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Context: You win a date with raven after buying a raffle ticket for charity. Not seeming to thrilled you decide to meet her at a location of her choosing. Possibly feeling develop.
Tags: [F4M] [Wholesome] [Comfort] [Reassurance] [Hugging] [Kissing] [Kuundere] [Goth] [Superhero]
Usage: You may tweak or record this script.
Monetization: All forms of monetization are OK with me! YouTube, Patreon, etc. I would appreciate being able to listen to the recording, if possible. Let me know if you have any questions. Thank you!
Note: I may seem like a broken record when I say this, but if you want to change the tag from F4M to F4A, F4F or even M4A, M4F etc. That is fine (I know that a gender swap isn't always the thing, but I had have a few people want to gender swap the Voice so...) Just know that I am only putting the F4M tag for my own improvement. Nothing is set in stone. (apologies for the long note, but had to make it clear)
[Scene opens up with you meeting up Raven at a café]
***
[SFX: door opening and bell ringing]
"Oh, you must be the winner of the lottery huh? Please sit down."
[You sit down]
"I might as well get this started *under her breath* and finished as quickly as possible *back to normal* But I am Rachel Roth."
[You ask about dating raven]
"Yes, yes. I also go by as Raven. So, might I ask who you are?"
[You say your name]
"Well...It's nice to meet you."
[You shake her hand]
"So anyways. What made you decide to by that many Lottery tickets? Were you really hoping to get a date with me?"
[You mention that you supported the charity that you were buying. The prizes were secondary]
"I see. Well, I can at least respect that. Judging by the way you phrased it, your telling the truth."
[You ask if she's ok with being one of the prizes]
"Am I ok with being one of the prizes? Well, it was either that or, they were going to have Starfire be a prize. That didn't end well last time."
[You curious about that]
"Well, to save you from all the boring details; she wanted to have a and I quote "Marshmallow pizza party" with the winner. I...I couldn't even respond to that. It was so weird, even by my standards."
[You said it must of been funny though]
"Yeah, it did get A chuckle out of me. I'll admit, I didn't think of having someone for a date like you though."
[You ask why]
"Well, usually how these things works; I end up dating some rich fat nerd. No offense to them, some of them were nice, but..."
[You say it get weak after a while.]
"Exactly, after the tenth date it was like a copy and paste version of all the previous dates. Just amplified. I just wanted something...different."
[You ask if that's why you wanted to meet at a café]
"Well...part of the reason. I'm surprised, usually the winner gets to decide where we go. Your the first one in a while that let me decide."
[You ask if Beast Boy was the one previously]
"Well Garfield was one who let me decide. More accurately, he was being a massive pest until I caved in. Granted he was grieving over Terra, so I let him take me wherever. Just so long as it wasen't something too annoying."
[She lifts up a cup of coffee and sips it]
"Surprisingly he brought me here. Saying "Your probably would enjoy some place quiet like this." I'll give him this. He wasen't wrong."
[She leans in]
"So tell me, what's your story. What do you do?"
[You say it's a little embarrassing]
"Come on, we might as well know a little more about each other. I'm willing to humor you with these questions, so you might as well return the favor."
[You mention that you work at the local VA hospital]
"The VA, huh? Well, I guess that's would make sense. The charity auction was for homeless vets. It's only natural you want to help. So, what made you want to work there?"
[You say that it's a little more personal]
"Okay, I get it. We all have our boundaries. I kind of dig a little to deep there."
[You apologize]
"Hey, don't sweat it. If anything it shows that you have limits. I can at least respect that. Although..."
[You look at her with a raised eyebrow]
"This has peaked my interest a little. Wanting to keep things secret is one thing, wanting them to keep them hidden is another. If I may, can I take a guess why you are so passionately about this charity?"
[You say no powers]
"Oh, no need. I can read you like an open book]
[she takes another sip of her coffee]
"You have a family member, I'm guessing a Father or a brother who was in the military. Feeling like you couldn't do anything you helped out in your own way."
[Your impressed by how accurately she got it]
"*Snicker* still got it."
