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[ ] = Added Sound Effect
* * = Silent Insert
{ } = Line Delivery
Reprobate
[knock]
*small pause*
[knock]
{muffled}
Come on, this has to be the right house!
*small pause*
[knock]
{muffled}
418 Harmony Laneā¦ was it supposed to beā¦ 814? 218? No, Iām sure Iāve got the right address.
[knock]
*small pause*
{muffled}
Maybe I-
[door opens]
Oh! Youāre home! Andā¦
*small pause*
Oh my godā¦ youāre actually here. And itās actually you! Iām here and youāre here and-!
*small pause*
Hi! Do you have a moment?
*listener implies*
Please, if you could spare just a few seconds. Iām not trying to sell you anything or get you to sign a petition, Iām here about your days as-
(quick inhale)
Whoops! Not supposed to say that out loud! Andā¦ probably not supposed to loudly exclaim that either. Anywayā¦ I had a whole speech planned, more of a monologue really because, you know, monologues are kinda our bread and butter but Iām blanking now soā¦ can I come in?
*listener rejects*
Wait, donāt close the door! I promise this is important!
*listener ignores*
{rushed}
The Black Lotus Rests On The Clear Pond!
*small pause*
Pleaseā¦ let me in. I need help. Your help.
*listener accepts*
Thank you! You wonāt regret this, I promise. I just need an hour, tops! Well, technically I want a lot more than an hour butā¦ thatās for another time! Is there somewhere we can sit down?
*listener points*
Right, chairs, yes. Let me justā¦
[chair scooches]
Okay. Hi! My name is Shadow. Or maybe, Shade? I kinda liked Blue Shade butā¦ it just didnāt sound right, you know? I did think about Penumbra but that sounded too edgy soā¦
*small pause*
Iām sorry, Iām getting ahead of myself. My real nameās |Character Name|. Iāve been looking for you for a long time now.
*listener questions*
Well umā¦ Iām sure you donāt like to talk about it anymore or you wouldnāt have gone to such great lengths to hide this butā¦ I know about your time asā¦ as a villain. Really, I like to think of you as an Anti-Hero but, technically I donāt know if thatās true because your motives were always pretty obscure. Like, really obscure! Half the time, Iām not even sure you knew whose side you were on but-!
*listener interrupts*
Right! Focus. Okay umā¦ thatās why Iāve been looking for you. Iām looking for a teacher and who better to teach me than the best villain ever?!
*listener implies*
Please donātā¦ deny it. Iā¦ Iām definitely sure I got the right house. I promise, I havenāt told any authorities orā¦ anyone who couldnāt handle a secret, and I made extra super sure to never tell anyone more than they already knew! I just got a lot of little bits of information from a lot of people and put it all together. No paper trail, just me.
*listener questions*
Oh umā¦ right! Very right! I should just show you! Then youāll get it! Here, let me-
[chair scooches]
-Close these curtains andā¦
*small pause*
Okayā¦ here we go. Ready? Because, I donāt think Iāll be able to do this for very long.
*listener asks*
What am I doing? Iām showing you what Iām doing justā¦ here, watch!
[Vanish SFX]
See? Orā¦ more accurately, Donāt See? Get it? Because I faded into the shadows? Iāve been workshopping one-liners and I think thatās one of the better ones but-
(gag)
And thereās the vertigo!
[Vanish SFX]
Wow, that never gets any less shaky.
*listener speaks*
One second, I canāt really hear you, my brainās still a little bit scattered. Can we just umā¦ sit back down before I fall over?
*small pause*
(exhale)
Much better! Now umā¦ I think that explains why Iāveā¦ you know, tracked you down?
*listener denies*
No? But you should-!
*small pause*
Wait, this is a strategy thing, isnāt it? Not exposing anything, playing info close to the chest, all that stuff?
(giddy squeal)
Youāre exactly as good as they said youād be! Okay, soā¦ since youāre not going to admit to anything Iāll justā¦ lay out the board! This is great practice, I love it!
