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Context: You were just trying to get in touch with your son, who's been missing for weeks now when you were taken from your home by an unknown assailant. Seems your son might be in with a bad crowd... one of whom appears to be quite the silver fox. You spoke with Aldo Mitzrati, who was rather surprised to find out who you were. There was chemistry you weren't expecting, and you agreed to a date to see if your son might get the hint that he needs to come home. Apparently, he did... at the worst possible time.
Setting: Home/Out and About
Tags:[MMMM4F][Abusive Ex Mobster Speaker][Silver Fox Mobster Speaker][Son Speakers][Mother Listener][Reverse Comfort][Family Drama][Older Couple][Confession][Wholesome]to[Horror][Comedy][He's Here][Yandere?][Hard Angst][TW: Abusive Character]
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[J] = Julian, your new son
[A] = Aldo Mitzrati, grade A boyfriend
[D] = Danny, your son. Tormentor of Julian.
[L] = Lorenzo O'Brian, your ex-husband
[Scene opens at home]
[SFX: A TV show playing - Maury-esque drama noises]
[You sit and watch some silly show with your boys. Aldo has his arm around you while Danny and Julian make bets on-]
[D] âNot the father!â
[J] âHe so is!â
[SFX: A crowd losing their minds]
[D] âHA! Câmon, Jules. âIâve Slept with 94 Men and Donât Know Who the Daddy Isâ? CâmoooonâŚâ
[J, pouting] âSheâs been on the show almost ninety-nine times! Itâs gonna happen! Statistics says so!â
[A, with a whistle] âWhew, that chair flew far!â
[Pause!]
[A] âLord. Havenât seen a chair fly that far since my sisterâs first wedding.â
[D] âHard to imagine you with siblingsâŚâ
[A] âHard to imagine you as a Dad. Fortunately for all of us that you arenât gonna be one just yet, hmm?â
[Pause]
[D, sheepish] âYeah⌠Thanks for telling me the truth, Jules. It was a huge load off⌠And, uh, sorry I blew up initiallyâŚâ
[J] âItâs OK⌠It was a lot⌠Iâm just glad things have quieted downâŚâ
[Pause??]
[D] âHe told me in the store when we went off together to find him a bed⌠I told him I was gonna grab a pool noodle and bop him for lying. Security nearly got called and enh⌠Just donât be surprised if you see my picture up on the customer service wallâŚâ
[...]
[Danny smiles sheepishly at you]
[D] âEheh⌠Mmh. I love you, Ma!â
[Pause.]
[D, pouting] âFine, Iâll apologize to the owner⌠Rackum frackumâŚâ
[J, with a quiet giggle] âNerd.â
[D] âThatâs it! Câmere!â
[SFX: The boys roughhousing playfully]
[A, a bit stern but laughing] âBoys! Câmon, we need to focus. And donât think I didnât see you winding up for that Charlie Horse, Daniel. Technical foul.â
[D] âAww!â
[J] âI mean⌠I donât know w-what else we can do, Mr. Mitzrati⌠Dadâs completely ghosted the areaâŚâ
[Pause]
[A] âYes⌠We havenât seen Lorenzo since the Fair and that was nearly five months ago⌠Heâs avoiding my people pretty expertly, so keeping tabs on him has been rough. Still, I expected more⌠aggression. More movement. More⌠something.â
[...]
[J] âHe hasnât texted or called since the night we met, noâŚâ
[D] âHe hasnât reached out to me eitherâŚâ
[You exchange a glance with Aldo who immediately does his best to smile]
[A] âIâm not fool enough to hope heâs given up⌠but it just isnât sitting right with me. Something is offâŚâ
[Pause?]
[He shakes his head with a small smile]
[A] âWeâre as ready as we can be, Miss⌠May as well just enjoy the quiet time we do get.â
[D] âYo, speaking of, you still gonna take Julian out to practice driving tomorrow, Ma?â
[Pause!]
