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Context: Darren has been your friend for a good many years. Your best friend, in fact! He's kind of a surly asshole at times, but you know he cares about you. Maybe even more than he lets on. Tonight, you're heading to a concert together in the pouring rain. It's sure to be a night you desperately wish you could remember.
Setting: An unknown hospital
Tags:[M4A][Tsundere Delinquent Best Friend Speaker][Injured Listener][Flirting?][Appreciation][Little White Lie][Amnesia][Recovering][Cuddles][Confession][L-Bombs][Hair Petting][Comfort][Reverse Comfort][CW: Angst/Injuries]
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[Scene opens in a hospital room]
[SFX: Very muted hospital ambiance]
[You donāt remember what happened. Everything hurts, and all you can hear is a desperate man arguing with people you canāt hear]
āNo, no, no, Iām fine! I donāt want to be apart from them, please! No, they NEED ME, you donāt understand! Itās just us out here, we ran from bad families, I-!ā
[Pauseā¦]
āCanā¦ Can you at least tell me if theyāre going to be OK?!ā
[Pause]
ā... head injury?! Ah, damnitā¦! Chicky!! Chicky, can you hear me?!ā
[Pauseā¦]
[The sound fades for a bit before it returns]
ā-I can walk fine, see?! Rrgh, the leg is setting fine, now can I please go and see-?!ā
[SFX: A muted crash and the man crying out in pain]
āGAHH! No, no, Iām FINE! Just please, itās been three days, let me-!ā
[Pause]
[The sound fades outā¦ and then back in]
ā-butā¦ i-itās been over a month, why hasnāt Chicky woken up yet?ā
[Pause]
[Another person, the doctor, you imagine, murmurs something in response, and the desperate man sighs]
āN-No, Iā¦ I know the head injury was badā¦ You said that, s-sometimes, people in a coma can hear people talking to them, right? Can I please justā¦ Just keep holding their hand and talking to them?ā
[Pause]
āThanks, Docā¦ā
[SFX: Muted footsteps fading away]
[The man takes a few deep breaths before he begins to talk again]
āH-Hey, Chickadee. Darren here, againā¦ Wishing youād wake up something fierce, I, ahā¦ I really hate hospitals. I hate seeing you like this more, thoughā¦ Christ, my poor Chickyā¦ Still so bruised upā¦ Doc said you hit your head pretty hardā¦ Had some swelling of the brain, some internal bleedingā¦ Not gonna lie, I didnāt understand a word of what he said, but he said youād probably have some trouble with motor functions, maybe even memoryā¦ Head injuries are a lot scarier than cartoons let on, you know?ā
[...]
ā...Kind of wish it was like the cartoons. Then youād just have a comically big bump sticking up that I could poke down with my finger. Then youād hit me with a mallet or something, I donāt knowā¦ā
[...]
ā...Please talk to meā¦ Justā¦ Just, if you can hear thisā¦ā
[He sighs and you feel him squeeze your hand]
ā...Marco.ā
[...]
ā...M-Marcoā¦ā
[...Poā¦lo]
[He jumps as your eyes flutter open and fix on him]
āChicky!! Oh, baby, youāre awake! Thank God, thank GOD, let me get the-!ā
[Pause?]
[He stares at you in anguished disbelief]
āWhat? Whoā¦ am I? ...Chicky? Donātā¦ Donāt you recognize me?ā
[...]
āNo, no, no, itās OK! Donāt worryā¦ Donāt cry, itās OKā¦ Shh, come hereā¦ Iāve got you.ā
[The man gently hugs you, his own form shaking]
[Pause]
āYouāve got a bad headache? OK, no problem, I can go ask the doctor for some aspirin. He needs to know that youāreā¦ā
[P-Pause]
ā...No, Iā¦ Iām not going anywhere, sweetheart. I can stay for a momentā¦ but are you sure? You donātā¦ You donāt remember me, right?ā
[P-Pause]
āOh, sweetheartā¦ We were in a bad car crash together. Thatās why weāre both here. Jesus, you were in a coma for over a month, a-and the doctor said you might not wake up at all, so Iāve been sitting here, holding your hand and talking a-andā¦ā
[Pause!]
