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Notes: This script is okay for monetization. Can be used on Patreon, just let me know if you do. If you use it, please give credit. You can change pronouns if preferred but otherwise please don't edit the script. My scripts are meant for adult audiences and all characters are 18 . For clarification on the format of the script, any place that says (Pause) is a place for the Listener's response. Anything in \asterisks and italics** isn't meant to be read aloud, it's there to either hint at the tone or provide context that might help the script make more sense.
Summary: When Listener and Narrator attend a casual house party, alcohol and s'mores loosen Narrator's tongue enough that their feelings slip out.
Word Count: Approximately 915 words (Not including any actions or cues left in asterisks and italics)
Writer’s Notes: It's been a while since I've written a good beginner script and this one ended up being a nice mental exercise for me! It's an older script that I found and decided to finish. It's both caused and solved some writer's block, in a weird way that I don't know how explain. But also, hey! Time for some fun autumn scripts (no I don't care that it's 86 degrees outside rn, just let me have this.) Hope you enjoy!
Script Below:
\Music plays from inside the house, but it’s muffled to Listener, who is sitting in the backyard by the fire pit. There’s a few other people around the fire, but their voices are quiet. Footsteps trudge through the grass before Narrator sits down next to them.**
"Found you! Ugh, finally! I've been looking for you forever!"
(Pause)
"Huh? Why would I call you? We're at the same party, that would be stupid."
(Pause)
"I mean, sure, I would have found you sooner, but that would seem stupid to call you when you’re just in the backyard. It would make it look like I couldn't find you."
(Pause)
\Stumbling over their own flawed logic** “Well, yeah, I was having trouble finding you, but I didn't want anyone to know that! I didn’t wanna look like an idiot.”
\Listener sarcastically replies that they already looked like an idiot, and that asking for help couldn’t have made them look any more stupid. Narrator laughs.**
“Shut up! I’m not stupid, you’re stupid! You’re the one who made yourself so hard to find!”
(Pause)
“Yeah, yeah, whatever. Gimme your drink, I wanna try it.”
\Narrator laughs before stealing Listener’s cup and taking a drink. Narrator splutters.**
“Oh, that’s bad. Ew. I hated that. What kind of drink is that anyway?”
(Pause)
“Well, I forgot to ask before I drank it, alright? How was I supposed to know it was nasty?!”
(Pause)
“I don’t know! You could’ve told me before I grabbed your cup!”
(Pause)
“Alright, fine, maybe I didn’t give you a chance to, but still! It’s gross!”
(Pause)
“Ugh, hush, I know! Now help me find something to get the taste out of my mouth!”
(Pause)
“Yeah, I’m serious! C’mooon, help meeee!”
(Pause)
“Oh, shit! They have s’mores?! Hell yeah, give me one! Gimme gimme gimme!”
(Pause)
“Right, yeah, gotta cook the marshmallow or whatever. Here, lemme do it.”
(Pause)
“Why not?!”
(Pause)
“You’re just being dramatic! I’m not that drunk. Just give me the marshmallow!”
(Pause)
“Okay, fine. But just because I’m tired and wanna warm up by the fire. You can be the one to do all the work for me.”
\Listener rolls their eyes and Narrator laughs.**
“And I’m gonna cuddle up to you while you do it because you’re just as warm as the fire, but like, way more comfortable.”
(Pause)
\Teasing** “What, are you gonna stop me from cuddling you?”
(Pause)
“Ha ha! Cuddles always win! Especially from me, since I’m so damn cute!”
(Pause)
“Hey! Don’t be mean! You know I'm cute, admit it!"
(Pause)
"Admit it! I'm cute and you know it!”
(Pause)
"Just say that I'm cute and I'll be quiet!"
(Pause)
\Victorious** “Damn right I am!”
(Pause)
"Fine, I’ll sit here and be quiet. Just please make me a s'more. Please?”
(Pause)
“Thank you.”
