game plan. If my modified printer can even place, then I might have a chance at winning some real moneyā€¦ I could put that toward something really sick, you know?ā€

[Pause <3]

[SFX: The Listener sitting down with him to eat]

[E] ā€œ...Youā€™ve been really supportiveā€¦ and, while it weirds me out, I also appreciate it. I appreciate you helping with chores and shopping and are generally justā€¦ cool. Also, youā€™re the only person Iā€™ve met who isnā€™t afraid of Wuther.ā€

[Pause <3]

[E] ā€œIā€™m just saying, wolf spiders arenā€™t everyoneā€™s cup of tea. They just sit on you and have existential crises - adorable!ā€

[Pause <3]

[Pause - Fill with the consumption of breakfast, if desired]

[E] ā€œ...Iā€™m really sorry I couldnā€™t save up enough money to get you a ticket to the showing. The fact that theyā€™re such cheapskates that theyā€™d charge admission is so dumbā€¦ā€

[Pause <3]

[E] ā€œ...One of these days, Iā€™m gonna do something that pisses you off and youā€™re gonna be less nice to me. You know that, right?ā€

[Pause?]

[E] ā€œShurrup, you know what I meanā€¦ Look, I promise Iā€™ll grab some good food tonight on the way home, OK? I want to thank you for how great youā€™ve been. Does that sound alright?ā€

[Pause <3]

[E] ā€œCool. Sorry, again, that you canā€™t come. I reallyā€¦ really wish you could come, I promise. Would be nice to have someone cheering me on, eh? Feh. Whatever. Iā€™ll make it up to you, OK?ā€

[Pause?]

[E] ā€œUh, yeah. Itā€™s at the Community Center at eight.ā€

[Pause!]

[E] ā€œ...Pfft, dork. Cā€™mon, letā€™s finish eating. We have a monster movie marathon to finish.ā€

[Fade out on breakfast]

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Time Lapse - Twelve Hours

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[Scene reopens inside the Community Center]

[SFX: Quiet crowd chatter/the Listenerā€™s footsteps approaching the auditorium]

[You can faintly hear Eli speaking as you make your way through the Community Center, his voice growing a little louder as you approach]

[E] ā€œ-itā€™s a modification off of a 3D printer, but Iā€™ve rebuilt it to be able to more immediately print out stickers or adhesive patches. With more time to invest in programming, I could..."

[He pauses as you hurriedly take a seat]

[MB] "...Mr. Eli? You said that you could do something interesting with a modified printer?"

[Pause!]

[His mask turns in your direction. You flash him a thumbs up and clap enthusiastically]

[SFX: ā€¦ Eli continuing to demonstrate his device]

[E] ā€œA-And thatā€™s actually a good point, Mr. Brown. You asked ā€˜What good could a printer like this do?ā€™, right? Wellā€¦ How about a demonstration?ā€

[Mr. Brown eyes him warily but relents]

[MB] ā€œ...How do you intend to demonstrate this contraption of yours, Eliā€¦?ā€

[E] ā€œWell, if youā€™d allow meā€¦ I noticed that your daughter has been sad over her butterfly barrette all morning, hm? I might be able to fix it for you, for free, so you can go and play golf instead of having to take her home in time out. What do you say?ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[MB, a bit suspicious] ā€œ...Very well. Demonstrate.ā€

[E] ā€œCertainly. Judging by the tiara, Iā€™m guessing Iā€™m in the presence of royalty. Her Highness has a fine taste in a pastel pink with a white sparkle, so I shall do my best to match.ā€

[The little girl laughs in delight and Mr. Brown almost spares a smile. Almost. Eli runs a quick program and the printer zips and zooms along, spitting out something in under thirty seconds]

[SFX: The printer, if desired. Itā€™d sound like a mostly standard 3D printer, if so]

[E] ā€œThere we are. One magic butterfly, for her majesty.ā€

[Mr. Brown takes the sticker hesitantly but you can hear him emit a few impressed noises. His daughter, on the other hand, shrieks in delight]

[MB] ā€œWell! That, uh, is certainly impressive, Eli. Thank you for your demonstration. As I said with the others, you will receive a letter in the mail in a few months letting you know if your device placed or not.ā€

[Eli offers a polite bow]

[E] ā€œThank you. Itā€¦ was a pleasure, oddly enough.ā€

[SFX: Him wheeling a tech cart off stage/the Listener going to meet him]

[Pause!]

[E] ā€œ...Youā€™re here.ā€

[Pause!]

[E] ā€œYou saved up from your job? Just toā€¦?ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[E] ā€œAnd you missed a bit of my demo because of the job and youā€™re apologizing to meā€¦ despite doing all of that...ā€

[Pause?]

[He stands still for a moment, unreadable as ever. Mr. Brown continues to comment on other tech from the front - rec. Improv, if desired]

[E] ā€œ...They have a place to lock up my printer safely overnight so I donā€™t have to carry it all the way back home. Iā€™ve done that and, right now, I just want some fast food and fresh air."

