Part 2

Context: You are one of a set of twins, and your family has never made it hidden that they like your brother more. You've been mistreated most of your life, but you'd hoped you could have one birthday celebration on your terms. Naturally, your brother has ruined your night. It seems like someone besides you might have taken offense to that... and intends to do something about it.

Setting: Zach's diner

Tags:[MMM4F][Waiter Speaker][Dangerous Himbo Speaker][Twin Brother Speaker][Mistreated Listener][Birthday Blues][Family Drama][SPICY][Meet-Cute?][Comfort][Cute][Asking Out][Flirting][Protective][Maybe a Lil Yandere][CW: Narc BS/Mistreated Listener/Mentions of Drugs]

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[T] = Tony, a very nice waiter, bi-icon

[Z] = Zach, master chef, danger himbo, hair like an auburn-headed Raditz

[C] = Chris, your twin brother. Fuck that guy

[Scene opens in a nice diner]

[SFX: Diner ambiance and approaching footsteps]

[You sit, staring at what’s left of your meal, as your waiter approaches again]

[T] “How’s the food, Miss?”

[...]

[T] “Great? Excellent! Did you want me to pack the rest away or…?”

[Pause…]

[T] “Sure… We can pack up the birthday cake if, um…”

[He glances around the empty table for ten. It’s just you]

[...]

[T] “Don’t want it anymore? Ah… I can take it off the bill?”

[Pause]

[SFX: Cash rustling]

[T] “...Um, you just handed me three-hundred dollars…?”

[Pause…]

[The young waiter looks uncertain]

[T] “I-I, um… Ma’am, this tip is more than generous, and offering to let us eat the cake is angelic - seriously, Zach makes the best cake. Dude is a mountain with a glam rocker mane of hair, but the man can cook with the best of them.”

[Pause?]

[T] “Hey, yeah! He did just adopt a little dog recently. Hot Dog! Wait, how’d you know that?”

[Pause]

[The waiter looks stunned for a moment before he turns to maximum deviousness]

[T] “...Holy shit, it’s you… The lady that walked him through the adoption… Oh my God, no way, this is perfect. Please, sit RIGHT there for one sec!”

[SFX: Tony hurrying off]

[Pause, filled by:]

[SFX: Diner ambiance]

[Confused, you sit and wait, trying to keep composed. A familiar, surly, mountain of a man emerges from the kitchen, looking cross]

[Z] “What, Tony? It’s the end of the dinner rush and I’m the only cook back… there…”

[Pause]

[He freezes when he sees you, eyes widening]

[Z] “O-Oh! It’s… Y-Y-You’re the nice lady that works at the shelter!”

[T] “And, with that, you owe me a beer. Good luck, Casanova! I’ll handle the food!”

[The younger man practically skips off, quite pleased with himself]

[Pause]

[Zach beams with a wide smile and approaches]

[Z] “H-Hey! I, ah… I didn’t expect you to, um… T-To come and dine at my diner here!”

[Pause]

[Z] “Huh? Yeah! Yeah, Hot Dog is doing great! I got him some of those toys you recommended, and the anxiety meds have…”

[He pauses, cocking his head]

[Z] “Have… Have you been crying?”

[...]

[SFX: Zach pulling out a chair and sitting his massive self down]

[Z] “Talk to me.”

[...]

[Z] “Nuh-uh. I don’t want to hear ‘It’s no big deal’. You’re sitting at a table for ten by yourself, sobbing your poor little heart out, and-”.

[Again, he freezes]

[Z] “...The birthday cake Tony asked me to bake… Oh, shit…”

[...Pause]

[Z] “...Your whole family was meant to be here?”

[Pause…]

[Z] “But your twin brother threw a party instead…”

[Pause]

[Z] “And all of ‘em, even your friends, decided to go there instead since it’s his birthday, too…”

[...]

[You try to smile but more tears come tumbling out until you finally just hide them behind your hands]

[...Pause]

[Z, soothing] “Hey… Hey. I’m glad you thought my food was excellent but… Jesus, that is so low. Did he even invite you? Or were you under the impression that this was the plan and he just swept the rug out from under you?”

[...]

[The behemoth of a cook sits silently by your side while you try and cry it out with some dignity. It’s surprisingly difficult]

[Long Pause, if desired, filled by:]

[SFX: Diner ambiance]

[Z] “You look so familiar, even outside of our first meeting. Something about those haunting eyes...Is your brother’s name Chris, perchance?”

[...Pause?]

