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Context: You were just trying to get in touch with your son, who's been missing for weeks now when you were taken from your home by an unknown assailant. Seems your son might be in with a bad crowd... one of whom appears to be quite the silver fox. You spoke with Aldo Mitzrati, who was rather surprised to find out who you were. There was chemistry you weren't expecting, and you agreed to a date to see if your son might get the hint that he needs to come home. Apparently, he did... at the worst possible time.

Setting: Home/the State Fair

Tags:[MM4F][New Son Speaker][Silver Fox Mobster Speaker][Son Speaker][Mother Listener][Reverse Comfort][Family Drama][Older Couple][Confession][Wholesome][Comedy][Family Cuteness][VERY SPICY][Patreon Addtl Scene][Soft Angst][TW: Mentions of Murder]

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[J] = Julian, your new son

[A] = Aldo Mitzrati, grade A boyfriend

[D] = Danny, your son. Tormentor of Julian.

[Scene opens in the Listener’s home]

[SFX: Hammering]

[You are working on setting up Julian’s room with Aldo. The boys are out, so it’s just you and him. He steps back from the couch, panting and grumbling]

[A] “Lord, putting this desk together is making me feel ancient! I swear, furniture was easier to put together back when you had to cut down the damned tree yourself… Nngh, has my back all tensed up!”

[Pause?]

[A] “No, Sugar Mama, I’m alright. Just gonna go sit down in the study for a second or two, see if that old armchair can set it straight, then I promise we’ll get Julian’s room all squared away..”

[Pause]

[SFX: Aldo padding out, maybe cursing under his breath a little]

[He walks out with a few grumbles. You set down your screwdriver and follow]

[SFX: Aldo flopping in armchair]

[A] “Phew… There we go…”

[Pause <3]

[A] “Huh? Oh!”

[He tenses then immediately relaxes when you start rubbing his back]

[Pause? <3]

[A] “Muhh… no, keep rubbing my back… That feels incredibly nice…”

[Pause <3]

[His head flops back against the chair with a groan]

[A] “Oh, yes… That hits the spot, mmh! Haven’t gotten a good massage in years… You are too good to me, my dear, you know that?”

[Pause?]

[A] “Why didn’t I ask? Aw, sweetheart, you’ve had enough on your plate with the boys, your ex… What kind of man would I be if I tried to demand your attention with everything else going on?”

[Pause <3]

[He grumbles but returns your kiss]

[A] “I know, I know, I’m being patriarchal and old-fashioned… I want to take care of you, Miss. Having you take care of me feels all sorts of wrong right now, back massage or not. Hell, I should-mmh??”

[...]

[SFX: The chair creaking]

[You sit in his lap and continue the kiss. He hesitates before eagerly returning it, arms wrapping around your waist]

[A] “...should let you sit in my lap and keep kissing me, apparently… Yes ma’am~”.

[Pause <3]

[He smiles at you, eyes twinkling mischievously]

[A] “So… we’re two parents with barely any time for each other between our boys. Our boys, who are out decoration shopping for the next few hours… However shall we pass the time, Miss?”

[...Pause <3]

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Time Lapse - An hour or two

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[SFX: The front door swinging open and then shutting]

[D] “Ma, we’re home! You and Mr. Mitzrati better still have clothes on!”

[Aldo giggles and you giggle with him]

[A] “C’mon, Miss… Back to the parenting life, eh?”

[D, suspicious] “You two are smiling at each other more than usual…”

[Pause <3]

[A] “We’re a happy couple, Daniel. Nothing suspicious about that.”

[Your boys exchange looks but Danny, fortunately, drops it]

[D] “We got stuff for Julian’s room. Guy has no taste but what can you do?”

[J] “Danny…”

[Pause]

[D] “I AM being nice to my brother, Ma, c’mon! Look, he had a really good idea. Tell ‘em, Jules.”

[J, shy] “...Well… Dad mentioned that the State Fair was coming up and that it might be a good spot to snag you if I couldn’t manage it at Mr. Mitzrati’s house… I reckon he’ll check there, since he hasn’t heard back from me…”

[Pause <3]

[Julian turns scarlet as you praise him]

[J] “N-No, I… I’m not that smart… It’s just an idea, you know?”

[Pause <3]

[A] “Sugar Mama’s right. It’s a damned good idea, Julian, and one I think we should take advantage of… Let me call my security personnel ahead of time.”

[J] “Wait… Does that mean-?”

[D] “We’re going to the Fair! WOO!”

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[Scene Transition - The State Fair]

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[SFX: State Fair chaos. You know the type]

[You stand with your boys, looking about as middle class as one can. Aldo looks a little odd dressed up like a Dad, but he wears it well enough]

[D] “Pfft, nice shorts, old man.”

[A] “I know you aren’t calling me out when you’ve got chicken legs poking out of your pantholes, Daniel.”

[Pause <3]

[J] “Wow… This place is huge…”

[Pause?]

[J] “No… I’ve never been to a Fair this big…”

[Pause…]

[D] “Well… You ever plan a murder at a State Fair, Jules?”

[J, bewildered] “I’ve never planned a murder a-at all!”

[D] “Enh, first time for everything. Yo Aldo, you want a funnel cake?”

[A, surprised] “I’d… love one, actually. Thank you.”

