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Question - Old English [fairytale] [feedback] [script offer]
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I'm currently writing "Cinderella and the royal shoe fetishist". It's basically modern English with a few phrases of Old English as coloring. Now, I'm not sure about the following:

  1. Should I leave out the old phrases for consistency reasons? Or put in more so they don't look like accidents?
  2. Would the phrases be ok like this? "Be not shy", "Blush not"? How would Cinderella say "Why don't you show it to me"?

Thanks a lot!

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