[SFX: Unhappy Julian noises]
[D] âAw, câmon, Jules! Driving ainât so bad⌠Plus, fast food for dinner! Canât beat that.â
[J] â...Yeah, I guess⌠Itâll be nice to hang out with you, Ma-...Maâam.â
[Pause <3]
[A] âWhat are Danny and I doing? Mmh, Iâm gonna take him around to the culinary schools in the area, then come home and eagerly await some fast food, probably.â
[Pause <3]
[Aldo laughs and offers a little affectionate smooch]
[A] âMmh, love you, too.â
[SFX: Fill-in with TV show nonsense]
[A] â...Really? Nothing from the peanut gallery?â
[J] âI still think itâs sweet.â
[D, grumped] âJust donât let me catch you two going at it⌠Like teenagers, I swearâŚâ
[You and Aldo laugh. Itâs a nice moment, all things considered]
[D] âSeriously! Bleh⌠Whatever. Jules, donât sweat driving. Maâs got the patience of a Saint. Youâll be fine.â
[J] âYeah?â
[You assure Julian everything is fine]
[Pause! <3]
[He smiles bashfully]
[J] âWell⌠Iâll do my best to not screw up my first time doing a fast food drive thru, I guessâŚâ
[A] âYouâve got this, kid, donât you worry. And, hey, when you get home, maybe Danny will be gracious enough to make a cake or something.â
[D] âVolunteer me, why donât ya⌠Yeah, sure, why not. Second you two get home tomorrow, thereâs gonna be a Hell of a surprise waiting!â
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[Time Skip - Tomorrow - Later Afternoon
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[Scene re-opens in the car]
[SFX: The car idling/drive-thru delightfulness]
[You sit next to Julian as he navigates a drive-thru for the first time]
[J] âA-And could I also get two Number 11 meals, no pickles, please?â
[SFX: Drive-thru static]
[J] âAwesome, thanks⌠UhâŚâ
[Pause]
[J] âRight, yes, drive around to the first window. Yes.â
[SFX: A car carefully winding around]
[Pause <3]
[J, grumbling] âDoesnât feel like Iâm doing great⌠First time in a drive-thru and Iâm stammering like a babyâŚâ
[Pause <3]
[He smiles but itâs a little guarded]
[J] â...Youâre so nice to me⌠Mom took off the second I was born but⌠everyone always said a good mother would be more like youâŚâ
[...Pause?]
[J] âA-Adopt me??? Really?â
[Pause! <3]
[He beams as he shakily hands over your card to the surly teen manning the cash register. You nod in solidarity to him. He nods back]
[J] âThanks, have a good one, s-sir!â
[SFX: Car go brrrr to food window]
[He pulls up, practically bouncing with excitement]
[J] âHi! Yes, that was our order. Yuh-huh, yep, no pickles. Iâm getting adopted! WOO!â
[You smile. Some of the people in the restaurant cheer faintly for him and the girl handing out food smiles]
[Pause!]
[J] âThanks! Have a good day!â
[SFX: Car go BRRRR-]
[As you both drive off, you check the receipt and realize something-]
[Pause <3]
[J] âHuh? The girl wrote her phone number on the receipt? Thatâs weird⌠Why would a young lady be hitting on you like that? N-Not that you arenât pretty, I just-â.
[Pause.]
[J] âOhâŚâ
[...]
[J] â...OH!â
[Pause <3]
[He turns red, laughing nervously]
[J] â...Wow⌠I just⌠Wow. I d-donât have to decide just yet, right? C-Cause I want to! I really do! I justâŚâ
[Pause <3]
[He exhales as you rest a hand on his shoulder gently]
[J] â...Thanks⌠I really⌠REALLY appreciate you⌠Um⌠Can IâŚ?â
[Pause <3]
[He beams again, voice shaking]
[J] â...I really appreciate you⌠Mom.â
[Pause <3]
[SFX: Car go BRRR all the way home]
[You and Julian laugh all the way home, even as he nearly hits the curb trying to park]
[J] âOh shit! ⌠Did I hit the curbâŚ?â
[...Pause]
[J] âOh thank Christ. I donât need any bad news right now after the afternoon I had. Plus, fast food for dinner! WOO!â
[Pause <3]
[SFX: Greasy bags of heart attacks rattling]
[J] âYeah, I got the bags if you can get the door. Thanks!â
[SFX: Footsteps/keys/a door being unlocked and opened]
[You manage to get the front door open after a bit of a strongarm approach and make sure the door is open for Julian. You donât even realize youâre being watched until a familiar, terrifying voice murmurs:]
[L] âWelcome home, dear.â
[...]
