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Context: You were just trying to get in touch with your son, who's been missing for weeks now when you were taken from your home by an unknown assailant. Seems your son might be in with a bad crowd... one of whom appears to be quite the silver fox. You spoke with Aldo Mitzrati, who was rather surprised to find out who you were. There was chemistry you weren't expecting, and you agreed to a date to see if your son might get the hint that he needs to come home. Apparently, he did... at the worst possible time.
Setting: Aldoâs home/????
Tags:[MM4F][Silver Fox Mobster Speaker][Son Speaker][Mother Listener][Comfort][Dating?][Family Drama][Older Couple][Confession][Hard Angst][Trauma][Wholesome-ish][CW: Kidnapping/Custody Drama][TW: Implied Grooming/Abuse]
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[A] = Aldo Mitzrati, grade A boyfriend material
[D] = Danny, your son. Has questions
[Scene opens in Aldoâs home]
[SFX: A crackling fire/food being served]
[You sit at the kitchen table of Aldoâs home, feeling a bit out of place. Danny is, per usual, happy to talk your ear off while you try and figure out why Aldo himself looks so cold]
[D] â-I didnât even know you could do that with brisket! Anyway, the chef is like, âWhat do you think?â and Iâm like, âBrother, you need you a little paprikaâ!.â
[PauseâŚ]
[D] âMr. Mitzrati looks madâŚ? Hey, donât worry⌠Heâs probably pissed at me, still, you know? He freaking loves you like a chocolate addict loves Easter.â
[A] âHe also has reasonably good hearing.â
[Pause!]
[D] âWoop, sorry⌠Fine then. If youâre mad at me, I get it. You brought us here to talk shop, right?â
[SFX: Clinking of silverware]
[A] âI did⌠Here.â
[SFX: A folder being tossed upon a table]
[Aldo tosses down a pretty thick folder. The sight of your exâs name makes your insides run cold]
[A] âLorenzo Oâ Brian, hm?â
[D] âYeah, I got a bit of Irish in me, I guess⌠That is a lot of papers in that folder.â
[...]
[A] âIt would be⌠Lots of hospital reports, police reports, bribes⌠Here, howâs about you take a look at some of the x-rays.â
[...]
[Danny carefully looks through the folder. You see him grow paler⌠and paler⌠until he looks at you in quiet horror]
[Pause - VAâs discretion/filled by SFX: papers shuffling]
[D] â...Ma, this is from when you said you had to go get a root canal seven years ago⌠B-But this says they had to fix your teeth because they had been brokenâŚâ
[...]
[Aldo offers his hand and you quickly take it]
[A] âItâs OK. sweetheart, you take my hand⌠Youâre not in trouble. At least, I hope to God you arenâtâŚâ
[Pause?]
[Your son looks at you and you can barely stand to look at him]
[D] â...why didnât you tell me it wasâŚthis bad?â
[...]
[D] âI would have believed you! IâŚâ
[He appears to have an epiphany then and, this time, he canât look at you]
[D] â...it was happening right damned in front of me and I didnât believe it⌠You said you tripped and fell down those stairs outside of our apartment, remember? But I saw Dad shove you, I saw you grab for him to steady⌠And I still didnâtâŚâ
[PauseâŚ]
[Your son lets out a pained whimper and collapses in your arms, sobbing quietly, begging for forgiveness. Aldo, meanwhile, remains somewhat icy]
[D] âI-Iâm so sorry-!â
[Pause!]
[A] âMhm⌠So⌠When were either of you going to tell me the old man is also mafia?â
[Pause???]
[D] âHuh??? Dad ainât mafia. Heâs a piece of shit, but he ainât mafiaâŚâ
[Aldo stares the two of you down before he lets out a deep sigh]
[A] â...I believe you. Well, I believe you, Miss. Danny⌠Not quite yet.â
[D] â...fair⌠So, Dadâs really mafia? Like⌠part of your familyâŚ?â
[Aldo lets out a scoff]
[D] âPshh, no. If the bastard was part of my family, Iâd have had him taken out a long time ago⌠I tolerate a lot, but not this and, for the record, if I found out all of this was some convoluted scheme to try and take me outâŚâ
[Pause!]
[Aldo raises his hands for peace]
[A] âI DONâT believe it, Miss. I promise⌠Please, forgive an old dog for being a little paranoid. You donât live this long in my business without taking some precaution.â
[...]
[D] â...What do we doâŚ?â
[You hold your son as he grieves and watch Aldo carefully as he paces]
[A] âOnce Loretta was done with that dossier on your old man, she came up with some recommendations for dealing with your situation, Danny. First and foremost, she advised having the girl send over a DNA testâŚâ
[...]
[A, sympathetic] âI donât feel great about it either, Miss⌠But the fact remains that faking pregnancies or trying to settle another man with the bill are tactics that exist. Danny, youâre going to have to be the bad guy to a certain extent, here, and itâs going to suck. No sugar-coating it. But, if it is your baby⌠If this baby is real, then youâll have to sign away your parental rights if you donât want to be paying child support. That means you stay out of the kidâs life, though.â
[...Pause]
[Danny nods silently, tears spilling down his cheeks]
[A] â...You nodded so Iâm going to assume you understandâŚâ
[He sighs again and runs a hand through his hair]
[A] â...Listen⌠I thought about this, over and over, really trying to figure out how much of this is me trying to step in like some big, dumb savior, and how much of this is me protecting people I legitimately care about⌠Danny, you disrespected me with what you did.â
[Pause-!]