(clear throat)
So, as you can see, I am not exactly normal. I meanā¦ how many people do you know who can justā¦ fade into shadows? Iām going to guess exactly two. Me and you. And since I definitely know youāreā¦ you know, you, on account of this nice but unassuming house, and that little scar under your ear, and the fact that you recognized your old activation phrase, I know you are the only person in the world who understands what Iām going through! How I think! And if there was even one person who could show me the ropes of how to be that perfect, suave, evil-but-they-have-a-good-point villain, itās you!
*listener disagrees*
See, thatās exactly why youāre perfect. Any lesser person would be dying to take all this praise, recollect every single detail, and then maybe kill me for knowing too muchā¦ but thatās not you! You always had things under control. Still do! I had to bribe and blackmail so many people just to figure out you were still alive! Much less where you were or when I could find you! That is why I need you to teach me!
*listener muses*
Itās not like you wonāt get anything out of it! Believe me, Iāve been considering how to properly compensate you for your knowledge for ages now! First, I am willing to offer you a twenty percent cut from all of my heists, thefts, and ransoms for the first twenty-four months of my career. Second, I have perfected a chocolate chip cookie recipe that I would be happy to provide in two batch installments per week over pleasant conversation so thatās free food, and someone to talk to about all your past exploits. And thirdly, as Iāve alluded to I know about your time inā¦ letās call it experimental custody. I know you never managed to catch all of the people who hurt you. And since I donāt have a cool, tragic origin story, I am more than happy to make it my personal mission to finish what you started and hunt down everyone who tried to make you into a weapon.
*listener speaks*
Let me cut you off right there, and quickly run through my qualifications! I have a perfect criminal record, and Iāve kept my alias intact so my secret identityās in the bag. I have a bachelor's in Computer Science, youngest in my class, and I love tinkering so I can make all my own gadgets. Iām already dieting and maintaining a workout schedule for any physical aspects of villainy. Iām a quick learner. Iāve often been described as a person who always gets their way. And I can sew, stitch, and embroider so free costume!
*listener states*
I hear what youāre saying, but I really must insist. There are only likeā¦ twenty people in the world who have actual superpowers, and like three-quarters of them are heroes. Plus, none of them have your record. Or the same superpower as me! Youāre perfect for this.
*listener denies*
Come on, youāre stonewalling me here! Youāve got to give me something!
*listener comments*
Arenāt you curious about how I found you? Why we have the same power? Why I want to be a villain? Because all of those have the same satisfying answer, and would work great as a call to action for a mentor!
*listener avoids*
There you go, dodging again! You are great at this! I mean really, flawless.
*listener comments*
No, that means I especially have to tell you! Otherwise, you might say no, and that is not an option!
*small pause*
Here, flashback with me. Youāve been out of the lab for a little over two years. Youāre a sizeable way through your hitlist. Youāve already become the most successful cat burglar of all time, and youāve been dabbling in espionage. Thatās when you really got on the radar of the worldās governments and they started sending their heroes, hitmen, and whoever else they could scrounge up.
*small pause*
You were in Paris, it was a rainy night so perfect shadow conditions, you had just stolen a cassette tape orā¦ you know, whatever people stored information on back thenā¦ and then you ran into trouble. A special agent had actually managed to track you down through your crazy, shadow escape route and follow you back to a safe house. An agent with no superpowers, no flashy tech, no moles, just good old-fashioned detective work.
*small pause*
As she tells the story, you were impressed that she had actually managed to follow you. You chatted her up, had what she calls, āa very one-sided fightā, and then you escaped. Except you didnāt really escape. With the stuff you left behind in that safehouse, she managed to track you down six more times. Each time getting to know you a bit better, until one day, you set a trap for her, some words were exchanged, and you two started seeing eye to eye. And from then on, she tossed you a bone when she could, you helped out her agency a few times, and then one day, you stopped answering her dead drops. The next week, news about your ādeathā came out. Which was a real shame in timing, because if you had stuck around for two weeks longer, you would have gotten the news that she was pregnant.
