Hello! Having announced that I was taking a break definitely made me stay true to my word, even if I had scripts in the making. I was still doing creative hobbies while I was away, mainly focusing on making a cosplay for Anime Expo where I’ll be volunteering (if you’re going too, hmu loll)! I won’t be posting scripts super often but will try to maintain a script a week, give or take. I wasn’t really consistent either way before XD. I’ll be posting a yandere villain script soon!

I would really appreciate some constructive criticism of my work! I myself get a little shy when I give advice, so if you feel the same way here is a link to a Google Form where you can submit it anonymously :33. Otherwise, please respond to this post in the comments!

What I’m looking for is feedback on general understanding (aka the reader knows what’s going on and is able to follow along), pointing out where some parts are awkward or break the flow, and generally making words make sense LOL and not seem clunky. I’m open to any other feedback but these are some examples/ what I’d like the most :DD

Here are three of my scripts I’d like feedback on! I chose not to include ones that are sequels but are also my most recent/ I just like ‘em. Thank you!

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You Are Not Any Less Powerful (Fantasy)

Tea Leaf (Tsukomogami Japanese Folklore)

I Feel Like I Don't Tell You Enough (Established domestic relationship)

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I now realize how many scripts of mine are fantasy based