\Narrator hums a song for a while as they wait for Listener to finish.**
“Are you done? Sweet!”
(Pause)
“Oh my god, it looks so good! Give me it!”
(Pause)
“Fine, please give me it.”
\Narrator laughs.**
“Thank you, love you so much~"
(Pause)
“Mm, oh my god I love s’mores so much.”
\Narrator continues to eat the s’more.**
“Holy shit, this is so good. You are so good at making s’mores.”
(Pause)
“Still! This is like, the best s’more I’ve ever had. It’s literally perfect. I’m in love with this s’more.”
(Pause)
“Mm. Seriously, this is blowing my mind. You should marry me so you can make me s’mores like this all the time.”
(Pause)
“Yeah, really. This? This is heaven. Just marry me and make these for me while we cuddle by a fire, and I’ll love you forever.”
(Pause)
“Mhm, yeah, obviously. It’s a win-win. I get s’mores, and I get to marry you.”
(Pause)
“Oh. Well, it’s two wins for me, so it’s still a win-win.”
(Pause)
“Then you get… Hm… You can have my love. Well, I mean, you already have it, but you can have even more.”
(Pause)
“Whatcha mean?"
(Pause)
"Well yeah, obviously. I love you so much, it's honestly kind of ridiculous. Seriously, how have I gone years with this huge crush on you? You'd think I would’ve gotten the nerve to quit joking around and tell you, but nope! Still just standing beside you, all tongue-tied and stupidly in love. Watching you date people who just come into your life and leave. How do they even get the courage to do it? To just walk up to you and ask you out? I get dizzy just thinking about looking you in the eyes and telling you that I wanna be more than friends.”
(Pause)
“I mean, what’s not to love? You’re so supportive and help me out when I need it. You’re funny and sarcastic, and you always know how to make me laugh. Talking to you is super fun, and I love listening to everything you have to say.”
(Pause)
“‘Course I mean it. You’ve been my friend forever, and I know every part of you. I know that I love every part of you. Just like I loved every part of that s’more. Because you’re like a s’more.”
(Pause)
“Yeah, you totally are!”
(Pause)
“Because you’re sweet like chocolate, and warm like marshmallows, and uh…you’re… You’re strong like graham crackers!”
(Pause)
“Yeah they are! You ever tried to break a graham cracker right along that line down the middle? It never works! Because they’re strong as hell! Like you!”
\Narrator laughs happily.**
“So, yep! You’re exactly like a s’more! Which is why I love s’mores so much! Speaking of which, can you make me another? Pleeaassee?”
(Pause)
“Yay! Thank you, again!”
\Listener, still surprised, makes another s’more. There’s silence for a few moments before Narrator yawns and snuggles closer to Listener.**
“I’m just cuddling up to you more. I’m getting sleepy, and you’re sooo warm and cozy~”
(Pause)
\Getting more and more drowsy** “Warm n’ soft, just like a marshmallow.”
(Pause)
“Hm? No, no, I’m awake…”
(Pause)
“Yeah, really… I’m totally awake…”
(Pause)
“I’m just… Just a lil sleepy. But I’m awake…”
(Pause)
“Nooo, don’t stop! I still want my s’more…”
(Pause)
“But… But my s’more…”
(Pause)
“Yeah? You promise?”
(Pause)
“Hm... But I want more than one. Will you make me more than one?”
(Pause)
“Uh… I don’t know. Maybe like, five?”
(Pause)
“Yeah, five. I want you to make me five s’mores.”
(Pause)
“Alright, then I’m gonna fall asleep now, so you can eat the s’more you’re making right now. But when I wake up, it’s s’mores time, okay?”
(Pause)
“Yaaayyy~”
(Pause)
“Mhm, very excited.”
\Narrator yawns.**
“Alright, then I’m just gonna… lean on ya like this… and just…”
\Narrator yawns again and falls silent, drifting into sleep. The audio can either end here or can continue into a sleep aid with fire sounds/outdoor ambience/breathing sounds/etc.**
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