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Actions have consequences. Sometimes very severe ones. But what if technology and not-so-theoretical physics could give you a chance to undo the mistakes of the past? Or if not a mistake, something that led to a lot of suffering?
And what if it didn’t work out quite like you planned?
Footnotes:
I wrote this a few months back and have been sitting on it for a while. The new season of the Umbrella Academy with its time travel and paradoxes gave me a new interest and perhaps confidence in the idea, so I'm finally posting it.
Somewhat fittingly for a time travel story, this was written out of order. The main part came first, and I think works as its own story. But then I kept writing, and came up with the optional extended ending which changes things a bit. And then after that I felt like I could add that first part as an optional prologue. I'm not really sure what combination of the three works the best, other than the middle part is really the only mandatory part.
I tried to avoid making this explicitly an incest story, although it's pretty heavily hinted at and perhaps the only conclusion that makes sense from the information given. But it's not as obvious as most stuff I write involving that kink.
If anyone wants to record this, use whatever parts you wish. Change what you want. Change the tags or title as well. I went with a pseudo-artistic, Twilight Zone-esque title which may or may not work, and may not help this script get any view or comments.
I welcome any comments, but please don't tag creators in your comments. If anyone is meant to record this, they'll find it on their own and make their own decision.
Thanks for reading :)
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