[A truly wicked smile crosses his lips as you confirm]

[Z] “...Hehe, I know Chris. He’s one of my best customers…”

[Pause???]

[Zach reaches into his pocket and pulls out his phone, flicking through contacts]

[Z] “At this diner? Hee hee, no… no.”

[Pause???]

[Z] “Here we go. I have him under ‘Bitch that owes me money’. Watch this, eh?”

[Pause…]

[You watch as he dials your brother. After a few moments, the call is picked up. You hear your brother laugh before he finally answers:]

[C] “Hang on, hang on, I gotta take this! Hello?”

[...]

[Z, cheerful] “Hey, buddy! Glad you finally answered my calls?”

[...]

[C] “Huh? Hang on, hang on, I can’t hear you over the party. Let me put you on speaker!”

[...]

[...No]

[Pause]

[C] “Alright, alright. Chat at me, you got Chris!”

[Pause]

[Z, grinning] “Aw, no worries, buddy! Can you hear me better now that you’ve put me on speaker?”

[You’re not even there and you can physically feel your twin brother die inside]

[C] “Z-Zach! I-I, uh…”

[Z] “What’s wrong? Why are you so worried about a friendly conversation with your favorite buddy?”

[C] “Dude, keep it down! My mom is right-!”

[Z, shouting] “WHAT?! I CAN’T HEAR YOU OVER YOU OWING ME MONEY FOR THE DRUGS YOU TRIED TO STEAL FROM ME!”

[The party on the other side stops almost immediately, and you hear your mother gasp. None of the other diners seem to mind all that much, though]

[Pause!]

[C, desperate] “Zach, please-!!”

[Z] “STILL CAN’T HEAR YOU, BRO! DID YOU WANT TO PAY ME BACK FOR THE DRUGS YOU STOLE OR DID YOU WANT ME TO PAWN THIS DIAMOND NECKLACE YOU FLEECED OFF OF YOUR MOM? CAUSE THAT’LL ONLY COVER HALF!”

[SFX: The call ending]

[You stare in disbelief as Zach tucks his phone away, an odd mix of livid and smug]

[Z] “... Happy birthday?”

[...Pause]

[You burst out laughing and his grin widens]

[Z] “A pretty laugh, a pretty smile, and a postponed ass-whooping for her shitty brother. That’s what a lady like you deserves… I know Chris. I know sides of him that someone like you doesn’t need to be exposed to.”

[He goes stiff as a board as you lean over and give him a kiss on the cheek]

[<3]

[Z] “W-Wuhbuh… kiss… on cheek… Kiss there? On me? From you?”

[Pause <3]

[He’s blushing, which seems illegal on a man that large and imposing]

[Z] “Y-You’re welcome… H-Hey, um…?”

[Pause?]

[He gawps at you as you make your move, even his ears turning red]

[Z] “Y-Yeah? Yes! Yes, I would LOVE to see a movie with you this Saturday! Absolutely! Yes!”

[Pause?]

[SFX: Them exchanging numbers]

[Z] “Wow… Tony had been gassing me up for ages, saying: ‘Go ask her! Go ask her! Betcha two hundred she’ll say yes!’.”

[Pause]

[Zach laughs]

[Z] “I guess it is lucky you asked me out instead, huh? Two hundred dollars and it’s not even being spent on the pretty lady? Like, Tony’s a looker but, c’mon.”

[T, distantly] “YOU COULDN’T AFFORD ME ANYWAY!”

[You share a smile with your new friend. It’s not exactly how you saw the night going but… it might be better]

[Pause]

[Z] “Yeah… I’ll text you the second I’m off shift… Thanks for taking the lead and asking me out, Sweets.”

[He winks at you, running a pierced tongue over very sharp canines]

[Z] “Means I can take the lead from now on…”

[You shiver. It’s not a bad one]

[Pause <3]

[Z] “Heh, yeah… I’ll see you around. And, hey…”

[He leans over. You think he’s going to kiss your cheek but he tilts his lips into your ear instead, whispering:]

[Z] “Happy birthday~. Remind me I owe you some spankings, hehe.”

[With that, he stands, gives you one more wild grin, and lopes back into the kitchen]

[...]

[You might just be in danger…]

[...]

[SFX: A diner bell as the Listener exits]

[Oh well~]

[To be continued]

Note: If you want to fall in love with Zach immediately, just know that this is exactly how he would announce that the Listener is his girlfriend. Witness him. Also, no joke, that show is awesome and you should watch it. And Rise of the TMNT. Rise Donnie is best Donnie :3