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After a day out shopping on your own and returning home, you begin to notice that youāre starting to relapse into your eating disorder, but your partner strongly supports you no matter how much it fluctuates. (~1050 words)
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FADE IN
INT. THE LISTENERāS AND PARTNERāS SHARED APARTMENT- NIGHT.
Coming home from a hectic day at work, the PARTNER comes through the front door into the kitchen and calls out to the LISTENER. Their voice is muffled as the listener is in the bedroom.
PARTNER
(sing-song)
Babe, Iām back!
(normal)
Huh? Where are you?
They walk into the bedroom and find the listener curled up under the sheets.
PARTNER
There you are!
(groaning)
I know I said Iād be back home an hour ago, but my boss held me back again.
(upset)
My coworker literally gave her a heads-up that he was going to be leaving early but she gave him a hard time for it anyways. And then I had to pick up the slack of course which was what I was prepared for anyways but she made it so much more complicated than it needed to be and...
(normal)
But Iāll tell you about that later. Are you okay? Did something happen? Hang on one second.
(chuckling)
I donāt just want to jump into bed with you with my work clothes still on.
They scramble to change as quickly as they can and then hop into bed with them.
PARTNER
(chuckling)
Hi. I think that was my record time. Come here.
They snuggle closer together.
PARTNER
(normal)
Iāll put the clothes on hangers later. You are just too adorable when youāre all snuggled up under the covers. What can I say? Iām impatient when it comes to wanting to spend time with you. But for real, is something wrong? I know it was your day off. Donāt tell me you spent all day stressing over being productive about using your free time.
[...]
PARTNER
Oh, that sounds nice! So you went out and had some āme time.ā
(teasing)
I think I can guess what outfit you wore based on the jumble of clothes thrown into the closet.
(pause, realizing)
Aw no, did that annoying thing happen where you dress in a cool outfit feeling all confident but then feel super icky after like ten minutes? But by then youāve already left the house so youāre forced to just go about your day?
[...]
PARTNER
Hey, donāt worry, it happens to the best of us. But. Something tells me thatās not allā¦ what did you eat today?
[...]
PARTNER
Okay, and what time was that?
[...]
PARTNER
Alright. Well, I think we both can tell that it isnāt enough. Were you just stressed or is itā¦?
[...]
PARTNER
Hey, hey, itās okay. It fluctuates a lot, but Iām glad we were able to catch the signs. Itāsā¦ kind of like when you start catching a cold. Itās likeā¦
(rhetorically)
āWhy is my nose so stuffy? Itās probably allergies. Why do I feel so fatigued? Maybe I didnāt sleep enough.ā
(normal)
And then it sneaks up on you and wonder how you didnāt realize sooner. But itās complicated and hard to notice like when you slip back into bad habits, like biting your nails without even realizing it. Now it makes sense why you said youāve been feeling so tired lately.
(softly)
Iām sure seeing your reflection from the shop windows when you were out all day didnāt help, especially if you already didnāt feel comfortable with what you were wearing.
(normal)
Have you been drinking water?
[...]
PARTNER
Alright. Do you want me to make you something?
[...]
PARTNER
(chuckling)
I donāt mind how late it is!
(normal)
Weāve had our fair share of late-night snacks, even full-on meals! But letās take it slow for now with fruit or a snack so your stomach doesnāt get upset. Do we have any of your comfort foods left in the kitchen?
[...]
PARTNER
Then we can make a run to the market nearby.
(chuckling)
I always feel like late-night errands feel like secret missions in a way, you know?
(normal)
I can go on my own or you can come with me, whatever you want. I just have to make a list so I donāt forget anything.
(chuckling)
And make sure I donāt leave said list on the table again.
[...]
PARTNER
(chuckling)
If I have the list on my phone then Iāll completely forget it exists!
(normal)
Out of sight, out of mind.
[...]
PARTNER
(satisfied sigh)
I love you too.
(normal)
Youāre always there for me so I want to always be here for you too. Now I donāt want to get out of bed if youāre hugging me so tightly.
(softly)
No matter how much these annoying thoughts come and go, even when sometimes they feel like theyāre gone for good but then reappear, you still persistently try to push through them. Thatās what I admire about you.
(pause)
These thoughts can sneak up on you, but it doesnāt mean you canāt be prepared when itās here. The first step is realizing that itās back, and even that is a triumph. And you arenāt alone. I saw this one person on TikTok talking about their experience. They are recovering and in such a better place mentally that whenever those intrusive thoughts came about, they were able to full on make fun of them. Their thoughts would be like :
(stern)
āOh my god, youāre going to get fat.ā
(normal)
And they would respond with
(mocking)
āOh noo, Iām going to get fat, ooooooh big deal.ā
(chuckling)
They would just straight-up mock those thoughts and laugh it off!
(normal)
It definitely makes it easier to see how stupid they are when you repeat it in that tone. But of course, some days it may be harder to that do than others.
(softly)
You are so supportive of how I look, how I dress, hell, youāre never judgemental about anyoneās body. Why should you feel unsatisfied with yours? You are an amazing person.
(normal)
If we stay in bed any longer Iāll keep gushing all about you until your face is completely red!
The listener tries to get away but their partner keeps them in place.
PARTNER
(pretending to be offended, teasing)
Stop squirming! You donāt want me to shower the love of my life with compliments? Canāt I tell the most kind and understanding person, the one person I will trudge all the way to the market that is only a five-minute walk away for, that I am utterly, hopelessly in love with them?
[...]
PARTNER
(laughing)
Alright, alright. Thatās enough. For now.
They kiss.
PARTNER
Let the late-night mission to the market commence!
FADE OUT
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