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[M4A] Downpour Pt. 2 [Friends to Lovers?][Tsundere Delinquent Best Friend Speaker][Injured Listener][Flirting?][Appreciation][Little White Lie][Amnesia][Recovering][Cuddles][Confession][L-Bombs][Hair Petting][Comfort][Reverse Comfort][CW: Angst/Injuries]
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Part 1


Context: Darren has been your friend for a good many years. Your best friend, in fact! He's kind of a surly asshole at times, but you know he cares about you. Maybe even more than he lets on. Tonight, you're heading to a concert together in the pouring rain. It's sure to be a night you desperately wish you could remember.

Setting: An unknown hospital

Tags:[M4A][Tsundere Delinquent Best Friend Speaker][Injured Listener][Flirting?][Appreciation][Little White Lie][Amnesia][Recovering][Cuddles][Confession][L-Bombs][Hair Petting][Comfort][Reverse Comfort][CW: Angst/Injuries]

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[Scene opens in a hospital room]

[SFX: Very muted hospital ambiance]

[You donā€™t remember what happened. Everything hurts, and all you can hear is a desperate man arguing with people you canā€™t hear]

ā€œNo, no, no, Iā€™m fine! I donā€™t want to be apart from them, please! No, they NEED ME, you donā€™t understand! Itā€™s just us out here, we ran from bad families, I-!ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

ā€œCanā€¦ Can you at least tell me if theyā€™re going to be OK?!ā€

[Pause]

ā€œ... head injury?! Ah, damnitā€¦! Chicky!! Chicky, can you hear me?!ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[The sound fades for a bit before it returns]

ā€œ-I can walk fine, see?! Rrgh, the leg is setting fine, now can I please go and see-?!ā€

[SFX: A muted crash and the man crying out in pain]

ā€œGAHH! No, no, Iā€™m FINE! Just please, itā€™s been three days, let me-!ā€

[Pause]

[The sound fades outā€¦ and then back in]

ā€œ-butā€¦ i-itā€™s been over a month, why hasnā€™t Chicky woken up yet?ā€

[Pause]

[Another person, the doctor, you imagine, murmurs something in response, and the desperate man sighs]

ā€œN-No, Iā€¦ I know the head injury was badā€¦ You said that, s-sometimes, people in a coma can hear people talking to them, right? Can I please justā€¦ Just keep holding their hand and talking to them?ā€

[Pause]

ā€œThanks, Docā€¦ā€

[SFX: Muted footsteps fading away]

[The man takes a few deep breaths before he begins to talk again]

ā€œH-Hey, Chickadee. Darren here, againā€¦ Wishing youā€™d wake up something fierce, I, ahā€¦ I really hate hospitals. I hate seeing you like this more, thoughā€¦ Christ, my poor Chickyā€¦ Still so bruised upā€¦ Doc said you hit your head pretty hardā€¦ Had some swelling of the brain, some internal bleedingā€¦ Not gonna lie, I didnā€™t understand a word of what he said, but he said youā€™d probably have some trouble with motor functions, maybe even memoryā€¦ Head injuries are a lot scarier than cartoons let on, you know?ā€

[...]

ā€œ...Kind of wish it was like the cartoons. Then youā€™d just have a comically big bump sticking up that I could poke down with my finger. Then youā€™d hit me with a mallet or something, I donā€™t knowā€¦ā€

[...]

ā€œ...Please talk to meā€¦ Justā€¦ Just, if you can hear thisā€¦ā€

[He sighs and you feel him squeeze your hand]

ā€œ...Marco.ā€

[...]

ā€œ...M-Marcoā€¦ā€

[...Poā€¦lo]

[He jumps as your eyes flutter open and fix on him]

ā€œChicky!! Oh, baby, youā€™re awake! Thank God, thank GOD, let me get the-!ā€

[Pause?]

[He stares at you in anguished disbelief]

ā€œWhat? Whoā€¦ am I? ...Chicky? Donā€™tā€¦ Donā€™t you recognize me?ā€

[...]

ā€œNo, no, no, itā€™s OK! Donā€™t worryā€¦ Donā€™t cry, itā€™s OKā€¦ Shh, come hereā€¦ Iā€™ve got you.ā€

[The man gently hugs you, his own form shaking]

[Pause]

ā€œYouā€™ve got a bad headache? OK, no problem, I can go ask the doctor for some aspirin. He needs to know that youā€™reā€¦ā€

[P-Pause]

ā€œ...No, Iā€¦ Iā€™m not going anywhere, sweetheart. I can stay for a momentā€¦ but are you sure? You donā€™tā€¦ You donā€™t remember me, right?ā€

[P-Pause]

ā€œOh, sweetheartā€¦ We were in a bad car crash together. Thatā€™s why weā€™re both here. Jesus, you were in a coma for over a month, a-and the doctor said you might not wake up at all, so Iā€™ve been sitting here, holding your hand and talking a-andā€¦ā€

[Pause!]

