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Season 2:
Context: You were just trying to get in touch with your son, who's been missing for weeks now when you were taken from your home by an unknown assailant. Seems your son might be in with a bad crowd... one of whom appears to be quite the silver fox. You spoke with Aldo Mitzrati, who was rather surprised to find out who you were. There was chemistry you weren't expecting, and you agreed to a date to see if your son might get the hint that he needs to come home. Apparently, he did... at the worst possible time.
Setting: A university/the Pier
Tags:[MMMM4F][Mysterious Cop Speaker][Silver Fox Mobster Speaker][Son Speakers][Mother Listener][Reverse Comfort][Family Drama][Older Couple][Confession][Wholesome][He's Here][Time Skip][Healing Together][Mysterious Figure][CW: Mentions of Angst/Death/Inferred Abandonment Issues]
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[J] = Julian, your new son
[A] = Aldo Mitzrati, grade A Dad and lover
[D] = Danny, your son. Tormentor of Julian.
[F] = ???
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[Time Lapse - One Year Later]
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[Scene opens on the campus of a nice university]
[SFX: Campus ambience/students hurrying about]
[You stand with your family at a university campus, resting after the tour provided]
[D] âSo, whaddya think, Jules? Pretty nice campus and itâs nearby, eh?â
[J] âItâs nice⌠I really like the campus and the people seem friendly⌠b-but I canât afford it, even with scholarships and all⌠Iâm sorry, Ma⌠Sorry, Dad.â
[Pause <3]
[A] âJulian, did you really think Iâd offer to pay for Dannyâs school and not yours?â
[J] âB-But I-!â
[A] âNuh-uh. You busted your ass to get your GED and youâve held down a job the whole time. Youâre my son, too. You deserve to go to school and enjoy your damned youth for a bit before your back starts aching, hehe.â
[Julian looks away, eyes glistening. You draw him close and he cries into your arms]
[Pause <3]
[J] âI know you love me! I know⌠It scares me⌠What if⌠What if I remind you of him and you donât want me around any more??â
[...]
[D] â...I donât know how you told him you love him at the end there, Ma⌠and I donât know how you gave him a kind burial⌠I guess you just have more class than us, huh?â
[PauseâŚ]
[A, stern] âDanny⌠Sheâs still hurting, câmon⌠and I know you are, too, despite the macho act.â
[D] â...Yeah, well⌠I got a way better Dad, at least. And a happier Ma.â
[A, laughing] âOh yeah? You got a better Dad, huh? When do I get to meet him?â
[SFX: Danny slugging Aldoâs arm]
[D, laughing] âFuck you! I donât see a ring on her finger so donât you go getting all mighty.â
[Aldo winks at you and you smile back]
[Pause <3]
[J] â...You promise? You promise you wonât send me away?â
[D] âNo one's gonna send you away, Jules. Youâre my brother, til the end, and Iâll start swinging on anyone that says otherwise!â
[A] â...As much as I never thought Iâd be in this position, youâre my son, too, Julian. Iâm proud of you. Proud of all of you. Of us! God knows it started out rough-â.
[D, grumpily] â-cause ya Judo-flipped me.â
[A] â-BECAUSE⌠of the circumstances that we all met under. And, in the words of your generation, Daniel⌠âGet goodâ.â
[Julian muffles a laugh against your shoulder and you pat his back]
[J] â...Iâm so lucky⌠I couldnât have stumbled into a nicer family, thank you so much!â
[He hugs Aldo, who grunts in surprise but affectionately ruffles his hair]
[A] âHmhm, I dunno⌠Imagine if a pirate found you? Or a prince?â
[J] âFuck âem. I love you guys.â
[Danny fakes some gagging noises before you grab him by the ear and pull him into the hug]
[D] âErgh, emotions, HUAGH-OW! Ma, my ear! Ow, ow, ow, OK, fine, Iâm hugging, Iâm hugging! Rackum frackum, making me have emotionsâŚâ
[Pause <3]
[Dannyâs quiet for a moment before he earnestly smiles at you]
[D] â...There were a lot of times where I gave you every reason in the world to give up on me, Ma⌠When I sided with Dad, every time I gave you shit or argued with you, when I ran away⌠but you never did. I wouldnât have blamed you⌠I wouldâve deserved whatever he did⌠but you stayed my Mom through it all. And⌠I guess Iâm trying to say I love you, even when you yank on my ear or date my boss.â
[Pause~]
[A] âEx-boss~â.
[Danny rolls his eyes]
[D] âYeah, yeah⌠Thanks for letting me take time to, you know⌠Work through school⌠and therapy.â
[A] âWhat can I say, I enjoy spoiling my family! Honestly, you two boys are lucky your grandma didnât bury you in gifts, hmhm.â
[J, smiling] âI like Mrs. Mitzrati. Sheâs nice.â
[D] âUntil you sass herâŚâ
[A] âI told you she was quick on the chancla, Daniel. Fastest slipper in New York! But she does love to spoil family, same as me⌠Speaking of, she gifted us a little surprise for tonight. To celebrate her grandsons both getting accepted to prestigious universities!â
[Pause??]
