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Notes: This script is okay for monetization. Can be used on Patreon, just let me know if you do. If you use it, please give credit. You can change pronouns if preferred but otherwise please don't edit the script. My scripts are meant for adult audiences and all characters are 18 . For clarification on the format of the script, any place that says (Pause) is a place for the Listener's response. Anything in \asterisks and italics** isn't meant to be read aloud, it's there to either hint at the tone or provide context that might help the script make more sense.
Summary: Listener is spending a stormy night watching movies when they hear a knock at their door, and they open it to find Narrator, their cute neighbor, has locked himself out of his apartment. Upon offering to let him stay the night, Narrator and Listener get to flirting, and the night ends with their first date.
Word Count: Approximately 1,306 words (Not including any actions or cues left in asterisks and italics)
Writer’s Notes: So I posted my last script a little over 2 weeks ago and it's been a busy couple weeks, so the long of the short of it is this; surgery went well, but I don't have great range and it still hurts a good amount. I promise that I still have scripts in the works and should have some done soon! In the meantime, enjoy this short script with a slightly himbo-esque character lol.
Script Below:
\Rain pours down hard against the windows, threatening at any second to turn into a thunderstorm. Listener has been lucky enough that they haven’t been out in the rain and is enjoying listening to the storm while watching a movie. A knock at their door makes Listener pause the movie to answer the door.**
\Sheepish** "Uh, hi. I'm not sure if you remember me, but I live in the apartment a couple doors down?"
(Pause)
"Yeah, I thought you would, but I felt awkward just assuming that. I mean, we talk sometimes but it’s usually just when we pass in the hall, so I wanted to make sure.”
\Narrator laughs awkwardly.**
"I'm sorry to bug you so late in the evening, but I um… I’m kind of in the middle of a situation, and I was hoping that you’d be willing to help me?”
(Pause)
“So I actually kind of locked myself out of my apartment and my roommate isn’t going to be home until tomorrow morning. I wanted to ask if I could um, if I could stay here with you? Just for a little bit? Please?"
(Pause)
\Relieved** "Oh my god, thank you so much."
\Listener gestures Narrator in, closing the door behind him. Narrator sighs, growing calmer.**
"Wow, it's warm in here. It's really nice."
(Pause)
"Oh no, I wasn't outside for too long. Probably just um…”
\Quieter* “An hour and a half?”
(Pause)
\Sheepish, embarrassed** "I may have forgotten my keys at the gym.”
(Pause)
“Well they were getting ready to close for the night and I didn’t want to make them stay late, so I left as soon as I could. I guess I forgot my keys because I was so focused on making sure I had everything else."
(Pause)
"Nope. Since it's the gym just down the street, I usually walk unless the weather is really terrible.”
\Listener points out the thunderstorm. Narrator laughs.**
“I didn’t realize it was supposed to storm like this. I thought it was supposed to be a light rain, which I actually like walking in. This, uh, this is a lot heavier than I thought it would be. I was completely soaked in less than a minute.”
(Pause)
"Huh? Oh! Oh shit, I'm so sorry, I'm getting water everywhere. Do you have a towel or something I can borrow to dry off with?”
(Pause)
“That sounds great, I’ll grab one. Oh, um, is the bathroom down the hall over here?”
(Pause)
“I figured; I think we have the same floor plan.”
\Narrator chuckles.**
“Alright, I’m going to go dry off so I don’t ruin your carpet. I’ll be right back.”
\Narrator walks down the hall to the bathroom before Listener hits ‘play’ on the movie. After a few moments, Narrator returns.**
“That’s better. Sorry again for getting water everywhere.”
(Pause)
\Casual** “Oh, yeah, my clothes are still wet, but it’s alright. It’s not like I can go home and change at this point.”
(Pause)
“I mean, yeah it’s cold but I don’t mind it too much. It’s nothing I can’t handle.”
(Pause)
\Surprised** “Uh, what? I mean you want me to um… Sorry, you kind of caught me off guard there. I’m pretty bad at picking up on jokes.”
\Narrator starts to laugh but stops when Listener says they aren’t joking.**
“You’re not joking? You really think it would be a good idea for me to take my shirt off?”
(Pause)
“I mean, it would be warmer than wearing soaking wet clothes, but are you sure? Borrowing your clothes seems like it would be… I don’t know. I feel like it would be taking too much from you. I mean, you’re already letting me stay here for the night, I don’t ask for more than I already have.”
(Pause)
“You really wouldn’t mind? Are you sure?”
(Short Pause)
“Alright, if you’re sure, then yeah, that would be great. I’d love to borrow one of your shirts.”
(Pause)
“Sure, let me just take this off.”
