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Context: You were just trying to get in touch with your son, who's been missing for weeks now when you were taken from your home by an unknown assailant. Seems your son might be in with a bad crowd... one of whom appears to be quite the silver fox. You spoke with Aldo Mitzrati, who was rather surprised to find out who you were. There was chemistry you weren't expecting, and you agreed to a date to see if your son might get the hint that he needs to come home. Apparently, he did... at the worst possible time.
Setting: A heist car - interior/exterior
Tags:[MMM4F][Captor Speaker][Silver Fox Mobster Speaker][Son Speaker][Mother Listener][Reverse Comfort][Family Drama][Older Couple][Confession][Hard Angst][Trauma][CW: Kidnapping][TW: Mentions of Affairs/Cheating]
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[J] = Julian, your mysterious captor
[A] = Aldo Mitzrati, grade A boyfriend material
[D] = Danny, your son. Has questions
[Scene opens in the backseat of a very nice vehicle]
[SFX: Faint, somber jazz and car ambiance]
[You wake in the backseat of a very high-end car. The immediate jolt of adrenaline nearly sends you sprawling on the floor. As you steady, you find a very young man studying you. Everything about his appearanceā¦ is familiar]
[...Pause?]
[J] ā...I had you in the trunk after I chloroformed you butā¦ but thereās heavy things sliding around, and I didnāt want you injured. Dad didnātā¦ I-I mean, Mr. OāBrian. Sorry.ā
[...]
[J] ā...Iām one of his associates, tasked with retrieving you. Heā¦ misses you. A lot.ā
[...?]
[J] āAre we related? U-Uhā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
[The young man looks at you, reflecting your son so vividly that it scares you. His eyes are hard, but sad]
[J] ā...My name is Julian. Iāmā¦ā
[He takes a breath and looks away]
[J] ā...Lorenzoāsā¦ other sonā¦ā
[...]
[J] āI, ah. My mother wasā¦ She was one of the other, umā¦ Iām an affair child...He told me to get you. So, here I am. Iāmā¦ Iām so sorry I had to knock you out, I-Iā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
[He stops cold, looking at you in stunned silence]
[J] ā...What do you mean, āYou donāt want to do this, do you?ā.ā
[...]
[Thereās an entire war raging in his eyes. Heās so tired]
[J] ā...He keptā¦ all the photos and home moviesā¦ of you. Of Danny. I looked through them when I could. Whenā¦ he wasnāt there. He gets so angry any time heās reminded of youā¦ā
[His voice lowers even more and he looks away]
[J] ā...you seemed so niceā¦ I never believed him when he said mean things about you. I guess he doesnāt understand you can look up a lot of public data online, now? Or that people, like the help, talk? He doesnāt even know what a VPN isā¦ā
[...]
[J] āEhehā¦ donāt worry about it. Iām kind of into computers in my spare time, so I forget not to talk in plain English. At least youāre nice enough to admit you donāt know instead of yelling and calling me aā¦ nevermindā¦ā
[Pause?]
[J] āOh, Iā¦ Go to school for computer scienceā¦? Me? Iām not really smart enoughā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
[Julian looks at you as if heās never heard a kind word his whole life]
[J] ā...You really think I couldā¦? Thatā¦ I seem smarter than Iām willing to give myself credit for?ā
[Pause!]
[His struggling intensifies]
[J] āDo youā¦ loveā¦ your son? Even when he disappoints you?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[He nods quietly]
[J] āI seeā¦ Dad said he wanted you brought back at all costs. Even meā¦ I guess he knew Mr. Mitzrati had taken an interest in you after his stunt with that girlā¦ Iāve never seen him soā¦ angryā¦ā
[...Pause?]
[Julian sighs]
[J] āDanny had been pulling away from the family more and more, and Dad was getting sick of it. Sick of his attitude, and finding out that he was working for a rival sent him into a spiralā¦ So, he got Danny rerouted to a bar to meet a contact and had one of his, ahm, working girls lace his drink and then convince them they had actually been together later. Dad wanted Danny to come crying and begging to him, which he didā¦ Thatās when Dad told him to steal from Mr. Mitzrati.ā
[...?]
[J] āNo, Danny wasnāt actually harmedā¦ She just let him nap and messed his clothes up a little, left some lipstick marks, all that.ā
[...Pause?]
[J] ā...he doesnāt know I exist, no. As far as heās aware, heās Dadās only son.ā
[...]
[You reach out and put a tentative hand on his. He jolts but remains mostly docile, looking at you in confusion]
[J] āWhyā¦ are you putting your hand on mine?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[J] ā...youāreā¦ sorryā¦? Youāve done nothing wrongā¦ I donāt understand.ā
[Pauseā¦]
[J] āYouā¦ wish you had known so you could have protected me like you did Danny? Iā¦ I donāt understand, Iām the bastard child of one of his affairs, you shouldā¦ hate me!ā
[...]