[SFX: Some of the bags spilling/crashing]
[J] âDâŚDadâŚâ
[L] âHello, Julian. Nice to see youâre alive after nearly half a yearâŚâ
[Julian lets out a quiet gasp behind you, even as you move to protect him]
[PauseâŚ]
[L] âPlease, come inside. Sit down⌠I had Daniel prepare a nice dinner for us all before he went away⌠You were right, my dear. He is quite talented in the kitchenâŚâ
[...]
[SFX: A gun cocking]
[You freeze as he holds a gun up, nonchalantly as anything]
[L, coldly] âAnd please donât tell my son to run and get help. Donât insult my intelligence like that. Julian, you and I are going to have a chat later, by the way...â
[J] âW-What did you do with Danny and Mr. Mitzrati?!â
[Your ex sighs once more]
[L] âI relocated those two to a⌠safer place, weâll say. Iâve been allowing that man to fill my spot for long enough. Youâve had your fun. Now, itâs time to stop acting out like this and come home.â
[Pause?!]
[L] âOh, sweetheart. You think some silly restraining order and a divorce is going to keep me away? I will give you credit for evading me for so many years, of course. You always were my smart girl.â
[Pause.]
[He smiles pleasantly, as though youâve tossed a well-meaning jest back at him]
[L] âOh, but you are âmy girlâ. You never stopped being that.â
[J] âY-Youâre sick, treating her like this!â
[SFX: The gun firing]
[Julian yelps and you shield him. The bullet rockets only a few inches past you]
[PauseâŚ]
[L] â...The adults are talking, Julian. That time, I missed on purpose. You know how good my aim is, so be a good boy, sit down, and shut your yap, hm?â
[...]
[Julian breaks down into silent sobs as he sits down, eyes on the ground]
[SFX: The couch creaking / Julian reacting]
[L] â...You always were so soft on our son, you know? Always encouraging him and protecting him, never letting him stand on his own when it mattered. And now youâre doing it to Julian, hm?â
[...]
[L] âNot going to dignify that? Very well⌠What happened to Aldo and Danny,hmm⌠Well, Danny got in one swing and about twenty curse words in under ten seconds before he dropped. Mr. Mitzrati⌠admittedly was tougher. Had to threaten Danny before he finally gave up.â
[Pause!]
[Your ex holds up a hand for silence]
[L] âI didnât actually harm Daniel, dear. Calm downâŚâ
[...]
[His eyes sweep over you, head to foot]
[L] â...The years have been good to you. Still just as beautiful as the day we met. Thereâs so much that I missed about you during these long, miserable years⌠Really, I thought I could just bury my head in work and move on but⌠I do miss you. Every day.â
[Pause!]
[Heâs taken aback for a moment before he laughs, nearly to the point of tears]
[L] âMmh, I see youâve gotten a bit more fire in you! Ooh, I like it⌠Something to explore once youâre home, loveâŚâ
[...]
[L] âOh, you know what Iâll do if you refuse⌠Or, at least, you think you do. Tell me, my sweet, darling wife, whatâs my move going to beâŚ? Will I shoot Julianâs knees out and make you watch him bleed out? Will I order my men to mutilate Danny or Mr. Mitzrati? Or will it be so much worseâŚ?â
[J, scared] âMom⌠Donât go with him, please!â
[...]
[J] âMom, no!â
[L, smiling pleasantly] âYou have my word that no one gets hurt if you come with me, nice and quiet. See, thatâs all I wanted, sweetheart! Just for you to behave yourself⌠Julian, go get in the car. I canât have you being a hero.â
[J, sobbing] âPleaseâŚâ
[PauseâŚ]
[J] âI DO trust you! I donât want him to hurt you!â
[L] âJulian, please⌠I am a perfect gentleman. Now⌠Car. Move it.â
[SFX: Julian shuffling off, weeping]
[You shudder as he rests a hand on your shoulder, breath in your ear]
[L] âDonât fret, my dear. Donât fret. Youâll feel so much better once youâre home, and we can be a family againâŚâ
[...]
[SFX: Fade out on car going BRRR but second act low point style]
[To be continued]
Note: Sorry to all those that thought Lorenzo was gonna be an unhinged yandere stereotype.
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