(Long Pause)
“Is there somewhere you’d like me to put it?”
(Pause)
“Oh, yeah, if you wanna toss it into the dryer, that would be really nice. Thank you, I appreciate that.”
(Pause)
“I’ll just wait here. Do you mind if I sit on the couch?”
(Pause)
“Alright, then I’ll just wait for you here.”
\Listener walks down the short hall to put the shirt in the drier and returns shortly, handing Narrator a shirt.**
“Oh, thank you. Let me just put this on real quick.”
(Pause)
“It’s pretty comfortable, but uh, it’s a little snug. I’m worried I might stretch it out a bit. Are you sure you don’t mind?”
(Pause)
“Alright, if you’re sure. Here, let me scoot over a bit so you have some room to sit down too.”
(Pause)
“Yeah, sure. It’d be pretty rude of me to kick you off your own couch. Much easier to talk to you when you’re sitting next to me, too.”
(Pause)
\Playful, flirty (from here on)** “What to talk about? That is a good question. Hm… Let me think on that for a minute… Oh, how about this; do you rescue forgetful guys from the rain often, or am I just particularly cute when I’m a sopping wet mess?”
\Both laugh.**
“What can I say? I’m curious! I just wanna know if you do this for all the cute strangers that you see who are hopelessly locked out of their apartment, or if it’s because I’m too cute to resist.”
(Pause)
“Nope, I only flirt this much when I’m nervous.”
(Pause)
“Well of course I’m nervous! This is my first time in your apartment and I don’t want to mess it up.”
(Pause)
“Because I really like talking to you and I wanted to, y’know, get to know you more. But this is definitely not what I pictured when I imagined my first time in your apartment to be like.”
(Pause)
“I don’t know, I was thinking something a bit less… wet?”
\Narrator laughs.**
“In all honesty, I was thinking it would be something kind of cute. Maybe something like me accidentally getting some of your mail and bringing it to you, so we end up talking and getting lunch together.”
(Pause)
“Well it would be better than me interrupting your movie and getting water everywhere while begging you to spend the night. I think almost anything would be better than this.”
(Pause)
“I don’t know, I was hoping I’d be a bit more smooth. I wanted to dress up a bit and bring you flowers, you know? I wanted to woo you a bit.”
(Pause)
“That kinda does sound like I’d be asking you on a date, huh? Maybe there’s a reason for that.”
(Pause)
\Flirty, slightly teasing** “Yeah, I’m saying that I want to ask you out on a date. Was it that obvious?”
(Pause)
“It’s like I said - I really like talking to you, and I think that it would be nice to get to know you more. It doesn’t help that you’re so cute that I get weak in the knees every time I see you.”
(Pause)
“Yes, every single time.”
(Pause)
\Playful** “What are you talking about? You look fantastic when you’re getting the mail in your old flannel pants and ratty tank top.”
(Pause)
“Well I beg to differ. I think you look incredibly date-able when you’re a mess.”
(Pause)
“Is that so? You think I’m a date-able mess too?”
(Pause)
“Am I even more date-able now that I’m wearing your shirt?”
(Pause)
“Yeah? Then, if I were to ask you on a date right now, what are the chances that you would say yes?”
(Pause)
“‘Depends on the date?’ Hm… How about we watch movies together while there’s a terrible thunderstorm outside and I’m locked out of my apartment?”
(Pause)
“Why not? What better time for a first date than right now? We’re already here. I’m in your apartment, wearing your clothes, and I’m going to be here until the morning. I think that having a movie marathon while sharing blankets and snacks sounds like a perfect first date.”
(Pause)
“Well then come here, and bring that blanket with you. The first thing that you’re gonna learn about me tonight is that I like cuddling, especially when I’m cold.”
(Pause)
“‘The second thing?’ Then what was the first thing?”
(Pause)
“Is that right? So you really like the way I look in your clothes, huh?”
\Narrator laughs.**
“Am I that cute?”
(Pause)
“Am I cute enough to kiss?”
(Pause)
“Then why don’t you?”
\Listener and Narrator kiss a few times.**
“You know, this isn’t how I expected our first date to go, but I’m pretty happy it is.”
(Pause)
“Because I’ve wanted to kiss you for a while now.”
(Pause)
“Well, if you want to kiss me too, then I say we should keep kissing.”
\Listener and Narrator continue to kiss.**
“Hey, why don’t we turn a movie on real quick? Just so we can say it’s a movie date, even if we don’t watch it.”
\Listener turns on a movie.**
“Perfect. Now kiss me again, because I’m much more interested in you than any movie.”
\Narrator can end the audio with more kissing/weather ambience/movie sounds/etc.**
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