[SFX: Eli and the Listener exiting the building/crickets chirping]

[He walks out and exits via a door tucked away in the back, right out into the cool night air. You follow and he wastes little time in turning and towering over you]

[...?]

[He towers over you silently]

[...?]

[SFX: The crickets chirping]

[E] ā€œ...Iā€™m not mad at youā€¦ Iā€™mā€¦ā€

[He struggles for a moment until you reach out to take his hand]

[SFX: Eli reacting to the Listenerā€™s touch]

[E] ā€œ...Wait, donā€™tā€¦ Donā€™t take my handā€¦ā€

[Pause??]

[E, sharp] ā€œBecause I donā€™t want to fucking hope, OK?!ā€

[...]

[E, remorseful] ā€œ....Sorryā€¦ Iā€¦ Iā€™m sorry I yelled at youā€¦ Itā€™s really not the right reaction to what Iā€™m feelingā€¦ā€

[...Pause?]

[He sighs and takes your hand, leading you away from the community center]

[E] ā€œCā€™mon, walk with meā€¦ We can grab something from Buckyā€™s on the way home.ā€

[...]

[E] ā€œ...You want to know how I feel? ā€¦ Like I want to risk ruining everything just to kiss youā€¦ Itā€™s bad enough that youā€™re living with me and my home is meant to be a safe space, but itā€™s worse still becauseā€¦ I would have to push the mask up. You would seeā€¦ all of me that makes me the Devil.ā€

[His voice quiets. Tiny by the time he manages to whisper:]

[E] ā€œ...I donā€™t want to lose you, Tabby.ā€

[...Pause]

[E, defeated] ā€œI know you just want me to feel safe and comfortable, tooā€¦ You care about me and itā€™s terrifying because if you leave, then Iā€™ll have to look at you, every day, and know that I fucked it all upā€¦ā€

[...?]

[E] ā€œ...What if you kissed me? Did you seriously just ask that?ā€

[Pause!]

[He hesitates, walking for a bit in silence before he steers you off the sidewalk and into an alleyway, pinning you against the wall]

[SFX: Kabedon aka the Listener getting pinned]

[...]

[E] ā€œ...Yeah, I pinned you to the wall in an alleyway at night. I know. Living up to my stereotypes.ā€

[Pause <3]

[He snorts]

[E] ā€œYes, I did wear cologne for this showā€¦ Listen to me, OK? If we kiss, right here, right nowā€¦ Iā€™m going to need time before deciding if I canā€¦ beā€¦ that. If I canā€™t, then donā€™t wait on me, OKā€¦? I donā€™tā€¦ā€

[Heā€™s fighting himself. Every inch of him is shaking]

[...Pause?]

[E] ā€œ...Iā€™m scaredā€¦ because hurt peopleā€¦ tend to hurt other peopleā€¦ and I donā€™t want to do that to you, I donā€™tā€¦.ā€

[Pauseā€¦?]

[E] ā€œ...Iā€¦ guess it can just be a low-stakes friend kiss, yeahā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

[E] ā€œ...Yeah, we canā€¦ just kiss as friends and then figure it out laterā€¦ I hadnā€™t thought of thatā€¦ā€

[Pause <3]

[He thinks about it for a moment or two before he exhales]

[E] ā€œ...OK. Shut your eyes.ā€

[SFX: The background ambiance/noises growing sharper as the Listener closes their eyes]

[Pause]

[E] ā€œ...Got them closed, nice and tight?ā€

[Pause.]

[E, almost whispering] ā€œ...Do you trust me?ā€

[...Pause <3]

[E] ā€œ...Alrightā€¦ Here. Iā€™ll lift the mask up enough to where my lips are free. All you have to do is lean up when I give the signal. Please, justā€¦ Please donā€™t look, OK? You promised.ā€

[Pause!]

[E] ā€œOK, OK! ā€¦ Umā€¦ So, just so you know, this is my first kiss-mmh!ā€

[You assume ā€˜kissā€™ is the signal and lean up, catching him slightly off guard. You donā€™t look, just as promised, and pull away after a moment]

[Pause <3]

[E, quiet] ā€œ...Are you OK? Iā€¦ Iā€™m missing some skin on the right corner of my lips, did itā€¦ feel gross?ā€

[Pause <3]

[SFX: Him adjusting his mask]

[E] ā€œ...You can open your eyes now. The mask is back on.ā€

[SFX: The audio adjusting for sensory changes, once more]

[You open your eyes and heā€™s still there, looming over you, mask blank]

[Pause?]

[E] ā€œ...It was a nice first kiss, yeahā€¦ Though I think I would have preferred it not next to three-day-old dumpster pizza.ā€

[Pause?]

[E] ā€œ...True. We could go home and try again on the couch while watching movies or something. It looks like itā€™s about to rain here, anyway, so cā€™mon. Letā€™s grab our heart attacks in bags and head home.ā€

[Pause <3]

[You go to walk away but he stops you with a gentle hand on your shoulder]

[E] ā€œBefore you goā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

[E, quiet and earnest] ā€œ...Thank you for keeping your promise.ā€

[Pause!]

[SFX: Fade out on approaching rain and then heading off to grab food]

[To be continued]

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