*small pause*
Not blaming you, by the way. Iām not calling you a deadbeat dad or anything unlessā¦ you know, that is somehow true and you intentionally faked your death because you actually knew youād gotten my mom pregnant butā¦ this is going in a weird direction. Bottom line; Iām your kid. Surprise!
*listener questions*
Woah, seeing, actual emotion on your face isā¦ weird. But like good weird! And it was only there for a second, you hide it so well!
*listener repeats*
Oh, right! Yeah, umā¦ thatās why Iāve got your powers. No weird government project justā¦ genetics and one little near-death experience but that isnāt relevant right now. And umā¦ my mom is retired too, but she still has a ton of contacts and she told me plenty of stories so, I was in a pretty good position to find you. And since I heard all these stories, Iāve idolized you since before I could remember! Add in my upbringing with a professional spy for a mom, surrounded by secret agents, and with your blood in my veins and itās no surprise why Iām so okay withā¦ moral greys. I like to think of them as moral whites and that everyone else is grey butā¦ thatās not a very popular opinion soā¦
*small pause*
So yeah. Iām the perfect candidate for the role. Iām your legacy. We can both make some money, and be friends too, and if you think about it you kinda owe me like eighteen years of child support anyway sooā¦ howās about it?
*listener denies*
Wait umā¦ what?
*listener repeats*
Uhā¦ please?
*listener continues*
Oh, I umā¦ I hadnātā¦ expected that. Iā¦
*listener maintains*
Yeah, I know butā¦
*listener states*
Iā¦
*small pause*
Iām sorry for wasting your time thenā¦ sir. Iāllā¦ Iāll go.
[chair scooches]
Hey umā¦ before Iā¦ leave Iā¦
(sigh)
Do you have some money saved up?
*listener questions*
Wellā¦
(sigh)
My momās sick. Radiation poisoning turned cancerous. We think she got it from her work orā¦ from you orā¦ or maybe me andā¦ we umā¦ we canāt afford treatment. Thatās why I needed to find you. I always wanted to be a villain for fun and money andā¦ getting to seduce heroes butā¦ I was always planning to take it slow. Except now, if I canāt produce a couple million dollars inā¦ four monthsā¦ then my momās going to die.
*small pause*
You donāt have to teach me orā¦ or even see me again but, she really believes you loved her. Iā¦ I think you might have too. Andā¦ if thatās trueā¦ if you ever cared for her thenā¦ then she could use the help.
*listener denies*
Yeah, that umā¦ that makes sense. Iām sure you canāt justā¦ pull two mil out of thin air without attracting someā¦ unwanted attentionā¦
*small pause*
Hey uhā¦ thanks for letting me in. Believe it or not, Iāmā¦ Iām still really happy I got to see you. At least once. Uhā¦
(sigh)
Bye.
[door opens and closes]
*long pause*
[door opens]
*listener calls*
{far away}
Huh?
*listener repeats*
Wait, really?
*listener claims*
Yes! Ofā¦ of course! The dramatic fakeout! Thatās classic you, I should have known!
[running footsteps]
So, whatās the first lesson? Do you have some way to teach me to shadow longer or farther orā¦ Oh, will we do the first heist together? The old master coming out of retirement to show the new kid how itās down or-!
*listener states*
Lesson number one? Yes, anything. I am ready!
*listener speaks*
A good villain knows when to speak, and when to stay quiet.
*small pause*
{mumbling quickly}
A good villain knows when to speak, and when to stay quietā¦
*small pause*
Oh, weāre still outside, arenāt we?
*listener confirms*
Right, save the questions for behind closed doors. Got it!
*listener alludes*
Not what you meant? Thenā¦ what did you mean?
*listener states*
Youāllā¦ youāll show me? As in, youāll teach me?! Yes! Yes, please, thank you! I am ready to learn, I promise!
*listener speaks*
Right! Close the door, come in, and stand on the rug. Stand on the rug? Why?
*listener insists*
Okay umā¦
[door closes]
Soā¦ what happens now?
[platform slides]
{descending, getting quieter}
Secret Elevator Rug! Thatās so cooool!
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