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[M4F] Good Girl Pt. 2 [Friends to Lovers][Southern Bad Boy Speaker][Good Girl Listener][Forbidden Love][1930s][Period Piece][Southern Gothic][Runaways][Playing House][Protective][Possessive][Yandere?][Kisses][Cuddles][Holding Close][CW: Mentions of Abuse/Violence]
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ItsEsmeJones is a male looking for a female in Holding Close
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Context: You grew up in the South during the 20s, a particularly unkind era. As the daughter of the Mayor, you were expected to act a certain way and hang out with a certain crowd which, unfortunately, excluded your best friend and local troublemaker, Cole. Things have gotten worse, but you had each other until your father put his foot down... and his hand on you. Cole asked you to run away with him years ago, but you've been too hesitant. This time... you did it, and now you face the rest of your life with your oldest friend.

Setting: (1931) A small Southern train station/A cabin in the woods

Tags: [M4F][Friends to Lovers][Southern Bad Boy Speaker][Good Girl Listener][Forbidden Love][1930s][Period Piece][Southern Gothic][Runaways][Playing House][Protective][Possessive][Yandere?][Kisses][Cuddles][Holding Close][CW: Mentions of Abuse/Violence]

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[Time: 1932 - the American South]

[Scene opens aboard the train]

[SFX: The train rattling along before the horn rings out and it comes to a stop]

[The trainā€™s horn wakes you, and Coleā€™s shaking helps you focus]

ā€œHey thereā€¦ Morning, beautiful. Cā€™mon, we need to get movinā€™ before they start checking the train cars.ā€

[SFX: Cole and the Listener jumping down and hurrying off]

ā€œAh, here we areā€¦ That dirt path hidden behind those willows is our ticket home. And, over thereā€¦ Thatā€™s the big city.ā€

[Pause!]

ā€œHehā€¦ Yeah. It is sort of pretty, ainā€™t it? Maybe we can go together when I go look for work, eh? For now, though, cā€™mon. Itā€™s already midday. We need to get to the cabin ā€˜fore nightfall, otherwise, weā€™ll be out in the woods at night with no lanternā€¦ No light but the moon. Cā€™mon, letā€™s go, sweetheart.ā€

[SFX: Cole and the Listener marching off into the woods]

[Note: One can use sound effects to extend the trip, have them banter, etc. All is good, if you want :3]

[After an hour or two, you find yourself at the end of your journey. At least, according to Cole]

ā€œPhew, an hour or more in the woods, uphill. Wellā€¦ Here it is.ā€

[A cabin stands before you. It isnā€™t in the best of shape, but itā€™s something]

ā€œOur new homeā€¦ I know it ainā€™t much, sweetheart, ā€˜specially not for a classy lady like youā€¦ But I promise Iā€™ll work my ass off to get us something better, alright?ā€

[Pause]

[He sighs as you rest a palm on his jaw]

ā€œAw, cā€™mon, Little Missā€¦ Donā€™t go touching my jaw all soft like thatā€¦ Iā€™ve been starved for ya as is.ā€

[Pause]

[He growls a little under his breath, getting you around the waist and pulling you close]

ā€œHey now, Good Girlā€¦ you ruffle this ā€˜Bad Boyā€™ up too muchā€¦ You may just regret it.ā€

[Pause]

[He chuckles, kissing you gently]

ā€œI love you, too, Sweet Girlā€¦ Ainā€™t that river something else? Has fresh mint growing by it and everything. Ahem, right. Itā€™s gonna get awful cold, so we need to prep the cabin. Cā€™mon, letā€™s see what weā€™re working with.ā€

[SFX: A creaky wooden door being pushed open and Cole coughing]

ā€œPhew, Lord! Dusty in hereā€¦ but it seems like itā€™s structurally sound, at least. Nice and insulated, and he left his tools. Huh. Thanks, Uncle Jack. Rest in peace.ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œWhat do I want you to doā€¦? I, ahā€¦ā€

[...]

ā€œ... I know weā€™ve always been partners in crime, Sweet Girl. I knowā€¦ But Iā€™m used to being out in the wilderness, Iā€™m used to foragingā€¦ Iā€™m used to the, ahem, cold. I want you to relax. I want you to ride out the weather so I know for sure you ainā€™t gonna get sick.ā€

[Pause]

ā€œ...I wanna prove Iā€™m good enough for you, baby girl.ā€

[Pause!]

