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Premise:
In a magic university where competition between the students is murderous and a trial will decide whether you will become a master or a slave, you accept the help of your roommate, your only friend.
That turns out to be a mistake. She controls your mind and turns you into her slave. But in the end, things might not be as bad as they seemed.
Script
This is an adaptation of a script I shared half a year ago. It was a blend of narrated parts and character parts, interleaved and layered. In this version, I took out all the layering and tried to make it into a narrative instead.
Thank you to a friend for betareading, and to everyone that left a nice comment on the original !
Feedback is highly welcomed.
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