[A] âAh, Miss⌠Heâs not going to get hurt, he just needs to take some damned accountability.â
[D] â...Iâll try and pay you back⌠I donât even care anymoreâŚâ
[PauseâŚ]
[D, irate] âMa, what good even am I?! I sided with all the wrong people, I made your life a living Hell, and nowâŚ! Now, IâŚâ
[Pause!]
[D] â...I know you love me.â
[Pause?]
[D] âYeah⌠Weâve survived worseâŚâ
[Pause!]
[D] âYeahâŚâ
[Pause!!]
[D, getting pumped up] âYeah!! YEAH! Weâre gonna be alright! Weâre gonna work on being better, together, and if I see that no-good, knuckle-dragging SCUM-!â
[PauseâŚ]
[D] âRight, sorry, too much murderous rageâŚâ
[Danny sighs]
[D] â...What do you want me to do to make things right, Mr. Mitzrati?â
[Aldo studies him for a moment, eyes stern but not unkind]
[...]
[A] â...Youâre fired.â
[Pause???]
[D] âWhat?!â
[Aldo holds up a hand and Danny quiets]
[A] âI cannot have this conflict of interest, Danny. And, Iâm sorry, but I think youâre better off in a role where you canât get yourself in this much trouble. No more working for me⌠but I would like to make you an offer in return.â
[D, bitter] âWhat, you get to date my Mom and I fuck off?â
[A, stern] âNo. I am willing to pay your way through culinary school, however. Also, sorry kid, but Iâm not going anywhere so long as Sugar Mama here is willing to have me. Itâs⌠been a long time since Iâve been this happy and content. Anyone else in this scenario would have not had my trust earlier, and things would have gone South in a heartbeat.â
[PauseâŚ]
[D, amazed] âWhâŚ? Why? Thatâs⌠so much money!â
[A] âYeah, well, itâs not doing anyone a lot of good gathering dust, is it? Plus itâll save me from having to hear you gush with the chefs again, hm?â
[Your son blushes and grumbles. You, on the other hand, smile]
[Pause <3]
[Aldo finally smiles in return]
[A] âAww, Miss, donât tear up⌠Iâm just a man doing what he thinks is right for his family. A family. A-Ahem.â
[Pause <3]
[He accepts your hug, laughing happily under his breath while Danny sits in disbelief]
[D] â...Yeah, well⌠Youâre still not my Dad.â
[He says it in an almost teasing manner. Almost]
[A, teasing] âAnd youâre not my kid. We all have problems, hm?â
[Danny laughs. Itâs a wonderful sound]
[D] âEnhh, fuck off⌠You treat Ma well⌠I guess I canât ask for much more, can I? But-â.
[A] âYou also have to go to therapy, Danny.â
[D] âWhat?!â
[PauseâŚ]
[Danny eases, still a bit puffed up]
[D] â...You wanna go, Ma?â
[Pause <3]
[D] â...Fine. Owe you that much, I guessâŚâ
[A] âLook at that⌠We all sat down together and resolved our issues like adults over a nice meal, which, by the way Danny⌠Good job.â
[Again, your son turns crimson]
[D] âW-Whatever, I just suggested some seasoningsâŚâ
[A] âAnd they worked. Good job.â
[D] â...thanks⌠I guessâŚâ
[You hide a giggle of your own as your boys are cute grumps together]
[Pause?]
[A] âYou know what, some champagne sounds lovely, Miss. Would you mind grabbing it from the front?â
[Pause!]
[SFX: The Listener walking on nice wooden floors into the kitchen and fishing around for the right bottle]
[You listen to them laugh and rib each other only feet away as you carefully look through the bottles]
[Pause]
[D, faintly] âOh, oho, you want to get out the dance mats, old man? Cause I will ruin you!â
[A, faintly and laughing] âYouâre really going to make me embarrass you in front of your Mama? Alright!â
[SFX: A bottle shattering]
[D] âWhat the Hell??â
[A] âMiss? Miss!â
[SFX: Their hurried footsteps approaching]
[The boys hurry into the room. The bottle of champagne bubbles sadly from the floor]
[D] âThe bottle⌠Ma?? Ma!!â
[A] âMiss??â
[D] âH-Hey⌠Hey, thereâs blood on the groundâŚâ
[A] â...Fuck. Danny, grab the nearest car and bring it around. NOW.â
[D, distressed but moving] âWhatâs happening?!â
[A] âSomeoneâs taken your mother. And that person had better hope they do no meet me, because, hoho, someone is going to die tonight if they hurt her⌠Now, get the car. Weâre no doubt racing against the clock!â
[D] âYessir!â
[SFX: The two of them hurrying off]
[They continue to call for you, not knowing that youâre already being packed away elsewhere. Your head throbs from the blow, and you realize youâre in the trunk of a nice car just before it:]
[SFX: A car truck slamming shut/the car peeling away]
[To be continued]
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