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Summary: A human decided to donate some blood to a vampire blood bank since they have always been a fan of vampires and want to support those who actually abide by the rules set in place by the government. (Vampires shall only drink blood of those who have previously signed a letter of consent or legally donated blood to a vampire blood bank.) Unbeknownst to them, one recipient of their donation got addicted to the taste of their blood in specific and now refuses to take anything else. Now said recipient is stood upon a human’s doorstep, fully willing to do whatever it takes to get to keep them to themself.
Optional feeding scene if you’re up for it, otherwise it’s just chatting/rambling.
~1000 words/ 6-11 mins Audio
Author’s note: still a noob so any criticism or tips are very appreciated. If anyone wants to form a writer’s alliance to swap out scripts to read over before publishing or do collabs that would be awesome! (Please. I could really use some more writer friends :>)
Usage: I don't really mind. Change stuff if you want, improvise, add or remove scenes, make it nsfw if that’s what you like. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions about the contents/format/rules/whatever.Â
You can cut out the feeding scene at the rounded brackets if you’re not comfortable with that kind of stuff yet. It won’t impact the coherence of the story. ;)
Monetization/paywall is ok with me as long as I get credited and can listen to it afterwards! Have fun :D
Sfx don’t need to be added but you know the drill; it enhances the experience if you have access to them.
Setting: Home/ house of the listener, quiet suburban street at night
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this is for intonation/ emphasising a wordÂ
line breaks or … are for pauses to breathe/ where the character looks around or thinks, in some occasions where the listener speaks/reacts (take your time, there’s no rush. Slightly longer pauses sound very natural)
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(I didn’t do very many tone indicators on this since it could either be read calm and confident or really shy and awkward. I decided to leave it up to you to set the tone for this character)
[sfx: knocking on front door/sound of doorbell]
[sfx: door opens]
Ah. Hello. Did you, by any chance, donate to the volunteer vampire supply blood bank?Â
I am aware that is an unusual question but-Â
Oh you did? Splendid! You must be the one I am searching for, then.Â
But oh, where are my manners! You may call me Val in this time period. And if you have not figured it out yet, I am, in fact, a vampire. Â
Under any other circumstances vampires would not be allowed to seek out any donors for the safety of all involved but.. I used some rather unorthodox methods of questioning to obtain some very confidential data about you.Â
Please do not tell anyone-Â
I- [sigh] I am well aware how strange that must sound to you. A stalker finding your name and home address over some blood you donated in good heart.Â
And before I forget I must certainly thank you for your service!Â
In this day and age as it is illegal for vampires to draw blood from anyone without consent - as it should be - and proper blood donations are needed in hospitals, any drop towards the vvs is more than appreciated by any and all members of the vampire society.Â
And I am aware how terrifying it must be to have somebody show up at your house after donating but - and I am terribly sorry for it - I cannot get enough of your blood.Â
I tasted the small dose necessary to keep a vampire alive, as resources are sparse, but… have you ever had a wine so good anything else suddenly loses taste? When you find something so delicious, sweet and nutritional anything else would feel like oil within your mouth?Â
It is obvious what I am attempting to say, is it not?Â
Your blood to me is liquid moonlight on a warm summer night. It tastes of smooth silk and exquisite, sweetest wine.Â
I believe I may never be able to consume any other kind of blood.Â
I would rather starve to death than ever drink a drop of that filthy mud water ever again, knowing that pure heaven runs through your veins.Â
And - I truly apologise for confronting you without warning and completely understand if you need more time or wish not to but - may I ask of you to become mine?Â
All the riches I have acquired in those long years spent upon earth could be yours, you may live in any castle you wish, have balls and fantastic dances if you so desire.Â
I could grant you immortality and infinite riches in exchange; but please…
I cannot live another day without you.Â
I humbly request - no, beg of you - please, join me, be mine.Â
I will give you anything you may have ever wished for and more. In exchange for a little blood every now and then. I will make sure you will be kept at best health and mental well being. I will gift you fresh bouquets of your favourite flowers each day, spend as much time with you as you wish, prepare your favourite meals, travel the world with you if you say the word.Â
Anything*.* Anything for you.Â
[pause]
Oh, of course.. Take your time.Â
I do suggest we get to know each other a little before you decide on such an important matter.Â
Simply because I am passionate about something or.. someone, in this case, does not mean the person reciprocates.Â
Forgive me, Darling.Â
But… I simply must have you.