[The tormented young man in front of you struggles but, ultimately, breaks. He collapses into your arms, crying quietly]
[J] ā...I-Iām so sorryā¦ Iā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
[J] ā...I canātā¦ I canāt go with youā¦ Heāll kill youā¦ Or Mr. Mitzrati will kill meā¦ā
[Pause.]
[He looks up at you, struggling]
[J] āYou trust him that muchā¦?ā
[Pause <3]
[The gears are turning in his head. He holds you close as you pet his hair and soothe him]
[SFX: Another car pulling up]
[Another car pulls up and you recognize it. Itās Aldoās]
[Pauseā¦?]
[J] ā...Have the driver pull overā¦? But the car is blocking us, Iā¦ Driver, shut the car off, please.ā
[SFX: The car shutting off]
[Pause]
[SFX: Aldo and Danny getting out of the car faintly, ready to square up]
[J, blank] ā...Theyāre going to kill meā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
[J] āTake your handā¦? Areā¦ Do you promise?ā
[Pause <3]
[Julian takes a deep breath and takes your hand]
[SFX: The car door slowly opening]
[The second you step outside, Aldo and Danny are on you. Danny practically jumps into your arms while Aldo coldly stares Julian down]
[D] āMA!! Ma, oh thank god! Are you hurt? Did this fucking asshole hurt you?!ā
[A, icy] āA very good question, indeed.ā
[SFX: A gun being cocked]
[Julian stares blankly at the pistol Aldo is aiming at him]
[A] ā...You pissed off the wrong person, kid, and you damn sure laid down with the wrong dogs. Unfortunately for you, you messed with one of the few people I will kill indiscriminately over.ā
[Pause!!]
[D] āWhat? Ma, why are you-?ā
[A] āMissā¦?ā
[...]
[You stand between the two of them and Aldo blinks, confused and hesitating]
[A] āMissā¦?ā
[D] āMaā¦?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[Your men exchange looks as you guard the young man behind you]
[A] āMissā¦ He has a gun.ā
[Pauseā¦]
[D] āWho even is this guy?! He kidnapped you! You with Dad, tough guy, huh?! Whatās your fucking problem clocking my Mom like that?!ā
[Julian shrinks in shame behind you]
[Pause.]
[Both men stop dead at your revelation]
[D] ā...Youā¦I have a half brotherā¦?ā
[J] ā...Yeah.ā
[D] ā...Holy shit.ā
[J] ā...Yeah.ā
[SFX: Guns being put away, with some reservation]
[A] āSo you broke into my home and hit my girlfriend over the head with a damned champagne bottle?!ā
[J] āNo! She dropped the bottle when I chloroformed her and some of the broken glass cut her ankle! Iām sorry!ā
[A] āSo, you STILL broke into my home and tried to harm my family, hm? You have a lot of goddamn nerve to try and test me after all this horseshit, AND you have the nerve to pick on an innocent mother?!ā
[Pause!]
[A] āMiss, with due respect, I donāt give a shit if it was under Lorenzoās orders. Iām getting real damned tired of all of this nonsense.ā
[...]
[He backpedals, holding up his hands for peace]
[A] āNo no no, I didnāt mean it as a sleight against your or Danny or even this kid. Sweetheart, I amā¦ terrified that Iām going to wake up one morning to find you dead! Iām not annoyed to be helping, Iām scared that it wonāt be enough, and if I have to bury you, Iā¦ā
[Pause <3]
[Aldo exhales as you embrace him, holding you close]
[A] āIām sorry, baby girlā¦ Iām sorry I blew upā¦ā
[Pause]
[D] āGrossā¦ā
[J] āI think itās sweetā¦ā
[D] āOh Christ, youāre a bootlicker...I canāt believe Ma managed to mother you into being chill.ā
[J] āI am as surprised as you are.ā
[D] āBlugh, whateverā¦ Ma, whatās the plan?ā
[Pause?]
[J] āNoā¦ Dad doesnāt know your address, maāam.ā
[Pause]
[D] ā...We take him home and deal with Dadā¦? How?ā
[...]
[A] ā...Miss?ā
[You donāt really know a polite way to say it. Better out than in]
[Pause.]
[A] āYouāre going to find a way to make him come to youā¦?ā
[D] āAnd thenā¦ Yā¦Youāre gonna fucking kill him?ā
[To be continued]
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Note: Iāll work on another series eventually, I swear XD The heart wants what it wants!
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