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Context: Your relationship with your family has never been great, largely thanks to your father. A good ol' boy and ex-military, he convinced everyone your acts of rebellion were good enough reason for all of them to cut you off or assume the worst. Except for Charlie. Ten years your senior and an ex-squadmate of your father, Charlie was able to see through those lies as you started college. He's come to your aid plenty of times, protected you, and encouraged you. It's hard not to appreciate him and all he does for you, or how hot the dummy is. You made your move and kissed him, and he's just as hungry for you. The only problem? Your nightmare family getting involved.
Setting: Charlie's house
Tags: [M4F][Friends to Lovers][Older Man Speaker][Younger Woman Listener][Controversial][Kisses][Protective][Old Friends][History Together][Cuddles][Military Boy][Angst][SPICY][Confession][TW: Implied Abusive Family/PTSD/A Shitty Dad][CW: Older Man x Younger Woman]
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[C] = Charlie
[Scene opens in Charlieās bedroom]
[SFX: Early morning ambiance]
[You reach out and turn your alarm off before it has a chance to start yelling. You have to reach over Charlieās bare chest to get to it, but itās not the worst compromise]
[C] āMrlgrā¦ I told you you shouldāve just kept your phone on your nightstand, Shortstack. I couldāve cleared it up for you.ā
[Pause]
[He snorts and rolls over to face you, arms around your waist]
[C] āYeah, yeah, I worry too muchā¦ Mmh! Ergh, stretching hurts! Mlem. Iām gonna run a shower, Shortstack, but I promise Iāll save you all the hot water. I like mine cold.ā
[...]
[He turns a bit red]
[C] āOK, in my defense, guys canāt help their morning conundrums, and what have you. And yes, that is what Iām going to call it, so hush.ā
[Pause?]
[Somehow, he turns redder]
[C] āAs romantic as it would be to have you join me, I donāt think itās a good idea. Things already wentā¦ pretty far, last night, and weāre meant to be taking things really slow. I love being around you, and Lord knows I enjoyed being close to you last night, I justā¦ This is a lot for both of us, you know?ā
[Pauseā¦]
[C] āOh, you know I canāt take that pout. Cāmere, cāmonā¦ Right in these big olā arms.ā
[SFX: The bed shifting]
[He pulls you into a gentle embrace, rubbing your back]
[C] āShhhā¦ Itās OK. Youāre still in shock over your old man passing, and let us not speak about Jim fucking visiting. Youāre allowed to be shaken up and confused. Least thatās what the head doctors told me once I came back from active duty. You ain't a soldier, but youāve got the shoulder demons of oneā¦Real heavy, aināt they?ā
[...]
[Charlie sighs and pats your back]
[C] āSweet girlā¦ Youāre such a good girl, you know? Worst you ever did was mouth off and lay out a few boys here and there. You didnāt deserve any of thisā¦ Uh, Shortstack? You spaced out for a second. You alright?ā
[Pause]
[C] āOhh, you like being called that. Huhā¦ I mean, Iāve always thought you were a-hey wait a second! Is this a kinky thing?!ā
[Pause <3]
[C] āOh, godamnitā¦ I SWEAR Iām not trying to be seductive, you KNOW what me trying to be seductive looks like, and it aināt pretty or effective! Closer to a, āTries to say hello, forgets mouth full of chicken wing sauceā sort of move!ā
[Pause <3]
[C] āI am not protesting too much! Damnit, Iām trying to be considerate and compassionate, not seductive. You think I wouldnāt do something from your fancy romance novels like, I dunno, toss you on the bed, pin you down, growl in your ear, and this is not helping my case at all, is it?ā
[Pause!]
[He huffs, though itās good-natured, but pauses as he sees you looking at the scars on his chest]
[C] āHmph. Figures Iād be in for a world of getting roasted. Shortstack, you gottaā¦ Hey, cāmon, donāt fixate on the scars on my chest. You always get so damned sad over them, look, baby girl, itās done. They donāt hurt anymore.ā
[Pause?]
[He shudders as you trace one closer to his heart]
[C] āYes, even the one close to my heartā¦ You always were curious about that one, and I was always curious how much your Dad actually talked about what happened over thereā¦ā
[...]
[Charlie sighs and rubs his face]
[C] āOnly about his own experiences, Jesusā¦ Yeah, perfectly appropriate to talk about with your damned kid. I mean, there aināt much to tell about it. I was the last man uncaptured in our squad, I was told to retreat butā¦ my brothers were getting tortured in there, Iā¦ I-I couldnāt. So I went in, took out everyone, ācept for one guy who came at me with a knifeā¦ People become scary strong when theyāre desperate, so he managed to knock me on my back and stabbed me. Managed to get him off of me, butā¦ā
[His fingertips brush over the scar]
[...]
[You rest your hand over his and he shivers]
[C] ā...Thereās something in that primal fear, you know? That fear that comes from your body not wanting to die. Like a scorpion swarmed by ants. You keep stinging and flailing and trying, but you know youāre a goner, and youāre just trying to ignore the pain til Death shows upā¦ He was a civilian, trying to scare off the big, mean soldiers, and he stabbed me, and I shot him. And you donāt need to rest your hand over mine, sweetheart. Iām OK, I promise.ā
[SFX: Social media notifications, and a lot of them]
[You both pause as your phone starts blowing up. Then Charlieās phone starts blowing up. You exchange grim expressions]
[C] āAnd there goes the social media blips. Fuckinā mistake, every single one of themā¦ Letās see. Ah, yep, an entire page dedicated to calling me a cradle-robbing, manipulative beater of poor, innocent Jim who was just concerned about his grieving niece, only to have some sicko with PTSD take advantage. How about you?ā
[You just show him. He turns a violent red from anger]
[...]
[C] ā...Turn off your phone, sweetheart. Iāll handle this once Iām clean, shaved, and in the proper clothes to bury some meddling, HOA-loving, Church-faking, poor BBQ skill-having, six out of seven kids fuckinā pregnant hoarding FUCKS.ā
[Pause]
[C] āHuh? You know a faster way to handle it? How?ā
[You take your phone, hop into his lap, and take a few pictures]
[C] āS-Shortstack, hey! Now aināt the time to be cuddling up in my lap, youāre confusing my rage boner! Though it is already pretty confusedā¦ Like a fucking flag in a hurricane. Oh, now why are you snapping selfies?ā
[Pause]
[C] āYouāre gonna respond with just the pictures and you flipping the birdā¦? Uh, Shortstack, you know youāll start a wholeass war with your family, right? Thatās a whole Hell of a lot of people with stupid fucking opinions.ā
[Pause]
[He appraises you for a moment, unreadable]
[C] āIf youāre gonna date meā¦ you donāt want to hide, because youāre not ashamed of usā¦?ā
[Pause?]
[He scoffs]
[C] āHell no I aināt ashamed of us! I just wanted to be careful while we navigated this whole messā¦ But if you want to blow the lid off of it, I wonāt stop you, sweetheart. I just know theyāre gonna try and ruin us bothā¦ā
[Pause]
[C] āYou aināt worried? How come?ā
[Pause]
[He must have seen your devious smirk because heās responding in more ways than one]
[C] āYou got the receipts, huhā¦? Hehe, my smart Shortstack. Sweet girl with revenge on the mind! Howās this gonna play out, then?ā
[Pause]
[His eyes turn sultry. Appreciative]
[C] āYouāre gonna post the pictures, weāre both going to turn off our phones, and then have a nice shower and breakfast together, huh?ā
[<3]
[SFX: Social media posting noises]
[C, breathy] āYes maāam.ā
[To be continued]
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