[Cole holds you while you give him the same pep talk as always, a bit more sultry this time]

ā€œ...You really do make me feel like the most important man that ever lived, you know that? Just wanna be in bed, you under meā€¦ Under that nice, warm blanketā€¦ Mmh, cā€™mere for a second.ā€

[Pause?]

[He kisses you again, passionately]

ā€œMmhā€¦ my Good Girlā€¦ Fine. You want to do something, help me get this place in presentable order. Jack left a lot here, including some smoked meat, seems like. He ainā€™t been buried yet, so it should still be good. Hold your hand around the window frames, you feel any air coming in?ā€

[Pause]

ā€œA little? Enhā€¦ Well, thereā€™s firewood, at least. That means we can at least make some stew. Do me a favor and check the back, yeah? I think he mentioned he had a little garden.ā€

[SFX: The Listener stepping outside and walking to the back]

[You do as Cole asks and check outside. To your delight, a small garden does still stand in relative order]

[Pause!]

ā€œWe got a garden? Perfect! Weā€™ll have to pull a harvest ā€˜fore winter sets in. We got a kettle, Iā€™m gonna haul it and grab some water from the river. Weā€™ll boil it til itā€™s clean and then we can start on food!ā€

[SFX: Cole hauling the cauldron]

[Cole hefts the heavy, cast iron cauldron from the cabin. He has, apparently, discarded his shirt]

[...]

ā€œ...You enjoying the view of me shirtless, Good Girl?ā€

[Pause!]

[He chuckles and fills the cauldron, hefting it back]

[SFX: Water sloshing]

ā€œYeah, yeah, Iā€™m a bad boy. Cā€™mon, start grabbing those crops. Itā€™s almost nightfall anywho. Temperature is gonna drop, soon.ā€

[SFX: The Listener gathering crops in the garden for a bit]

[Long Pause]

[You pick crops for a bit until the wind turns biting and night begins to set]

ā€œGood Girl! Cā€™mon, itā€™s time to come in!ā€

[SFX: The Listener walking inside]

ā€œThere ya areā€¦ Damn, thatā€™s a Hell of a harvest! More out there than I thought. Go ahead and set it on the counter, for now. Here, it ainā€™t much, but some jerky and some soda pops.ā€

[You two eat together as the night sets. By the time youā€™ve both gotten your baths, Coleā€™s already waiting in bed]

[Pause]

ā€œAh, I ainā€™t gonna get the bed wet after taking a bath. Donā€™t worry, I beat all the dust from the mattress. Cā€™mere, sweetheart, you worked hard today.ā€

[Pause]

[SFX: A mattress squeaking and sagging]

[Coleā€™s beautiful eyes search yours as you snuggle up with him]

[Pause]

ā€œA man and a woman, living in sin, phewā€¦ I bet Preacher Keen would have his third heart attack if he found outā€¦ā€

[His voice lowers to a whisper]

ā€œBut how can a man resist the Devil when he makes his angels so damned beautiful, hm? Hmhmhmā€¦ Donā€™t blush too hard, sweetheartā€¦ā€

[SFX: The wind howling outside and the fire crackling]

[Pause]

ā€œ...Howā€™s it feel? Being free from all of that? Free to be here, with me?ā€

[<3]

[He smiles, fingers running through your hair still]

ā€œGood Girlā€¦ Iā€™m gonna head into town tomorrow to ask about work. I reckon youā€™ll want to come?ā€

[Pause!]

[He chuckles]

ā€œAlright, alrightā€¦ Maybe, this time, we can try some of that ice cream, hm?ā€

[Pause]

ā€œOhā€¦ God, I love hearing you tell me you love meā€¦ Sā€™ like Heaven is talking to meā€¦ā€

[It takes you a moment to realize heā€™s shaking]

[...?]

ā€œ...Just a lil cold, sweetheart. Iā€™m just shaking cause itā€™s a little cold and Iā€™m sore from the day. You curling around me like that is helping more than you knowā€¦ I donā€™t want to be apart ever again. OK? Promise me that, baby girl.ā€

[Pause]

[He gives a sigh of relief and pulls you closer, somehow]

ā€œThatā€™s all I wantā€¦ Love you, sweetheart. Goodnight.ā€

[To be continued]

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