Oh- you are not.. frightened of me, are you? If I did spook you I must sincerely apologise.Â
I promise I am not usually like this but the thought of not having you in my life alone is filling me with unease and something I can only describe as possessiveness… very quite uncommon for me.Â
Simply seeing you here.. taking in your alluring scent, almost feeling the air pulsing with each of your heartbeats-
Forgive me but I- [deep breath] I have to contain myself! Otherwise how would you ever agree to live with me if this was your first and only impression of me..? A bloodthirsty monster, unable to keep themselves in control.Â
How would that look on me..? On the vampiric society..?
But I simply have to have you to myself! That smell, the thought of your blood, your skin, your warmth-
I cannot- …Â
Damn it. I must stay calm for now.
[deep breath]Â
Would you agree to spend a day with me, any place you desire. I shall play entirely after your rules, and you may test me in any way, to decide whether you would mind being with me for a while. Would that be alright with you?
Yes, I suppose you could call it a ‘date’.
[short pause]
It would? Oh, perfect!Â
Do you have your cellular device on you? I will give you my number and you shall decide when and where you would like to meet. You may also leave the choice to me if you prefer. In my time, I have gathered quite a few nice places to visit.Â
[sfx: sound of tapping on phone]
All will be my treat, of course. So do not shy away from expensive places.Â
What does this period call it..? A… sugar (daddy/mommy/giver)?Â
I would be more than willing to offer myself as your sugar (daddy/mommy/giver) in exchange for your time.. and some of your blood every now and again.Â
Nothing you don’t consent to, of course!
But… would it be too much to ask of a small sip for good measure..? I apologise! I certainly am overstepping-
[short pause]
(You do not mind? Are you sure, my little lamb? [unsure, surprised]
This is a very different experience than having somebody shove a needle in your arm.Â
And you barely know me after all. You have every right and reason to say no, and I would absolutely respect your decision.Â
[short pause]
You’re certain?
You have no concept of how much this means to me.Â
[getting closer] The drinking of one's blood is a very.. intimate process.
Do not worry, my dear. The pain will be brief and you likely will end up enjoying it.
[very close now] Oh, your skin is so smooth and soft. Its coloration and texture are simply… [small breath] a piece of art. That is what you are, my dear.Â
May I…?
[sounds of biting/kissing/feeding(drinking blood)/heavy breathing]
[muffled, since the vampire is still on the listener’s neck]
Good god that’s good.Â
[thump sound of listener character getting pinned against the wall]
[little out of breath] Apologies for [feeding sounds/moans/bites/breathing/wimpers/whatever] .. pinning you against the wall like this.Â
[long sigh/moan] Good god. You taste even better when you have adrenaline rushing through you like this.
[kissing/sucking/moaning] That’s my sweetheart.Â
..just a little more. [yes more noises. But we’re almost done] [moaned:] Please, just a little more. A little more.
[heavy breathing/ catching breath/ sounds that indicate you’re done sucking]
[still a little out of breath] Damn that was good.
I apologise, I hope I did not go too far.Â
[short pause]
I told you it would be quite intimate.Â
Seeing you flustered like this.. is almost making me want to do it again, my little lamb.
You truly look too pretty to even be from this world.Â
And I promise you, I am not simply saying that to flatter you.Â
Thank you for your… ‘service’, my sweet. [flirty]
And do not worry about a wound. I licked up most of the blood and due to my saliva all should heal well quite quickly.Â
If I did not scare you too much, would you still consider my offer?)
Take your time for now, my little lamb.Â
Think well and hard on this decision.
But I will not have the patience to wait for long.Â
I want you, and only you, my dear. And if I cannot have you.. there will be no promise of what I would and would not do.
Rest easy now. And ‘shoot me a message’ sometime soon.Â
[sfx: footsteps leaving]
(Tip for Asmartists: for the kissing noises try licking your lips and then gently kissing the back of your hand, use your lips and tongue a bit. I’ve heard one too many amazing VAs sound like they’re open mouth chewing during kissing scenes and it ruins the whole mood, babes. And if you want more noise; moan and groan a bit during the kiss! Instantly so much hotter than what would otherwise sound like aunty dorothy going in for a wet smooch. Or somebody eating spicy ramen very sloppily.Â
Best wishes and good luck out there. You’re amazing :D
-Simp)
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