[she leans in]
"Don't sell yourself short. Even trash collectors have their use. They may seem frivolous in hindsight. However, when you really need them, you be surprised how useful they are."
[You ask if she's enjoying this date]
"Well, I won't lie to you. This is about a five out of ten."
[You say oh slightly disappointed, as she lifts up your chin]
"But my average is about a two. So, consider this above average date."
[She looks down slightly blushing]
"I-if you wanted to go out again however, I wouldn't object to that either."
[You ask why if a date that low would she consider a second date]
"Well, the first dates are usually terrible. I only had one that was above a seven. The second date however, was a flat out one. Not even worth getting out of bed for that one."
[You ask if she believes the second date will be better]
"Well, odds are in your favor. Think about it, if it was a five out of ten you can't really fall that hard. If you go up, it's an improvement. "
[You find it hard to follow.]
"Okay, look. Aside from Garfield, who's date was like...a four. Yours was probably the best one I felt in a while. I can be a little brutally honest. With that, I apologize. I do believe however, if we had a second date; it would go really well. What do you say?"
[You say there was another reason you went on this date]
"Oh, another reason for going on this date? Ok, I'll bite. What?"
[You say that you recently broke up with your girlfriend]
"I see."
[she takes another sip of her coffee]
"So you were feeling lonely was it?"
[You said the breakup was pretty recent]
"And what pray tell is considered "recent"?"
[You said yesterday]
"Oh."
[You initially were going to give this date away or return it but you didn't want to stand you up]
"Well, I do appreciate you for going through with all of this. I wouldn't take it personally if you returned the date voucher."
[You ask if she's mad.]
"Not mad as so much as disappointed."
[Those words hit you hard]
"So why did she break up with you?"
[You said that it was you that broke up with her]
"Okay, doesn't really change the question that much but why did you break up with her?"
[You said that she cheated on you]
"She cheated on you."
[with your boss]
"With your boss?!"
[You nod in sadness]
"Oh, I see."
[She is clenching the coffee mug, trying not to break it]
"So, how are you holding up?"
[You say that you feel useless]
"Now, don't say that. Your not useless. Remember what I said earlier? Even trash collectors has their uses. You shouldn't sell yourself short."
[She gets up]
"I can see this might need some extra encouragement. Follow me."
[You look in confusion as she grabs your arm]
"I said, Follow me."
[You say but the bill]
"Relax, I'm a regular. I'm good for it. *under her breath* It also helps when you own half of it"
[She takes you outside and takes you on the side of the building]
"Now, look. I don't really do this, but I have a feeling you really need to hear this."
[She leans in and whispers in your ear]
"If I was your girlfriend, I would Never do anything that shameful as cheat on you. Especially with your boss."
[You thank her]
"No need, I do mean it though. There are words I would use to describe people like that. I however, wouldn't use them...in public."
[She walks back in to the coffee shop but turns around]
"A few things before we go back in. Yes I am a co-owner of the shop. It's too long of a story to get into right now. Secondly, *looking down blushing* I was serious about that second date. If your still up for it."
[You turn a little red at the idea]
"Just wanted to do one thing before I go back in."
[She leans in and hugs and kisses you.]
"something to think over with a possible second date."
[Still hugging you she comforts you]
"I know that it's odd for someone like me giving someone like you a pep talk...but I am serious with this stuff. You shouldn't have to beat yourself down."
[You asked why she would consider a second date with you]
"Why would I offer a second date?! *Looking down blushing* Really, your more like a eight. Look wise, your also a solid ten."
[You can tell she's really embarrassed saying that out loud. as you kiss her back saying you would love a second date]
"You would?"
[You nod]
"*Clears throat* then, let's go back and enjoy our current one then shall we?"
[You two walk in as she seems her usual cold self]
"What? I got to stay face now, don't I?"
[You say she's just as cute as she is naturally]
"*Pulls up hood* T-thank you."
[You sit back down and enjoy the cup of coffee as it fade to black]
[To be continued...?]
Note: sorry for the long rant earlier, just wanted to let the reader know the creative freedoms they have. Anyway, hope enjoyed reading this and have a lovely day (Or in my case night)
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