āSweetheartā¦ I-Itās OKā¦ Shhā¦ The important thing is that youāre here and youāre alive and I amā¦ I am NEVER going to let something bad happen to you again, OK? I promise youā¦ā
[...Pause?]
[The man freezes for a moment, floundering]
āAm I yourā¦ boyfriend? Is that what you just asked? If you and I are a couple?ā
[Pause?]
[He looks at you, tears streaming down his face]
ā...Yā¦Yeah! I am! Do you remember anything about our time together?ā
[...]
[His brief excitement fades]
āNo? ...Thatās OK, Chickyā¦ Here, Iāll give you the short version. We both came from bad families on the opposite side of the country. We were friends for years, we helped each other survive, andā¦ then we moved out here together. Just us against the world! A-Andā¦ it hasnāt always been easy, but Iāve always felt safe and warm and loved andā¦ā
[He breaks down, face falling into your shoulder]
[...]
[You gently run your fingers through his hair and he lets out a shuddering breath]
ā...I love you. I neverā¦ told you that. I never told you it enoughā¦ I never knew how toā¦ I was going to tell you after the concert, butā¦ā
[Pauseā¦?]
āN-No, babyā¦ That was over a month agoā¦ Weāve been recovering in the hospital after the crash. My injuries werenāt as bad, forā¦ some reason I canāt comprehendā¦ If I could take your injuries, your pain, I would, in a heartbeat!ā
[Pause?]
āDoā¦ I want to cuddle?ā
[He ponders for a moment before he utters a quiet, sad:]
āYes.ā
[You scoot over in your hospital bed and he wastes no time in climbing in next to you, cuddling up close]
[SFX: The hospital bed shifting/rocking a bit]
āThank youā¦ For letting me cuddle you, even if itās in a damned hospital bed. Mmh, come here, oh, my poor Chickyā¦ā
[Pause <3]
[You stroke his back. Heās so familiar, so warm and safe, even if something feels off]
ā...Iām so sorryā¦ā
[Pause?]
āItā¦ Itās my fault that we crashedā¦ I kept pushing, I kept trying to get to that stupid fucking concert at all costs. That cost should have never included you, Chicky. That never should have even been a factor, but nooo, I had to be an asshole, per usualā¦ā
[He lets out a mix of a whimper and a frustrated snarl]
āGodamnit, I-! I donāt even deserve to be around you!ā
[...Pause]
āD-Donāt, donāt talk like thatā¦ You always do that, always try and convince me that Iām not garbage thatās just wasting your life away. You act like spending time with me is something worth your damned time, and I justā¦ I donāt get it.ā
[Pause <3]
[He snorts]
āNo, YOU have low self-esteem and should be nicer to yourself.ā
[Pause <3]
āYeah, wellā¦ Your Mom.ā
[Pause!]
[You laugh, even though the headache rampaging in your head hates it. Your boyfriend snickers]
āHehe, see? Bet just being around me is making that headache worse. āDarren, youāre a walking, talking migraine when youāre in a moodā, eh? Hehā¦ You used to tell me that when I was really getting under your skin.ā
[Pause <3]
[He tenses as you nuzzle into him but holds you close, shaking lightly]
ā...I know you donāt remember me right now, butā¦ I hope, when you do, you remember the man that loves you more than anyone or anything else. He tends to get buried under the rest of my āsparkling personalityā, butā¦ heā¦ Iā¦ I love you. So much. I always have and I always will.ā
[Pause]
ā...Heh. āI seem nice enoughā, huh? Iāll take it. Now, cāmon, try and rest. Iāll make sure the doctor knows you need some aspirin for that headache, OK? And that, um, you woke up out of your coma. Probably important that he knows.ā
[Pause]
[He gives your forehead a little kiss, lingering for a moment to say one last thing before he leaves to get the doctor:]
āI love you, baby. With every bit of me. You rest now, Iāll be back.ā
[SFX: His footsteps fading away]
[Pause]
ā¦
[Polo...?]
[To be continued]
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