[A] âNot sure what it is, my lady love. She simply said it was something we all could enjoy and to go to the pier tonight.â
[D] âSheâs gonna throw me to the sharks, I bet you anything!â
[J] âSharks are babies! They just wanna swim and get confused!â
[D] âEnh, tell it to Mr. Kernel⌠fucking corn snake, canât believe you just drape on your arm and expect me to pet him!â
[J] âYouâll give in. No one can resist the cute little tongue!â
[Aldo chuckles and nods his head to the side]
[A] âWhy donât you go and get all the university goodies before we head off, you two, hm? May as well.â
[D & J] âYes, sir!â
[SFX: Your boys hurrying off and, occasionally, shoving one another. Aldo puts an arm around you, voice gentle]
[A] âIâm glad you found a therapist that works for you, Sugar Mama. You didnât deserve to carry that guilt with you the rest of your life.â
[...]
[A, sympathetic] âI know you wish heâd gotten help, I know. I know, at the end of the day, itâs hard to let go of someone you loved⌠But it was us or him. If Iâd been in a position to do it, I swear I wouldâve done anything to spare you that painâŚâ
[Pause <3]
[He kisses your temple as life goes on about you. Your sons are playfully bonding still, and the breeze is nice]
[A] â...I love you. As far as Iâm concerned, you are the love of my life. I just hope I might have a snowflakeâs chance in Hell of being yours.â
[Pause <3 <3 <3]
[He laughs as you return his affection]
[A] âCanât ask for much more than that and all that sweet, sweet sugar you put into every kiss, hm? Câmon, letâs go and grab some food. You know the boys are gonna be hungrier than vengeful tigers by the time we all meet up.â
[SFX: The Listenerâs phone buzzing]
[For the twentieth time that week your phone buzzes and an unknown number pops up]
[Pause!]
[A] âSame unknown number? Twentieth damned time this week! I guess cold-callers are getting even more persistent, yeah? Just ignore it, sweetheart.â
[SFX: Get blocked, idiot]
[Pause?]
[A] âWhat was I talking about? Oh⌠Right! Mmhm, I didnât know animals could actually BE vengeful until Julian told me about a male tiger who saw his mate get killed, found the hunter and put him under. Thatâs the kind of animal science I can get behind!â
[Pause?]
[A] âHeh. No, I really donât know what the Mitzrati Matriarch got us. Knowing her, itâs probably something absolutely insane, like a-â.
[Fade Out, because comedy]
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Time Lapse - Seven Hours
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[Scene opens back at the Pier]
[SFX: Ocean waves rolling in and out]
[Later that evening, the four of you stand before the pier, looking at grandmaâs âgiftâ. Aldo is the first one to speak:]
[A, taken aback] â...a boat.â
[D] âGRANDMA BOUGHT US A MOTHERFREAKING BOAT!!!â
[J] âOh man⌠Iâve always wanted to go on a boat⌠A-And look, she named it the S.S. Sugar Mama! And hung up fairy lights! Itâs so pretty!!â
[...Pause <3]
[Aldo shakes his head with a laugh]
[A] âI swear⌠Well, go on boys. Give the ship a proper inspection, hm? Your mother and I will hang back a bit.â
[Pause?]
[SFX: The boys starting to head off but kinnnnda dragging it on because theyâre nosey]
[A] âI know you wanna see the boat, too, sweetheart. I just gotta ask one question first, OK?â
[Pause?]
[Aldo descends to one knee, hiding it with a slight wince. You hear Danny gasp and Julian let out an excited squeal]
[J] âItâs hApPeNiNg!â
[D] âShh, shut up! Donât ruin his mojo! Took me forever to convince him that that was the right ring!â
[Aldo shoots an annoyed look at Danny but keeps his ever earnest smile as he produces a ring box and opens it. Your son was right on the money]
[Pause <3 <3 <3]
[A] âMiss⌠Would you make me a lucky, lucky man, and do me the honor of being my wife?â
[...]
[The ocean swells around you and the boat. Your sons watch with bated breath. But before you can give your answer a familiar yet long forgotten voice calls out]
[F] âHold on a second, Mister. Youâre meant to get the fatherâs blessing before you go proposing.â
[Aldo frowns and you both turn to the interloper]
[A] âSorry, but who the Hell are you? I donât recall inviting any officers to this private function.â
[...]
[Reality slips away from you as you turn to see who would intrude on such a nice moment]
[Pause!!]
[D] âWait-â.
[J] âDid she just call that guy-?â
[A] âYouâre⌠youâre her father?!â
[To be continued⌠in Season 2 :P]
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Note: I love yâall but Season 2 is gonna take some time and Iâm gonna write other things in the interim. Plenty more stories already here and plenty to come but, do not fret! The boys and Sugar Mama will be back.
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