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[MAA4A] The Devil's Waiting Room [Werewolf Convict Speaker][Cop Speakers][Shapeshifter Listener][Escape/Chase][Mystery][Supernatural][Horror Elements][Mafia Elements][Flirting?][Lore Drop][Xryl Listener][Disturbing][CW: Murder/Horror Elements]
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ItsEsmeJones is a male looking for anyone in Disturbing
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Context: The Devil's Waiting Room is an innocent enough cenote. Or was, until fifty-plus bodies were discovered within its bowels. Local police believe that a crime family is using it as a dumping ground for their victims. The truth...? A bit odder.

Setting: The forest/the Devil's Waiting Room (cenote)

Tags:[MAA4A][Werewolf Convict Speaker][Cop Speakers][Shapeshifter Listener][Escape/Chase][Mystery][Supernatural][Horror Elements][Mafia Elements][Flirting?][Lore Drop][Xryl Listener][Disturbing][CW: Murder/Horror Elements]

Usage: You may tweak or record this script. Gender flipping is OK! Please credit me if you use this script in any of your projects. If you would like to use this script for a paywalled recording, please note:

Monetization: All forms of monetization are OK with me! Youtube, Patreon, etc. I would appreciate being able to listen to the recording, if possible. Let me know if you have any questions. Thank you!

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[W] = Connor, a werewolf escaped convict

[C1] = Cop One, one day from retirement

[C2] = Cop Two, second day on the job :(

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Xryl - A Xennian entity whose shapeshifting ability is almost involuntary/difficult to control. Due to the uncertainty of their anatomy, Xryl often take the Xennian empathy innate to them and use it to prey on others / to defend their own deteriorating mental health. Some become so convinced that they are losing their own mass / will be reduced to nothing, they develop a psychosis similar to 'Wendigo' psychosis' - a desire to consume flesh, even if unnecessary.

"They hide in plain sight, smile with fake enthusiasm. Listen for the ones that sound wrong. The ones that sound like snakes in a rabbit warren. The ones that smile like wolves" - Commander Soren, P.W 308.

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[Scene opens on a desperate chase through the forest]

[SFX: A chase between two cops and an escaping werewolf]

[W] “Hff, hff, c’mon! C’mon, just gotta make it to that stupid cave!”

[Pause]

[Two human cops sprint close behind, guns drawn. The first calls out, determined:]

[C1] “Give it up, Connor!]

[C2] “You’re not escaping back to your miserable little doggy crime family this time!”

[Pause]

[W] “C’mon, c’mon, where… Mom said, ‘Go to The Devil’s Waiting Room. Don’t be afraid. Bring a gift’, which, nngh, a bit vague there, Mom! Rrgh, however vague that woman is, it doesn’t matter! She always, huff, knows what to do!”

[SFX: Extended chasing/gradually building river noises]

[Rec. improv for the chase to VA’s desired length]

[W] “C’mon… River should fall right into the damned cave, and after that many humans were found dead in it, there should be warning signs all over!”

[Pause]

[C2] “He’s heading for the cenote!”

[C1] “Trying to jump to your death is foolish, Connor! Just give it up and serve your damned sentence!”

[W] “I’ll fucking die first!”

[Pause]

[Moonlight hits the top of the cenote and Connor cries out in relief]

[W] “There’s the fucking cenote! C’mon, c’mon!”

[SFX: Further sprinting]

[C2] “Don’t jump!”

[C1] “Seriously, we don’t want to come down after your dumb ass corpse!”

[W] “I HOPE YOU GET THE BENDS HAVING TO DO IT!”

[The werewolf, with a grunt of determination, takes a running leap through the opening to the cenote]

[C1] “Oh godamnit-!”

[C2] “Motherf-!”

[SFX: Rushing air for a moment before a heavy splash]

[Connor dives into the cerulean waters, stunned by the cold for a moment before he surfaces with a gasp]

[W] “Gahhh! Pfah, plegh! W-Why is the water so cold, we live in the South, f-fuck! Buhhhh, land… where’s some land…”

[SFX: The water shifting as he looks about]

[Pause]

[W] “There!”

[SFX: Hurried swimming]

[Connor swims toward a small patch of land, struggling to control his breathing]

[SFX: Footsteps hurrying down a wooden staircase]

[The moment Connor crawls on to the land, the cops are waiting for him]

[W] “Wh-?! How did you two get down here without jumping?!”

[C1] “...We… We took the stairs down.”

[C2] “Yeah, they… haven’t taken the stairs down, yet. Which is kind of shitty.”

[C1] “Yeah, they found like… fifty plus bodies here. This place is named The Devil’s Waiting Room for a reason…”

[SFX: Hissing/cicada-like chirping sort of blending into water dripping from the ceiling]

[W] “Fifty bodies…? Christ, how many idiots have come down here to dive or explore and just been left to rot?!”

[C1] “What do you know! The bodies didn’t even show signs of drowning they were all-!”

[C2] “Um… Do you guys hear that?”

