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I need some feedback on my plot for my Batman comic I'm working on...
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I'm working on the medium of comics to help me perfect my writing and my art skills. I haven't got around to the actual drawing of the comic... Since I obviously need a story to draw about... Otherwise I'd be drawing for no reason and making up the story as I go.

So here's my idea:

Batman Plot Idea

Two homeless men are seen standing around a burning trash can in an alleyway. They're talking about the Batman, sharing random stories, myths, and legends about him. (Sort of similar to the stories in "Have I Got a Story for You" in the Gotham Knight series.)

Suddenly, a blinding light shoots past them. (Frame shows the exterior of batmobile with a ray of light behind it).

Story cuts to batman inside batmobile talking to Alfred. Alfred informs about an increasingly infamous gang lord. (Later it turns out this drug lord is Black Mask). Every other panel shows batmobile going from an alleyway into a subway, and switches to either batman inside batmobile or Alfred in the bat cave.

Next page shows a small child on the train tracks in an abandoned underground subway. Panels will switch from each side of the boys face. One side will show a distant light in the background. The other side will show the boys face brighten up increasingly [in terms of lighting].

I will show the batmobile stop right as its about the child. batman gets out of the batmobile. Batman tells the boy to get out.

Next frame will show several pairs of red eyes emerging from the darkness [signature of Black Mask].

Batman squints his eyes, as he looks at the eyes.

And that's it so far.

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