ā€œSweetheartā€¦ I-Itā€™s OKā€¦ Shhā€¦ The important thing is that youā€™re here and youā€™re alive and I amā€¦ I am NEVER going to let something bad happen to you again, OK? I promise youā€¦ā€

[...Pause?]

[The man freezes for a moment, floundering]

ā€œAm I yourā€¦ boyfriend? Is that what you just asked? If you and I are a couple?ā€

[Pause?]

[He looks at you, tears streaming down his face]

ā€œ...Yā€¦Yeah! I am! Do you remember anything about our time together?ā€

[...]

[His brief excitement fades]

ā€œNo? ...Thatā€™s OK, Chickyā€¦ Here, Iā€™ll give you the short version. We both came from bad families on the opposite side of the country. We were friends for years, we helped each other survive, andā€¦ then we moved out here together. Just us against the world! A-Andā€¦ it hasnā€™t always been easy, but Iā€™ve always felt safe and warm and loved andā€¦ā€

[He breaks down, face falling into your shoulder]

[...]

[You gently run your fingers through his hair and he lets out a shuddering breath]

ā€œ...I love you. I neverā€¦ told you that. I never told you it enoughā€¦ I never knew how toā€¦ I was going to tell you after the concert, butā€¦ā€

[Pauseā€¦?]

ā€œN-No, babyā€¦ That was over a month agoā€¦ Weā€™ve been recovering in the hospital after the crash. My injuries werenā€™t as bad, forā€¦ some reason I canā€™t comprehendā€¦ If I could take your injuries, your pain, I would, in a heartbeat!ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œDoā€¦ I want to cuddle?ā€

[He ponders for a moment before he utters a quiet, sad:]

ā€œYes.ā€

[You scoot over in your hospital bed and he wastes no time in climbing in next to you, cuddling up close]

[SFX: The hospital bed shifting/rocking a bit]

ā€œThank youā€¦ For letting me cuddle you, even if itā€™s in a damned hospital bed. Mmh, come here, oh, my poor Chickyā€¦ā€

[Pause <3]

[You stroke his back. Heā€™s so familiar, so warm and safe, even if something feels off]

ā€œ...Iā€™m so sorryā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œItā€¦ Itā€™s my fault that we crashedā€¦ I kept pushing, I kept trying to get to that stupid fucking concert at all costs. That cost should have never included you, Chicky. That never should have even been a factor, but nooo, I had to be an asshole, per usualā€¦ā€

[He lets out a mix of a whimper and a frustrated snarl]

ā€œGodamnit, I-! I donā€™t even deserve to be around you!ā€

[...Pause]

ā€œD-Donā€™t, donā€™t talk like thatā€¦ You always do that, always try and convince me that Iā€™m not garbage thatā€™s just wasting your life away. You act like spending time with me is something worth your damned time, and I justā€¦ I donā€™t get it.ā€

[Pause <3]

[He snorts]

ā€œNo, YOU have low self-esteem and should be nicer to yourself.ā€

[Pause <3]

ā€œYeah, wellā€¦ Your Mom.ā€

[Pause!]

[You laugh, even though the headache rampaging in your head hates it. Your boyfriend snickers]

ā€œHehe, see? Bet just being around me is making that headache worse. ā€˜Darren, youā€™re a walking, talking migraine when youā€™re in a moodā€™, eh? Hehā€¦ You used to tell me that when I was really getting under your skin.ā€

[Pause <3]

[He tenses as you nuzzle into him but holds you close, shaking lightly]

ā€œ...I know you donā€™t remember me right now, butā€¦ I hope, when you do, you remember the man that loves you more than anyone or anything else. He tends to get buried under the rest of my ā€˜sparkling personalityā€™, butā€¦ heā€¦ Iā€¦ I love you. So much. I always have and I always will.ā€

[Pause]

ā€œ...Heh. ā€˜I seem nice enoughā€™, huh? Iā€™ll take it. Now, cā€™mon, try and rest. Iā€™ll make sure the doctor knows you need some aspirin for that headache, OK? And that, um, you woke up out of your coma. Probably important that he knows.ā€

[Pause]

[He gives your forehead a little kiss, lingering for a moment to say one last thing before he leaves to get the doctor:]

ā€œI love you, baby. With every bit of me. You rest now, Iā€™ll be back.ā€

[SFX: His footsteps fading away]

[Pause]

ā€¦

[Polo...?]

[To be continued]

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