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Context: You are one of a set of twins, and your family has never made it hidden that they like your brother more. You've been mistreated most of your life, but you'd hoped you could have one birthday celebration on your terms. Naturally, your brother has ruined your night. It seems like someone besides you might have taken offense to that... and did something about it. You couldn't help but repay him with a date.
Setting: An overlook in the forest
Tags:[M4F][Bi Dangerous Himbo Speaker][Mistreated Listener][First Date][Family Drama][SPICY][Flirting][Cuddles][Kissing][Comfort][Slightly Escalating Yandere][Mild Angst][Stargazing][CW: Mentions of Drug Use/Narcissistic Family]
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[Scene opens in an overlook in the forest]
[SFX: Forest ambiance and a car shutting off/shifting with excessive weight]
[Z] āHere we go! This is the overlook where I chill when my brain gets overloaded. I figured some peace after that loud-ass action movie and dinner might be nice.ā
[Pause]
[He relaxes in the bed of his truck]
[Z] āCāmon, hop on up in the truck bed with me! The view is great.ā
[Pause]
[He blushes]
[Z] ā... I meant theā¦ the starsā¦ Yes. But, um, if youāre comfortable, you can sit with me.ā
[Pause]
[You climb up next to him and settle in. The night sky is crystal clear]
[Pause!]
[Z] āHuh? You can see Mercury?ā
[You point up, moving closer to him so he can see]
[Pause]
[Z] āReally? That little blue dot is Mercury?... Damn.ā
[Pause]
[Z] ā...Is that dot something?ā
[Pause]
[Z] āOhā¦ OH! So thatās the Big Dipper? Man, I thought it was just a bunch of dots!ā
[Pause]
[He pauses as you shiver]
[Z] āCold?ā
[Pause]
[Z] āCāmere, Iāll wrap you in my jacket. Thatāll keep you nice and warm.ā
[...Pause]
[You climb into his arms and rest against him. You didnāt expect to feel this comfortable so soon, but you chalk it up to the himbo energy]
[Z] āThere we goā¦ Just straddle my lap and rest. Iāll get ya warmed up.ā
[Pauseā¦]
[Zach settles while you rest in his lap, nonchalant]
[Z] ā...Want to hear the funniest thing ever?ā
[Pause?]
[He grins]
[Z] āYour brother totally offered to sleep with me if I let him off the hook. I looked him up and down and said, āMmh, nah. I donāt do uneven transactions that arenāt in my favorā.ā
[...]
[You didnāt think you could laugh that hard but there it is]
[Z, with a chuckle] āYeah, Iāve never seen the man deflate like that. Fucker usually talks a big game but the second I came after him, it was-ā.
[He puts on a mocking voice]
[Z] āāOh no, Mister Zach! Pwease donāt hurt me! Twas only a little bit of the Devilās cabbage! I pwomise, Iām a good boy!ā. Mmhm. Asshole is used to everyone gassing him up, making him feel heās Godās gift to mankind.ā
[...]
[Zach eases, rubbing your back gently]
[Z] ā...Iām sorry you donāt have a good relationship with your twin. I donāt know a lot about twin bonds, or whatever, but it seems like itād hurt a lot if your twin treated you like garbage and had your parents in on it as well.ā
[Pause]
[Z] ā...For what itās worth, youāre definitely the hot one.ā
[Pause!!]
[He gives you that fanged smile, half-feral and half-goofy]
[Z] āWhat am I meant to do?! Iāve been crazy over you since you smiled at me at the shelterā¦ā
[SFX: Heartbeats]
[Your face grows heated. Itās just hit you that youāre in this giant of a manās lap, palms on his chest]
[P-Pauseā¦?]
