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Summary: On their way to work a civilian gets taken hostage by a flirty villain who soon takes a liking to their new plaything. Things eventually progress and the villain considers laying off the original plan to give some personal attention to a very distracting hostage. (So far there’s no kissing or anything further yet but things do get pretty heated)
If you’re uncomfortable with hella suggestive stuff, (semi graphic) threats of violence, dirty talk, bdsm, mentions of sadism or knife- and breathplay this definitely isn’t for you!Â
~1.500 words/ 10-15 mins Audio
Author’s note: still a noob so any criticism or tips are very appreciated. If anyone wants to form a writer’s alliance to swap out scripts to read over before publishing or do collabs that would be awesome! (Please. I could really use some more writer friends :>)
Usage: I don't really mind. Change stuff if you want, improvise, add or remove scenes, make it nsfw if that’s what you like. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions about the contents/format/rules/whatever.Â
Monetization/paywall is ok with me as long as I get credited and can listen to it afterwards! Have fun :D
Sfx don’t need to be added but you know the drill; it enhances the experience if you have access to them.
Setting: Busy street by a dark back alley in a rather big city. later: abandoned warehouse.
[these are for sfx, vocal cues or actions]Â
this is for intonation/ emphasising a wordÂ
line breaks or … are for pauses to breathe/ where the character looks around or thinks, in some occasions where the listener speaks/reacts (take your time, there’s no rush. Slightly longer pauses sound very natural)
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[sfx: sounds of a street, footsteps, people talking]
Shh! Quiet now! Don’t you dare make a sound.Â
And don’t even think of fighting back. Stay in line or I'll end your pathetic life right here and now.Â
Feel this? That is a knife against your throat, so behave and keep quiet.
… That’s better. Now come with me and don’t make a fuss. The second you open your mouth I’ll slice your throat quicker than you can scream, got it?Â
[short pause] Good. Looks like you’re getting the hang of this.Â
Now come with me.Â
Slow movements. We don’t want you stumbling into my blade now, do we? This thing is pretty damn sharp. Wouldn’t be surprised if it already left a mark on your skin.Â
Oh, don't freak out. You’ll live. As long as you do exactly as I say, that is. Be a good little hostage for me, got it?Â
… You’re a smart one, aren’t you. As much as I enjoy when they struggle I definitely prefer the quieter type, and I cannot be bothered to deal with a brat right now. So: the best thing you can do is obey and do exactly what I tell you to.Â
You look like you’re good at taking orders. [chuckle]
[sfx: footsteps; street sounds quieting down, as the characters make their way down the alley and away from the busy trafic]Â
There we are. Looks like a dirty abandoned warehouse on the outside, but;
[sfx: heavy door open, echoing through the empty hall if possible]
Tadaa! It’s just as shitty on the inside.Â
Don’t worry. We won’t have to stay here for long. About fifteen minutes before the actual fun starts.Â
[sfx: two sets of footsteps from the characters, quiet echos if possible]
If you behave, perhaps I’ll tell you more about it later. But for now, have a seat. … I said SIT! [echo right here might be hella cool]Â
[sfx: wooden chair squeaking as somebody sits down on it]
Now that’s better.Â
And don’t even think about running away. I’ll keep you right here. Now put your hands behind your back. A little further. Perfect … You’re getting better at this, pipsqueak.
[sfx: chains rattling / handcuffs clicking / rope being tied]Â
[short pause]
No, I won't stop calling you that. I don’t care about your ‘name’. You are my hostage, I’ll call you whatever the fuck I want. Do you even know who I am? I’m sure you’ve seen my face on the news by now.Â
… Yeah, that’s right. Of course you do. You’d have to live under a serious rock to not recognise this mask, or my handsome face peaking through. Â
I bet you’re wondering why I kidnapped you of all people and truth be said I’ve been stalking you for about a year now, waiting for the right moment to snatch you up.[sarcastic!]Â
I’m obviously joking. What kind of freaky romance books have you been reading?
Seriously.. You looked like a good victim, easy to pick up without a fight. And since you were walking so close to the buildings hoping nobody would notice you, it was almost too easy to just yank you off the street without alarmed anyone.Â
I doubt anyone saw. And if they did, they obviously didn’t give a shit.Â
And, well, look at you now. A very well behaved little hostage, worried about upsetting anyone or making too much noise.Â
You’re absolutely perfect for this. And I’m sure if I were to shake you enough you’d scream quite nicely. And if you don’t, pipsqueak, the last thing this world is going to hear of you will be your gurgles as you choke on your own blood. So deliver.Â
You look like the type that wants to die on their own accord, as convenient and pain-free as possible. And trust me; a slit throat is neither of those.
Got that, pipsqueak? I better hear you squealing and screaming all over the place.Â
You wouldn’t want anyone having to clean up after you.
Or would you want to inconvenience me by making me pick out a new hostage on such short notice? [taunting]
That’s what I thought. Â
Don’t forget: right now you’re all mine. I’ll do with you as I please. You are entirely at my mercy. So behave.Â
[short pause]
Fuck, I love that look on you. It quite suits you, pipsqueak.Â
If you keep entertaining me, perhaps I’ll keep you for myself once the mission is over.