[D] “Yeah, yeah… Don’t make it a big deal, old man. I owe you for protecting Ma. Plus, you shouldn’t thank me yet. Might just ask the guy to put a live snake in it for ya for pinning me with that mattress!”

[J, pouting] “The snake didn’t do anything…”

[D] “It exists. With its weird tongue and fangs, blugh.”

[J] “Sorry, what’s your favorite animal?”

[D] “Polar bears. Why?”

[J] “Premeditated murderers. Far more likely to attack you than most snakes, who are MINDING THEIR BUSINESS, BY THE WAY.”

[D] “You take that back!”

[J] “You take back what you said about my sweet, scaly babies!”

[Pause!]

[At your stern call, they both stop on a dime]

[D & J] “Sorry, Ma…”

[A] “A twenty-two-year old and a nineteen-year-old arguing over their favorite animals… Now I’ve seen everything.”

[J] “Actually, on the internet-”.

[D] “OK, well, what’s your favorite animal, Mr. Man?”

[A, smirking] “Cougars.”

[Danny stares Aldo down and slowly shuts his eyes, letting air out through his nose]

[D] “...yeah, I walked into that one… C’mon, Jules, let’s go get some fried sugar with more sugar on it.”

[J] “Then we’re gonna ride rides, right? You said you weren’t afraid…”

[D, uncertain] “I ain’t! I ain’t scared of nothin’!”

[Pause…]

[D, indignant] “No! I do not want my ‘tummy medicine’! I can handle a coaster, no problem! Jules, let’s go!”

[Danny drags is bemused brother off, grumbling under his breath]

[SFX: Fill-in on fair noises/general chaos]

[Aldo puts an arm around you and you two meander, enjoying the sights]

[A] “Alright… the State Fair is likely the place Lorenzo will have the most eyes out for us. You just focus on having a nice day out, and leave the rest to me and the boys. Alright?”

[Pause…]

[A] “Hey… Danny and Julian both have been doing great in training… even if Danny takes forever to admit defeat. I had to keep him in that pin lock for nearly five minutes last time! Julian knows how to stay humble and cool… he’d be a dangerous man if he kept up with this line of work…”

[...]

[Aldo sighs]

[A] “I don’t want it for them either, Sugar Mama… and I know you put up with it for me because I’m not likely to leave any time soon. I know you worry… and I’m sorry for it.”

[Pause… <3]

[He laughs a little]

[A] “True, no one’s perfect. Ah well. No sad talk. Let’s ride some rides, gain about twenty pounds, then go home and nap for about twelve hours, eh?”

[SFX/Pause - Fill-in with fair noises - VA’s discretion on length of pause]

[You spend time with your boyfriend, watching him try and stay brave on the coasters, effortlessly winning you prizes, and generally being a goofball, when a cold chill grips your stomach]

[A] “Heheh! The look on that guy’s face when I managed to beat that dumbed rigged game of his and won you that massive teddy bear. Bet he won’t ever forget… Miss?”

[...]

[Aldo straightens but keeps his composure]

[A] “...He’s here, is he? Can you point him out without making it obvious?”

[Pause…]

[A] “...Wait… No, c’mon, seriously?”

[Pause???]

[He mocks a pout]

[A] “Well I was hoping he’d be a fat, balding little nothing… Guess I’m not the only fifty-year-old rocking wavy locks and a sort of six pack.”

[Pause <3]

[A] “Hehe, sorry. Just trying to keep the mood light… Mmh, you weren’t wrong about that jealousy. I don’t think I’ve ever had a man look at me like he wanted to choke me out with my own intestines before.”

[Your ex glowers from the crowd for another moment. His dark, piercing eyes still make you feel small, even now, as he turns and vanishes into the many people enjoying their day]

[...]

[A] “...It’s OK, Miss. It’s OK… Hang on.”

[He whips his phone out with his free hand and makes a call]

[SFX: Aldo placing a call and Danny picking up]

[D] “What’s up?”

[A] “Meet back at the entrance, now. We have visual confirmation he’s here.”

[D] “Yes, sir! Jules, c’mon, that no good freaking snake is here.”

[J, faintly] “C’mon, that was on purpose-!”

[D] “We’ll be there!”

[SFX: The call ending]

[A] “Alright, the boys are going to meet us at the entrance. Stick with me, keep your wits about you, and we’ll get you home. Alright?”

[Pause.]

[A] “Good girl. C’mon.”

[...You’re gonna need to have a chat with him about ‘good girl’ later]

[SFX: Footsteps/State Fair chaos and torment]

[A] “There are the boys. No Lorenzo in sight… Good… I don’t fancy going to jail trying to choke the bastard out here and now…”

[Pause <3]

[D] “Yo, got you your funnel cake, old man.”

[SFX: Funnel cake being exchanged]

[A] “Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate it. Now, into the car. My personnel has an eye on him, and he shouldn’t be able to squirm away for much longer…”

[J] “...Who’s going to actually… kill him?”

[All of you fall silent. Danny’s face twists in uncertainty. Julian looks away. Aldo sighs]

[A] “...I’ll do it.”

[Pause???]

[A] “I don’t like killing, Miss. I hate it, I hate seeing Death everywhere I go… but you’re my family. If a man isn’t willing to do anything and everything to protect his family, what sort of man is he?”

[...]

[SFX: Fade out on them walking to the car, the sounds of the Fair fading behind]

[To be continued]

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