[Z] āWhatās so special about youā¦? Sweets, I am a BIG guy. Six foot nine, almost four hundred plus. That tends to spook people. It doesnāt help that Iāve got a reputation for swinging at anyone that presses me. Plus, you know, drug dealer?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[Z] āExactly! āYou donāt judge!ā. I sauntered in there with my hair hanging damned near to my ankles, looking like I should be looking for some dragon to summon for a wish, and you just smiled at me and said, āHow can I help you, sir?ā.ā
[He lets his head flop back, looking up at the stars as though theyāve mystified him]
[Z] ā...How you said āsirā... Do you know how confusing it is to be surrounded by adorable animals while staring at the pretty girl helping me pick one like I wanted to devour her? Pretty confusing. Tony was hanging out at my place when I brought HD home, saw the look on my face, and went, āOH SHIT, who got you simping?!ā. Assholeā¦ He right, though.ā
[SFX: Escalated heartbeats]
[P-Pause]
[Zach smiles down at you. Dangerous. Sweet]
[Z] ā...And then you asked me out. We came here to look at some stars, and youāre straddling my lap, palms on my chest, totally calm. Mmgh, itās not fair! I promise Iām doing my best to behave and be a āgentlemanā but my dumb caveman brain is like: āPretty lady. Throw on bed. Continue bloodlineā.ā
[You canāt help it and burst out laughing. He joins in pretty fast]
[Pause]
[Z] āHeheā¦ Iām glad you appreciate openness. I guess I just know what I wantā¦ Truth be told, Tony kept pushing me to go back and ask you out, andā¦ I was scared. Iāve had the shit kicked out of me by life, friends, and family, but Iāve endured. But youā¦ did something to me, just by treating me like I was any other person. Soā¦ā
[He leans forward, pressing you closer to him]
[SFX: Crazy heartbeats, oh no heās hot]
[Z] ā...Iām gonna kiss you for it. K?ā
[...K]
[He draws you in, gentle but insistent. The harshness of the mint on his tongue combined with the warmth of his body coats your brain in a fog]
[SFX: Smooching, if Lord Algorithm allows]
[Heās dangerous. You know thatā¦ but you canāt bring yourself to pull away]
[Pauseā¦]
[He grins again with a big old himbo blush]
[Z] āSoooā¦ how charming does a guy need to be to be considered boyfriend material?ā
[Pause <3]
[He laughs]
[Z] āAbout my level, huh? Thatās certainly convenientā¦ā
[Pause]
[Z] āHehe, no, Iām not gonna push further. I donāt want you to feel pressured, butā¦ Not gonna lie, you keep being this perfect and Iām gonna have to take that necklace your brother stole off your Mom and smelt it down into a ring~ā.
[...Pause?]
[His smile fades, replaced by a subtle but smoldering anger]
[Z] ā...You want to pay me back for him so your Mom can get her heirloom back?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[He shuts his eyes and sighs]
[Z] ā... No need. Iāll just give it to you to hand off.ā
[Pause???]
[Z] āSweets, I run my own business. I have plenty of money. It was about the principle of it, and Chris has HOPEFULLY learned not to screw around with people that could body him and not think twice about it.ā
[SFX: The necklace rattling as he hands it to the Listener]
[Z] āHereā¦ā
[Pause <3]
[Z] āHey! Donāt say Iām a good person, youāll ruin my whole image!ā
[Pause <3]
[He laughs and gives you a little smooch on the crown]
[Z] āIām glad youāll keep my terrible secret~.ā
[He pauses, smile fading]
[Z] ā...Do me a favor, Sweets. You be careful when you give that back. Your brotherā¦ Iāve seen him in a state you havenāt. Itās notā¦ one you should be present for. OK?ā
[...]
[He tenses under you]
[Z] ā...What do you mean when you say youāve seen worse from him?ā
[...]
[Z] ā...OK. OK, we donāt gotta talk about it. Butā¦ You got my number. If he does somethingā¦ If your family does something, you call me. OK?ā
[Pause]
[Z] āPromise?ā
[Pause <3]
[Z] āGood. Love you.ā
[He leans back and shuts his eyes for nearly a solid minute before they pop back open in panic]
[Z] āI-I meant in aā¦ A friendly way! Admiration! R-Respectā¦ fuck.ā
[You pat his chest and he relaxes]
[Pause]
[Z] ā...You donāt judge. Hehā¦ Good. Cāmon, tell me more about the stars. I could listen to you talk foreverā¦ā
[SFX: Forest ambiance as the scene fades]
[To be continued]
Note: I couldn't help it, I had to write more of him.
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