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Context: Your ex was always close with his childhood friends, especially Barry. You tried to integrate with the group but got frequently pranked, bullied, and teased. Your ex always took their side and, thanks to some doctored screenshots, dumped you in the middle of a cabin retreat. You think you know who was actually responsible and have gone to confront him. It didn't go very well...
Setting: Home
Tags:[MM4A][Exes to ?][Ex-Boyfriend Speaker][Cop Speaker][Framed Listener][Angst][Betrayed][Moving Out][Unforgiven][Crime][Confession][Open Case][Voicemails][CW: Post-Break-Up/Mentions of Crime]
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[X] = Xavier, your ex-boyfriend
[O] = Officer Paul Oleander
Anything in Italics is friend phone. It is your phone. It is cool and normal.
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[Scene opens at home]
[SFX: Packing/Moving]
[Youāre doing your best to pack while your phone continues to buzz and sound off]
[SFX: A phone buzzing for a bitā¦ a beep]
You haveā¦ one new message.
[SFX: A beep]
Playing message
[X] āSnowflake, PLEASE-! Please just pick up the phone, just for a little bit! Look, you have every right to hate me, I was wrong! I should have listened to you when you tried to tell me that Barry was putting me on, just please-!
Voicemail message deleted
[SFX: More packing]
[Pause]
[SFX: A phone buzzing for a bitā¦ a beep]
You haveā¦ one new message. Playing message
[X] āPlease! Iām just asking for five minutes to know youāre OK! My family keeps asking about you, too, theyāre scared sickā¦ The ones that still talk to me after learning what happenedā¦ I donāt care, OK?! I donāt care if they hate me, I deserve it, I take full responsibility, just please-!
Message deleted.
ā¦
You have one new message. Playing message
[X] āSnowflakeā¦ Please. You didnāt let me see you in the hospital, you havenāt let me come over to your house, you wonāt talk to me on the phone or over instant messengerā¦ Please, justā¦ If weāre over, I understand, but not knowing whatās going on is killing me! I just want to knowā¦ youāre OK and that there may be a chance-
Message deleted.
[Pause.]
[SFX: A knock on the door]
[You muffle your frustration and go to answer the door. The officer from before stands, waiting patiently]
[Pause!]
[O, with a small smile] āAye, sorry to bother you once more. I just wanted to check in now that youāre out of the hospital, see how you were doing, and discuss the next steps in the case. May I come in for a bit?ā
[Pause]
[You stand aside and he enters, glancing about]
[O] āAhā¦ Moving out, eh? That or youāre getting ready to have one Hell of a garage sale.ā
[Pauseā¦]
[O] āNo, I canāt say I blame youā¦ However itās been phrased, and however it will be phrased to you by that manās lawyer, you nearly lost your life to his actions, and even if said man wasnāt your direct partner, said partner still didnāt help. Iām, ahā¦ Iām just sorry youāre going through all of this.ā
[Pause]
[O] āOh? Haha, nothing to drink for me, thanks. Sorry, I canāt help you clear the fridge. But, ah, at this point and time, the young man has confessed to his part in the crime, as have two of the other five that were there. Tried to deny it at first until we got subpoenas on their phones and saw the idiots had recorded it. Damned fools record everything and then act surprised when they get in trouble for it these days, I swear.ā
[Pause?]
[He laughs, running a hand through his hair]
[O] āOK, OK, you caught meā¦ Donāt tell anyone, but Iām *old*. Got a six-year-old son at home who tells me Iām a Boomer all the time, hehe.ā
[Pause <3]
[O] āHmhm, yeah. His name is Connor. Says my ārizz is abysmalā, whatever that means. Please tell me itās nothing too bad. My pride canāt handle many more of these scathing, six-year-old commentaries on my person.ā
[Pause]
[O] āOofā¦ You know itās bad when your own son thinks your flirt game is bad, heh. Ah well, I have more than enough on my plate without worrying about dating. Iām Detective Oleander, after all, not Dating Oleander. You can call me Paul, though, if it makes you more comfortable throughout this.ā
[Pauseā¦]
[O, sympathetic] ā...Youāre going through a lot. Nearly dying, hospitalization, Iām guessing a break-up with a long-time partnerā¦ Honestly, youāre tough as nails for managing to hold yourself up so well. I just wish I could say it gets easier from hereā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
[O] āIād honestly just recommend to lawyer up, and lawyer up well. They might be slimy lampreys in fancy suits, but they can be real lifesavers. Especially against the sort of people that Mr. Barry isā¦ā
[...]
You haveā¦ twenty new messages
[Paul glances over at your phone as it sounds off with a wince]
[O] ā...And if you want a restraining order against your exā¦ā
[...]
[O] ā...We can do a wellness check if you are legitimately concerned he might harm himself. Heās been down at the precinct a few times, pleading for information, but we havenāt exactly been able to help him beyond questioning and what we can allow to be known publicly. Iām not going to say that he looked to be in great health, but I donāt think heās a serious risk to himself or anyone else.ā
[...]
[O, gentle] āIf I mayā¦ You donāt owe him anything. I know Iām a cop, not a relationship doctor, but Iāve seen guys stuck in that weird ābros beforeā¦ you knowā mentality. Itās almost cult-like in weird ways, but, again, cop. Not a therapistā¦ However we can help, we certainly will, is what Iām sayingā¦ but I honestly would advise on focusing on yourself. Getting to a safer place, building a support network, all of that.ā
[Pause <3]
[O] āAh, itās no trouble. Honest. I just wanted to make sure you were up to date and I was in the neighborhood. Two birds, one stone.ā
[...]
[O] ā...Aye, if your ex comes back down to the precinct asking questions, Iāll see if we canāt let him know that you say youāre doing fine and to, politely, fuck off and give you space. But, ah, in police speak, hehe.ā
[Pause]
[O] āOh, no trouble. Here, you take my card and give me a call if you need anything, alright? I canāt guarantee Iāll always be available, but Iāll do my best, OK?ā
[Pause!]
āYou have a good night, alright?ā
[Pause!]
[You see him out, waving and closing the door behind him]
[SFX: The door opening and closing]
You haveā¦ twenty-two new messages. Playing most recent message
[X, sobbing] āPleaseā¦ Please, just talk to me, just one wordā¦ I love you so much, and I know it doesnāt seem like it, b-but now I donāt even know who I am without you! Iām scaredā¦ Iām scared and it hurts, like stabbing pains, over and over, PLEASE! Just talk to me, just for a moment! I know youāll never love me again but-!ā
[Pauseā¦]
Message deleted.
[To be continued]
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