[SFX: Hissing/cicada-like chirping]

[You look down at your quarry as they shift and move about nervously. Each time they turn their backs on you, it gets that little bit harder not to *lunge*]

[W] “...I am desperately trying to remember if we get water moccasins in this part of the world… And if they actively hiss while swimming…”

[Pause]

[C2, shaky] “I’m seeing movement in the water…”

[C1] “Jesus Christ, what is that thing?!”

[SFX: The cops screaming/panicking/firing wildly into the cave]

[C2] “It’s on the ceiling! Like a spider!”

[C1] “No, Christ, it’s in the water! I saw tentacles!”

[You continue to play with them, body morphing and changing at will. You know their scent. Human. Food. The third you somewhat know. Werewolf. Too tough and hairy]

[W, with a groan] “You idiots need to run!”

[Pause.]

[No, no, can’t have that]

[SFX: The cops both screaming as you pounce on them]

[Note: How graphic this is is up to the VA]

[You lunge down from the ceiling, body morphing to semi-arachnid as you pounce on the humans]

[W] “JESUS CHRIST-!”

[SFX: A struggle/blood spatter followed by a pause]

[Pause…]

[SFX: Bodies being wrapped up in twine-like substance]

[You whistle a bit while you wrap up dinner in front of the startled wolf boy]

[W] “...That’s why there’s so many fucking bodies down here… You. Whatever the fuck you are…”

[Pause~]

[W] “...Xryl?”

[Pause]

[He winces as you take a bite from your supper, munching like a proud cat]

[W] “Aha… That’s why. Heard of your kind… Shapeshifters that love to consume humans, right?”

[Pause <3]

[W] “Well, uh… I greatly appreciate you taking out those blues for me, my arachnid-like friend.”

[SFX: Bones creaking/general shapeshifting]

[Pause?]

[W] “Oh! You can look more werewolf-like… You uh… Wow, damn, you wear it well.”

[<3 Pause <3]

[W, to himself] “Godamnit, Connor, this is literally the stupidest time you could start flirting… with a human-eating serial killer…”

[He rubs his face, apparently forgetting you have big wolf ears now, too]

[W] “C’mon, man, this is why Paul says we look for dates like we’re looking to fucking die… Be cool.”

[...]

[Oh, he’s *fun*]

[You creep over on all fours, watching in delight as he tenses and turns red the second you straddle him]

[W] “Oof! O-Oh, uh… you… Decided to straddle me.”

[Pause~]

[Your sharp teeth are reflected in his eyes as you peer down at him with a wide, shark-like smile]

[W] “U-Uh…”

[Pause]

[W] “Hello to you, too.”

[SFX: Some paper rustling]

[W] “Mom said to bring a gift but she didn’t really specify for who or…what… So, um… I hope flowers are OK? My terrifying friend?”

[He holds up a somewhat crushed bouquet of buttercups. For reasons you don’t understand, you coo and take them]

[Pause~]

[W] “You’re, uh, welcome.”

[Pause]

[W] “Are you, um, going to stop straddling me any time soon? I don’t mind it, honest, it’s just this cave floor isn’t great for my back. And this fucking cave centipede is kind of crawling somewhere uncomfortable.”

[<3]

[He’s funny. Your one weakness]

[SFX: The Listener moving back - Rec. a kind of hissing/cicada-like noise for momevent]

[The werewolf stands and brushes himself off]

[W] “OK. Level with me.”

[Pause?]

[W] “How exactly did my Mom figure out that you’d eat a human, if they were brought to you, but not a werewolf?”

[Medium Pause]

[He laughs]

[W] “Tried to send Dad down here one night to ‘find an earring’ and hoped you’d spook him, huh? No wonder he insists he had a giant cave monster take a literal bite out of his ass before spittin’ him out. Heh, fair. Well, I do appreciate the save, uh… Do you have a name?”

[Pause.]

[W] “No? Not even a nickname?”

[Pause.]

[W] “Well… I think I’m gonna call you ‘Nurse’.”

[Pause?]

[He winks at you as he starts towards the exit of the cave]

[W] “You’re the only thing in the Devil’s Waiting Room, so to speak, and you’re definitely the kind of ‘nurse’ who could be confused with a black widow. I think it fits. Ya bring ‘em in with that winning smile and then-”.

[He snaps his jaws shut with another wink]

[W] “Hello, Nurse! Well, ‘Hello, God!’, more like, hehe.”

[Pause?]

[W] “What’s a ‘God’? … Nothing that you’d ever find down here, sweetheart. I’ll say hi to Mom for ya. Thanks again for the save, Nurse.”

[With that, he lopes off. It takes you a moment to realize that he didn’t even have to haggle for his freedom and, when you do, you can’t help but pout…]

[SFX: The Listener shifting back into the cave]

[Oh, well. Maybe next time]

[To be continued?]

Note: I’ll leave it up to y’all if this one carries on. If it does, expect Venom-like shenanigans between these ‘besties’ and at least one, “MA! THERE’S A WEIRD FUCKIN’ GUY OUTSIDE! THEY GOT SPIDER LEGS FOR HAIR! MAAAA!!!!” joke.

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