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[M4F] Must Love Dogs Pt. 2 [Bi Dangerous Himbo Speaker][Mistreated Listener][First Date][Family Drama][SPICY][Flirting][Cuddles][Kissing][Comfort][Slightly Escalating Yandere][Mild Angst][Stargazing][CW: Mentions of Drug Use/Narcissistic Family]
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ItsEsmeJones is a male looking for a female in Stargazing
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Part 1 Part 3


Context: You are one of a set of twins, and your family has never made it hidden that they like your brother more. You've been mistreated most of your life, but you'd hoped you could have one birthday celebration on your terms. Naturally, your brother has ruined your night. It seems like someone besides you might have taken offense to that... and did something about it. You couldn't help but repay him with a date.

Setting: An overlook in the forest

Tags:[M4F][Bi Dangerous Himbo Speaker][Mistreated Listener][First Date][Family Drama][SPICY][Flirting][Cuddles][Kissing][Comfort][Slightly Escalating Yandere][Mild Angst][Stargazing][CW: Mentions of Drug Use/Narcissistic Family]

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[Scene opens in an overlook in the forest]

[SFX: Forest ambiance and a car shutting off/shifting with excessive weight]

[Z] ā€œHere we go! This is the overlook where I chill when my brain gets overloaded. I figured some peace after that loud-ass action movie and dinner might be nice.ā€

[Pause]

[He relaxes in the bed of his truck]

[Z] ā€œCā€™mon, hop on up in the truck bed with me! The view is great.ā€

[Pause]

[He blushes]

[Z] ā€œ... I meant theā€¦ the starsā€¦ Yes. But, um, if youā€™re comfortable, you can sit with me.ā€

[Pause]

[You climb up next to him and settle in. The night sky is crystal clear]

[Pause!]

[Z] ā€œHuh? You can see Mercury?ā€

[You point up, moving closer to him so he can see]

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œReally? That little blue dot is Mercury?... Damn.ā€

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œ...Is that dot something?ā€

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œOhā€¦ OH! So thatā€™s the Big Dipper? Man, I thought it was just a bunch of dots!ā€

[Pause]

[He pauses as you shiver]

[Z] ā€œCold?ā€

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œCā€™mere, Iā€™ll wrap you in my jacket. Thatā€™ll keep you nice and warm.ā€

[...Pause]

[You climb into his arms and rest against him. You didnā€™t expect to feel this comfortable so soon, but you chalk it up to the himbo energy]

[Z] ā€œThere we goā€¦ Just straddle my lap and rest. Iā€™ll get ya warmed up.ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[Zach settles while you rest in his lap, nonchalant]

[Z] ā€œ...Want to hear the funniest thing ever?ā€

[Pause?]

[He grins]

[Z] ā€œYour brother totally offered to sleep with me if I let him off the hook. I looked him up and down and said, ā€˜Mmh, nah. I donā€™t do uneven transactions that arenā€™t in my favorā€™.ā€

[...]

[You didnā€™t think you could laugh that hard but there it is]

[Z, with a chuckle] ā€œYeah, Iā€™ve never seen the man deflate like that. Fucker usually talks a big game but the second I came after him, it was-ā€.

[He puts on a mocking voice]

[Z] ā€œā€˜Oh no, Mister Zach! Pwease donā€™t hurt me! Twas only a little bit of the Devilā€™s cabbage! I pwomise, Iā€™m a good boy!ā€™. Mmhm. Asshole is used to everyone gassing him up, making him feel heā€™s Godā€™s gift to mankind.ā€

[...]

[Zach eases, rubbing your back gently]

[Z] ā€œ...Iā€™m sorry you donā€™t have a good relationship with your twin. I donā€™t know a lot about twin bonds, or whatever, but it seems like itā€™d hurt a lot if your twin treated you like garbage and had your parents in on it as well.ā€

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œ...For what itā€™s worth, youā€™re definitely the hot one.ā€

[Pause!!]

[He gives you that fanged smile, half-feral and half-goofy]

[Z] ā€œWhat am I meant to do?! Iā€™ve been crazy over you since you smiled at me at the shelterā€¦ā€

[SFX: Heartbeats]

[Your face grows heated. Itā€™s just hit you that youā€™re in this giant of a manā€™s lap, palms on his chest]

[P-Pauseā€¦?]

