I met a beautiful woman from Uruguay. She recently told me she loved me. She speaks English well and I have told her I feel in English. But I would like to communicate with her in Spanish as much as possible. I wrote her a poem in Spanish. I am looking for help proofreading it before I send it to her. I had some difficulty because I’m not sure what I was trying to do poetically works grammatically or if it saying things I don’t intend. Or if it makes sense in Spanish. I also included a translation of what I was trying to say.

This my first post on Reddit. I am trying to follow the rules. Excuse me if I have not. Thank you for any help that anyone may be able to give.

Tu corazón me llama
Para seguir estrellas
Por espacios de la nada
Y a lugares sin belleza

Allí, la luna más suave
acunándome, sonrie
Para darme luz, soñando
Caer más profundo

En la càlida oscuridad de
Amor, donde ya estaba esperandote

My intention in English:
your heart calls me
to follow stars
Through spaces of nothingness
And to places without beauty

There, the softest moon
cradles me, smiles
To give me light, dreaming
To fall deeper

Into the warm darkness of
Love, where I was already waiting for you.