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Rewriting the arcs
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If you could rewrite the series what and who would you change
I'd change the first arc

I personally would make tigerstar an already known traitor and villain before firestar joined thunderclan I find it hard to believe that firestar and grey stripe were the only ones who thought he was evil

and I'd make firestar wait longer before he became a deputy it was too rushed and there were other Warriors who should have been before him.

I'd also scrap him and sandstorm 😕 I understand they grew to love eachother and he got over his weird crush on spottedleaf But in the super edition She's constantly fighting for his attention and competing with a ghost And the fact he named his daughter after His first love ( even tho he says it's for leaf dapple) would be my breaking point And the fact he could always smell her If I was sandstorm I'd take one of his nine lives myself

And I'd make brambleclaw and tawnypelt stay together and her not going off to shadow clan and then already being born and nearly paws when he's exiled and labeled a traitor

I'd also make the cats more aware because there's no way that they couldn't tell mistyfoot and stonefur weren't Bluestars especially whitestorm He grew up with them..

I'd also make having kits with kittypets and rouges somewhat more acceptable Idk why everyone wants to bang their cousins 🙄🙃🙃😂 Which arc would you change ? 😊

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