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First things first, hello you there my dear reader! Hope you're having a good day.

I'm in the process of preparing a Quickstart/MVP for a game I'm working on. And I would like to have feedbacks on how the current state of the work is going. I'm also willing to help you on your own project on a give one, get one basis if you want to make a character of your own following the scheme below.

Introduction

I've already written about some mechanics here and there, but I've been able to finalize a concise english character creation document, boiling down italian notes and scribbles down to 5 pages, with one being a mixture of fluff and a full character creation example, so it's not really a long read. Now this is planned to be put out together with a second chapter containing the quickstart rules of the game and a third chapter containing the adventure meant to be run during playtest or at convention play and maybe some pregens.

The elevator pitch for the game is the following:

You’ve heard, read and watched stories like Alice in Wonderland, Over the Garden Wall or The Neverending Story, now is the right time to play one of them!

You and your friends got spirited away in a dreamscape known as the Land Made of Wonder. You only have each other, a handful of happy memories of the lands Back Home, what's inside your pocket and your heart to embark on a Journey through these strange unplaces.

Will you find your way home of will you choose to stay here?

Character Creation

This is my current draft of the Character Creation quickstart.

An empty reddit-friendly sheet to complete is the following:

I'm Name, the Dominant-Suit 1 and Dominant-Suit 2 Archetype, and "I want to go Back Home"

Suits: Brave S|D, Clever S|D, Empathic S|D, Grown S|D, Deft S|D, Imaginative S|D

Memoir:

- Dark Memory - Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit

- Light Memory - Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit

- Light Memory - Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit

Pockets:

- Treasure - Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit

Please check it out!

I would like to hear how difficult was for you to understand and grasp the rules for character creation or if you found this procedure intricate or difficult in any way.

Again, thanks for reading and for any incoming suggestions!