[Z] ā€œWhatā€™s so special about youā€¦? Sweets, I am a BIG guy. Six foot nine, almost four hundred plus. That tends to spook people. It doesnā€™t help that Iā€™ve got a reputation for swinging at anyone that presses me. Plus, you know, drug dealer?ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[Z] ā€œExactly! ā€˜You donā€™t judge!ā€™. I sauntered in there with my hair hanging damned near to my ankles, looking like I should be looking for some dragon to summon for a wish, and you just smiled at me and said, ā€˜How can I help you, sir?ā€™.ā€

[He lets his head flop back, looking up at the stars as though theyā€™ve mystified him]

[Z] ā€œ...How you said ā€˜sirā€™... Do you know how confusing it is to be surrounded by adorable animals while staring at the pretty girl helping me pick one like I wanted to devour her? Pretty confusing. Tony was hanging out at my place when I brought HD home, saw the look on my face, and went, ā€˜OH SHIT, who got you simping?!ā€™. Assholeā€¦ He right, though.ā€

[SFX: Escalated heartbeats]

[P-Pause]

[Zach smiles down at you. Dangerous. Sweet]

[Z] ā€œ...And then you asked me out. We came here to look at some stars, and youā€™re straddling my lap, palms on my chest, totally calm. Mmgh, itā€™s not fair! I promise Iā€™m doing my best to behave and be a ā€˜gentlemanā€™ but my dumb caveman brain is like: ā€˜Pretty lady. Throw on bed. Continue bloodlineā€™.ā€

[You canā€™t help it and burst out laughing. He joins in pretty fast]

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œHeheā€¦ Iā€™m glad you appreciate openness. I guess I just know what I wantā€¦ Truth be told, Tony kept pushing me to go back and ask you out, andā€¦ I was scared. Iā€™ve had the shit kicked out of me by life, friends, and family, but Iā€™ve endured. But youā€¦ did something to me, just by treating me like I was any other person. Soā€¦ā€

[He leans forward, pressing you closer to him]

[SFX: Crazy heartbeats, oh no heā€™s hot]

[Z] ā€œ...Iā€™m gonna kiss you for it. K?ā€

[...K]

[He draws you in, gentle but insistent. The harshness of the mint on his tongue combined with the warmth of his body coats your brain in a fog]

[SFX: Smooching, if Lord Algorithm allows]

[Heā€™s dangerous. You know thatā€¦ but you canā€™t bring yourself to pull away]

[Pauseā€¦]

[He grins again with a big old himbo blush]

[Z] ā€œSoooā€¦ how charming does a guy need to be to be considered boyfriend material?ā€

[Pause <3]

[He laughs]

[Z] ā€œAbout my level, huh? Thatā€™s certainly convenientā€¦ā€

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œHehe, no, Iā€™m not gonna push further. I donā€™t want you to feel pressured, butā€¦ Not gonna lie, you keep being this perfect and Iā€™m gonna have to take that necklace your brother stole off your Mom and smelt it down into a ring~ā€.

[...Pause?]

[His smile fades, replaced by a subtle but smoldering anger]

[Z] ā€œ...You want to pay me back for him so your Mom can get her heirloom back?ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[He shuts his eyes and sighs]

[Z] ā€œ... No need. Iā€™ll just give it to you to hand off.ā€

[Pause???]

[Z] ā€œSweets, I run my own business. I have plenty of money. It was about the principle of it, and Chris has HOPEFULLY learned not to screw around with people that could body him and not think twice about it.ā€

[SFX: The necklace rattling as he hands it to the Listener]

[Z] ā€œHereā€¦ā€

[Pause <3]

[Z] ā€œHey! Donā€™t say Iā€™m a good person, youā€™ll ruin my whole image!ā€

[Pause <3]

[He laughs and gives you a little smooch on the crown]

[Z] ā€œIā€™m glad youā€™ll keep my terrible secret~.ā€

[He pauses, smile fading]

[Z] ā€œ...Do me a favor, Sweets. You be careful when you give that back. Your brotherā€¦ Iā€™ve seen him in a state you havenā€™t. Itā€™s notā€¦ one you should be present for. OK?ā€

[...]

[He tenses under you]

[Z] ā€œ...What do you mean when you say youā€™ve seen worse from him?ā€

[...]

[Z] ā€œ...OK. OK, we donā€™t gotta talk about it. Butā€¦ You got my number. If he does somethingā€¦ If your family does something, you call me. OK?ā€

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œPromise?ā€

[Pause <3]

[Z] ā€œGood. Love you.ā€

[He leans back and shuts his eyes for nearly a solid minute before they pop back open in panic]

[Z] ā€œI-I meant in aā€¦ A friendly way! Admiration! R-Respectā€¦ fuck.ā€

[You pat his chest and he relaxes]

[Pause]

[Z] ā€œ...You donā€™t judge. Hehā€¦ Good. Cā€™mon, tell me more about the stars. I could listen to you talk foreverā€¦ā€

[SFX: Forest ambiance as the scene fades]

[To be continued]


Note: I couldn't help it, I had to write more of him.

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