But I’ll have my fun either way.Â
I only need you for about half an hour, but I don’t mind playing with you for now. You look quite pretty when you’re scared and as I said; I much prefer the more submissive ones. It’s so refreshing after hearing so many people cry their lungs out. Ever heard of tinnitus? That shit is annoying, let me tell you.Â
But you aren’t like that, are you? Though, again, I do have to ask you to deliver a bit more of a show later when we’re on the roof. Got it?Â
I want those heroes seeing you absolutely terrified. Screaming, begging, crying. Anything you can conjure up. Will you be good and do that for me?Â
Just seeing you completely submit yourself to me like this is already too damn good.I dare not even think about your face pearled with tears… Smudged make-up would really suit you.Â
[mumbled] ..Or gasping for air if I were to slide my hand around your- .. fuck. Stay on track.
[deep breath] [please don’t breathe straight into the mic. Off to the side or a bit away sounds much better, trust me :P]
Fifteen minutes. Probably more like ten by now. Ten minutes.. That’s not nearly enough for me to get everything I want out of that pretty face of yours. …Â
So either you behave and we’ll get to find out later or I’ll just have to suck it up and find some other pretty face to play with.
[quietly] I do wonder how your skin would feel beneath my blade, how your pulse would feel against the tips of my fingers. Or the pretty noises and looks I could get out of you…
Oh jesus- You’re really starting to bring out the worst in me, pipsqueak. [chuckle]
Or would you prefer if I called you… Darling? ..Toy? ..Pet?
[pause]
You suddenly look flustered, little one. Didn’t expect me to switch up so quickly, hm? Or are you perhaps… considering my offer? [teasing]
…
Yeah, I’m really having my fun with you. But you don’t really seem too bothered by it. Almost looks like you’re.. starting to enjoy yourself.Â
…Is this what your dirty little mind has been fantasising about? Getting kidnapped by a hot villain?Â
Taken away from your standard, boring life? It’s a fun little break, isn’t it? Not having to worry about what’s going on at work, parents bitching or how your barista fucked up your coffee order, as they always do. Right now I’m the only thing on your mind. Survival, maybe. But, looking at you.. I highly doubt that’s what’s going on in that pretty head of yours at this point.Â
You’re probably.. busy with very different thoughts at the moment, aren’t you, Darling?
I have to admit, I’m taking a liking to you. Not very villainous of me, but I doubt you mind, do you? You look kind of into it.Â
…
I’ll take that as a yes, my little toy.
But I really shouldn’t be getting side-tracked right now. We’ll have all the time in the world later.
…Mhm. Any amount of time we want. Getting to spend it in any way we like.Â
Hmm, I can think of a thing or two I’d want to do to you. And I think you have your ideas too, don’t you?Â
[chuckle]Â
Such a naughty little hostage. My naughty little hostage.Â
I’m not really used to hostages acting like this but.. well, normal is boring. And you, honey, are far from boring.Â
Let’s make a deal. If your act during the mission is satisfying we’ll go back to my place after and I’ll reward you for your efforts. Sound good? Of course it does. I’m a villain after all, not a capitalist. Credit where credit is due. And if it helps motivate you for your grand performance, even better. [chuckle]
[longer pause. maybe some footstep sfx indicating the villain being restless]
I fucking hate waiting. Never been my strong suit. Think I should just blow the mission and have you right here and now? I bet you’d like that, wouldn’t you.Â
… you’re not an incubus, are you? ‘Cause you’re driving me crazy right about now-
[slightly longer pause, like the villain is thinking]
Oh, yeah; I suppose I did say I’d tell you about the plan and you have been behaving quite well up ‘til now.Â
Alright. So:Â
Us two sexy bastards are going to be a distraction to the heroes while an.. ‘acquaintance’ of mine is gonna fuck some shit up. Reliable kid, but about as sharp as a marble. I’m a bit worried he’s gonna blow himself up instead of the vault door.Â
[pause]
I’m not worried about him, dollface. I’m worried about the money.
Of course. What else did you expect of a villain?Â
I don’t work for free, sugar, though I might make an exception for you if you keep looking at me with those eyes.Â
But beware. [lean in] I might just have to do something about it before I completely lose my mind over you.Â
But I bet you’d like it if I lost control, wouldn’t you? Oh, all the fun things I could do to you… I’m sure you’d enjoy it just as much as I would, Darling.Â
I’d make sure of it.
Ripping off your clothes, trailing my fingers down your spine and watching you shiver with every sensitive spot I hit. Or how about I put my hand .. right.. here.Â
[sharp inhale] Fuck, that gasp was hot-
Looks like I’m not the only one getting all riled up by this-
You dirty bad little influence, you. Driving me crazy at work like this… [getting closer, whispered/mumbled] What am I going to do with you?Â
[semi-short pause]
Hm… that does sound quite good… Naughty Kitten, you. [chuckle]
[sfx: phone rings - if you can maybe do a cool ringtone but that’s not necessary]
Looks like we’re up. Give me a taste of your best screaming, will you?
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